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Posted: 6 years ago
#51
Even though it is short. It was not nice. Preethi talking to sameer for the first time. was nice. Plz update long one next time.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: vidrev

Even though it is short. It was not nice. Preethi talking to sameer for the first time. was nice. Plz update long one next time.


Not nice?😭
I am very alsi. I dont like writing long updates. but i will try to do so or give short updates on regular intervals

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Posted: 6 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Princesswarrior

Wonderful! Absolutely wonderful! ⭐️! Loved it.. Sameer is such a chivalrous man.. He readily agreed to Preeti's request. . And Preeti is So outspoken . She didn't hesitate even a bit to talk to a stranger and request him to pick her sister . She is caring too.. I hope the cookies they have made together would make an entry on the trip😆. The char dham yatra part was hilarious. . Good job.👏 Update soon .

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Inayat


Thank you dear Inayat
Sure cookies are part of the story.
I am updating it now. Thank you for appreciating this one. I am sure you would like the next part too.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: JaySee

Nice update Suma.
I love Preethi's character. She is a sister, a friend and a rock solid support for Naina. She is ready to fight with anyone or to go to any extend for Naina and always genuinely wish best for her.
Now Sameer is also slowly becoming like that. Helping her, protecting her and supporting her in every possible way.
Eagerly waiting to see what all incidents are waiting for them in their trek. Pls update soon.


Hii dear, My name is suman
Sisterly bond is always amazing. From now the story will develop the bond between Sameer and Naina.
Thank you for ur words of appreciation.😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#56

PART-5

Preeti checked if Naina had done all the packings properly or not. Preeti gave her a hot water bottle to protect her from Jukam. She also filled the bottle with hot coffee to have in the train.Naina is prone to cold and catches it very easily. Preeti gave her all the necessary guidelines like a Saasu maata. Naina took a quick shower and was getting ready to go when Sameer reached Naina's apartment and called her:

Sameer- Naina are you ready? We are quite late.

Naina- Haan Sameer, tum aa gaye itni jaldi,...haaan waise time bhi ho hi gaya hai. Main na bas abhi aayi niche. ( Naina did not get the time to blow dry hair, She was trying to tie up her wet hair when Preeti gave her a stern look and said pagal hai kya tu, bimar ho jayegi pata nahi kaise rahegi tu waha itne din, meri daant k bina tujhe kuch samajh nahi aata. Naina obliged and left them open not because she could fall ill but unknowingly she did it to impress Sameer) The doorbell rang, Sameer was there at the door. Naina opened it, she did not expect him to come there.

Sameer- (mesmerized by Naina's unadulterated beauty, Naina had no speck of a makeup or even a beauty cream, she was a pure creation of God. This was the first time he had seen Naina in open hair, his eyesfail on a drop of hair which was flowing smoothly down through her tresses. He came out of the daze when that drop softly landed on her, making the cloth above her collar bone stick to it. Sameer realized what he was doing and was now disturbed if Naina would judge him for that. Sameer jerked off the whirlpool of thoughts which were completely strange for him.)

Actually mujhe laga ki bahot sara saman hoga so I just came to take down the bags

Naina- That's really nice of you Sameer. (Preeti introduced herself to Sameer) Naina gave a bag to Sameer which he carried down. Naina and Preeti followed him after recounting if they had packed all the required things or not.)

Sameer was setting the bags when he saw Naina coming. Once again his mind was blown. It was now that he noticed that she was not wearing her regular hanging shirt and the baggy jeans. Naina was wearing a lime green kurta. She looked ethereal in that dress. Naina was always beautiful to Sameer but he had never imagined Naina this way. Sameer once again twitched his thoughts, taking the other bags from Naina and Preeti. Preeti- main bhi chalti hun tujhe station.

Naina- Nahin tu aram kar, soyi nahi hai tu thik se phr tujhe wapas bhi to jana hai. Thak jayegi tu. Main tujhe station pahuch k call karti hun

Preeti- Thik hai yaar. Sameer please tum iska dhyan rakhna ye na bilkul jhalli aur pagal ladki hai kabhi bhi kuch bhi kar skti hai. So please take care of her.

Sameer-(Smilingly) Don't worry Preeti, jiski behen aisi ho use kuch nahi ho skta.

Preeti- Thank you Sameer.. Tum dono apna dhyan rakhna aur khub enjoy krna. I hope it will give you memories for a lifetime.

Naina and Preeti hugged each other bidding good bye. Naina sat at the backseat. Sameer was about to sit in the front seat when:

Naina- Sameer tum yahin baitho na. Wo kya hai na mujhe akele baithna acha nahi lgta. I need somebody to talk to. ( Sameer obliged)

The engine fired and took it's way. Naina waved to Preeti and Preeti waved back and wished best of luck to both of them.

I HOPE YOU LIKE IT. I LOVE READING UR COMMENTS

Edited by suma_yudkbh - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#57
Fantastic one dear...⭐️ It had so much of samiana 😃.. So sameer was bewitched by her beauty. Really liked that scene and sameer and preeti's convo👏.. So they are sitting together on the back seat of the car.😆. Waiting for some lala romance..😉
Ps: please could you add some funny convo between naina-sameer-driver in the next part😉. It would be interesting to read..
Pss: thank you for being so regular in updates. But could you give longer updates , even if it means you updating just twice a week.?? Because I am always at the edge Of my seat after reading your update, wanting the next one immediately. 😆😳
Psss: these are just requests, I won't mind if you don't follow them.. So don't worry. 😉😛
Regards
Inayat
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Posted: 6 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Princesswarrior

Fantastic one dear... ⭐️ It had so much of samiana 😃.. So sameer was bewitched by her beauty. Really liked that scene and sameer and preeti's convo👏.. So they are sitting together on the back seat of the car.😆. Waiting for some lala romance..😉

Ps: please could you add some funny convo between naina-sameer-driver in the next part😉. It would be interesting to read..
Pss: thank you for being so regular in updates. But could you give longer updates , even if it means you updating just twice a week.?? Because I am always at the edge Of my seat after reading your update, wanting the next one immediately. 😆😳
Psss: these are just requests, I won't mind if you don't follow them.. So don't worry. 😉😛
Regards
Inayat


Thank you inayat.
Even I do not how the car scene is going to be
Sorry dear I am not good at comedy but I will try.
And I will try posting long updates😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#59
Thank you dear😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#60
Thank you 😊 very much

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