FF- Pure love amidst Pristine mountains (NOTE) page-17 - Page 9

Originally posted by: JaySee

Nice update Suma. I loved Naina's character. She got 1001 worries and problems but is ready to forget and live the moment fully. Also all ready to bring brightness in the life of those near and dear to to her. Sameer on the other hand is a typical example of those men who are struck with family responsibilities. Whether they are sleeping or awake they will be thinking of the well being of their family. Mundit are just jaan here also.
Loved the way how your are developing the story. Pls continue soon.

Originally posted by: suma_yudkbh

Hi suman ! How are you doing? This was a fantastic update. 👏 I just loved it. I am quoting it because I loved way too many things in this one.. .😳

PART-7

Sameer- Kya hua Naina? Any problem?

Naina- Nahi kuch nahi (Girls are used to such creepy messages and so was Naina and when gender parity is so pathetic You are like Ek Anaar Sau bimaar) To Munna Pandit batao are you liking your job or you have some other plans?

What you wrote in brackets is 101% true.👏 . But girls should change their mentality and seek help if they feel something is wrong. It doesn't make them weak but shows them as strong and bold. .

Pandit- Hamara to koi plan nahi ma'am. Main aur Munna bachpan ke dost hai..sath padhai ki..sath college aur job bhi ab yahin sath rehna hai kahin nahi jana..

Naina-That's so good and I am Naina not Ma'am.. (giving them a mastarni look) Inhe dekho.. inhe tum sir bulao.. He is perfectly that kind of person..all the time kaam kaam kaam.. pata hai abhi bhi inke dimaag me kya chal raha hoga?.. ye janaab soch rahe hoge ki kahin in kuch dinon me inki market value na gir jaye.. inke market shares jamin pe na aa jaye.. aur to aur kahin inke company hi na band ho jaye.. dekho Munna Pandit inke gambhir chehre ko dekhkar tumhe aisa nahi lagta.. Inka bas chale to Tata steel ka bhi saara kaam ye akele hi kar de.. (Naina was trying to tease Sameer to open him up with them and forget all the worries)

This one brought a smile on my face as soon as I read it.. 😊 Naina kitne ache se samajhne lagi hai sameer ko.. Naina is so good as she is trying to make sameer relax. Just loved this bit.

Sameer- Tum jaisa samajhti ho waisa kuch nahin hai...

Ohhh! Sameer baba ko bura laga ki naina unhe Chidha Rahi hai.😆 .. How affected he is because of her.. 😃

Naina- To kaisa hai Sameer? Almost 36hours ki journey hai.. aur uske baad ek exciting trip.. tum kya aise hi rahoge.. We are here for break. It's an escape from our monotonous world.. Tumhe na Preeti ki jarurat hai.. wo hoti to tumhe ache se samjhati .. open up Sameer.. Just chill and enjoy.. Try to make new friends.. That's what we are here for..

Sameer- Naina abhi to journey shuru hui hai..itni jaldi mujhe judge nahi karo.. dekhna even I will relish this trip..

Sameer baba ko faraq padtha hai ki naina is wrongly judging him.😉 . That's so sweet.. I wish he relishes not only this trip but alot more😉.. (like kisses and hugs😳-sorry dirty mind)😛

Naina- That's what I am saying Sameer. We have just 15 days. You should not waste even a minute,.. throw away all your tensions and worries Sameer. You should not do this to yourself.. Try to grab each moment so that you do not repent in future.. I am saying this now Because I want you to live each second fully..Life is too short to waste it on petty silly concerns..

Naina ko toh philosper hona chahiye.. 😆

Sameer- Allright Madam I will do as you please. I will try my best.

Haye this was so cute. Bilkul bf-gf feeling aa Rahi hai.. 😳

Naina- hey don't call me madam and I am sorry if I went too far. ( Mundit were observing them all through)

She apologized for such a small thing. She is so concerned for him..

Munna- (after a deep thought) Aap dono girlfriend-boyfriend ho kya? Wo kya hai na aap dono ki chemistry dekh kar aisa laga..

