FF- Pure love amidst Pristine mountains (NOTE) page-17 - Page 5

Originally posted by: JaySee

Very nice update.
Loved the way you are building up the plots. Both Naina and Sameer are so cute. Unknowingly their closeness is increasing. Loved the responses of Preethi. Perfect bodyguard for Naina.
Pls update the next part soon.

Sorry dear for the late review. I was bit busy. Some issue with forum I guess I'm not able to like the update. But the update was good.

Originally posted by: vidrev

Sorry dear for the late review. I was bit busy. Some issue with forum I guess I'm not able to like the update. But the update was good.

The most important thing I like is naina and sameer became friends. They at least started talking. Love their bond. They are made for each other. Happy to hear that they are going for the tour.

Not even able to place any emojis. Loved it. Keep up your efforts dear friend.

From now onwards I will be giving short updates every alternate days. Next update will be on Wednesday coz tomorrow I will write an OS

PART-4

Preeti was Naina's younger sister but she had been Naina's foster mother since childhood. Both were each other's pillar of strength when they were together, they were invincible. Their bond was unbreakable. Naina and preeti were baking cookies for Naina's trip

Preeti- Tu wahan kitne maze kregi behen aur main yahan padhai. Kash main bhi tere sath chal pati.

Naina- Maze honge kin ahi pata nahi, but I will definitely miss you pagli.

Preeti- Miss kyu? Tu na wahan khub enjoy karna aur daily raat me call karke mujhe sab kuch btana.

Naina- Haan wo to karungi hi. Preeti kyu na next year hmlog mummy papa ke sath tour pec hale?

Preeti- Nahi yaar mujhe papa ke sath tour pe nahi jana. Mummy Papa sirf hamein chaar dhaam ki yatra pe le ja skte hai aur uske bad un mandiro ka gyan dege bas ya pphir Haridwar me le ja ke hm sabhi ko meditation krne ko kahenge. Mujhe na sirf tere sath jana hai ya phr solo trip pe jana aur yesb nahi to direct honeymoon pe jaungi main.

Naina- Haan aur honeymoon pe bhi tu mujhe le jayegi.

Preeti- Haan Bilkul( both burst in a fit of laughter) Waise tu TataNagar junction jayegi kaise? Train to subah 5baje ki hai na.

Naina-Chali jaungi, don't worry

Preeti-Chali jaungi matlb? Kaise chali jayegi? Us din ka incident itni jaldi bhul gayi? Aur itni subah yaha autowala milega nahi tujhe aur teri is Jamshedpur mein ola uber kuch hai nahi. Ek kaam kart u Sameer ko bol

Naina- Sameeer? Na baba na. Use kaise presan kr skti hu main. Ho skta h uski family wale use chhodne aa rahe ho. Nahi tu na koi dusra idea soch.

Preeti- Apna phone de mujhe. Tu nahi bol sakti na main hi bol deti hun. Sweetheart you have no other option.

Naina- Tu rehne de main call karti hun. (She calls Sameer, This will be their first voice call)

Naina- Sameer, Naina bol rahi hun.

Sameer- Naina, tum (shocked). Tumne kaise call kiya? I mean koi kaam tha kya?

Naina- Haan wo main puch rahi thi ki.. kya tum..wo kya main.. mujhe bhi...mera matlab hai ki.. (preeti snatches the phone from Naina saying dumbo tujhse nahi hoga)

Preeti- Hi Sameer, I am Naina's sister Preeti. Actually Naina has no means to reach the station, You know na about the transportation here that too soo early in the morning, So could you please pick up Naina from here?

Sameer- That's completely all right Preeti, I will be there at 4:00am. It was nice talking to you.

Preeti-Thank you Sameer. You are nice guy.

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I know it's short as I said I will be giving short updates regularly.

I hope you will like

Nice update..ab maza aayega jaldi see trip start kardo Aur ab se full samaina moments do maza aajayega please only samina moments...Aur trip

Originally posted by: Rahul126545

Nice update..ab maza aayega jaldi see trip start kardo Aur ab se full samaina moments do maza aajayega please only samina moments...Aur trip

Originally posted by: Prizi

loved it

Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful! ⭐️! Loved it.. Sameer is such a chivalrous man.. He readily agreed to Preeti's request. . And Preeti is So outspoken . She didn't hesitate even a bit to talk to a stranger and request him to pick her sister . She is caring too.. I hope the cookies they have made together would make an entry on the trip😆. The char dham yatra part was hilarious. . Good job.👏 Update soon .

Nice update Suma.
I love Preethi's character. She is a sister, a friend and a rock solid support for Naina. She is ready to fight with anyone or to go to any extend for Naina and always genuinely wish best for her.
Now Sameer is also slowly becoming like that. Helping her, protecting her and supporting her in every possible way.
Eagerly waiting to see what all incidents are waiting for them in their trek. Pls update soon.