Munna-pandit ne toh mere muh ki baat cheen li.. 😉

Naina-Hihihaihiahia..(Naina laughed holding her tummy).. Girlfriend- boyfriend.. wo bhi hum dono? Hum dono abhi thik se friends ban jaye kaafi rahega .

(Sameer was smiling.. he was tickled by the use of the words girlfriend-boyfriend for them)

Sorry but rather than samaina, I was imagining ashdeep here. 😆😉😳 Just imagine ashi laughing like that and Randeep reacting to it in this way. . But BTW there reaction was valid here..

Chai lelo chai.. nimbu chai..chai lelo.. (twelve year kid was selling tea)

Naina- Mujhe chai peeni hai

Munna- Abhi to hum sabne coffee li thi na..

Sameer- Beta 4 jagah chai dena(Sameer paid the child) Le lete hai na chhota bacha hai..

Haye this was so beautiful and cute.. ⭐️

Naina- haan waise bhi train me jo kuch bhi bechne aate hain na main sab khati hun..

Pandit- Really???

Munna- They are not so hygienic you know na?

Naina- haan lekin mujhe to kabhi kuch nahi hua..

Sameer- Munna Pandit tumhe nahi pata.. Naina Devi hain ye..

Naina Devi! ! I'm literally rofling right now.🤣 This one was hilarious..

Munna Pandit and Sameer all of them burst in a fit of laughter..

Naina- Chup karo tum sab.. tum dono juniors mera Mazak uda rahe ho.. tum madam bulaoge mujhe.. aur Sameer tum? Tum to aise nahi the..

So naina is hurt by sameer teasing her.😉 Impressive⭐️. Naina is falling for him hard..

Sameer- Tumhi ne to kaha enjoy karna.

Bande ki baat toh sahi hai.. 😆

.(Naina smiled but her smile disappeared when she read the new flashing message on her phone Us Sameer aur un dono langoor k sath maza aa rha hai tujhe.. mere paas aa asli maza deta hun.. Naina did not want to ruin the journey hence she blocked that number)

I know sameer is gonna handle him well but if I find him someday I'll shoot him dead.. 😡

Sameer- Koi problem hai kya Naina?

Naina- nahi kuch nahi.. unknown number se message hai..maine block kar diya don't worry.

Sameer- True caller mein nahi dikha raha?

Possessive sameer ki entry hone wali hai(i think)

Naina- Nahin.. Sameer don't worry let it go please. ab mujhe bhukh lag rahi hai.. Aunty ne packing ki hai na unhone jarur kuch diya hoga khane k liye.. do na please.. Main naste k liye kuch nahi laayi hun.. aur Munna Pandit tum dono bhi to lekar aaye hoge na. Main plate lekar aayi hun usi mein kha lege hum sab.

Iss story mein toh naina sameer se bhi badi bhukkad Nikli..😆

(All of them had their breakfast together from the same plate.. They were bonding and becoming friends.)

Sameer- Tumhe khana bahot pasand hai na?

Naina- Haan. I love eating.. I can't live without tasty food and my family.

Sameer- Haan wo to dikhta hai..(teasingly..he implied her slight extra weight)

Their sweet little banters are so cute.. ⭐️

Naina- Naina stuck out her tongue like a kid and tried to tease him back.

Sameer- Naina you sing really nice..us din bus mein aur aaj car mein.. TRuly you have a very sweet voice.

Ohh he complimented her..

Naina- Well, I know that. Acha ye batao what are your hobbies?

Sameer- I don't have time for hobbies.

Naina- Really? Are you for real? No time for hobby(imitating Sameer) Phir bhi kuch to tumhe pasand hoga na?

Same thoughts as naina here.. Matlab hobbies ke bina agar koi zinda Ho sakta hai toh Woh sirf humara sameer hai.. 🤢😉

Sameer- reading books

Such a bore.. 🤢

Naina- Same pinch Sameer. I am a bibliophile you know..other than reading books I love cooking and eating.. I am also interested in gardening and fiction reading..

Chalo kahin toh thinking milti hai.. 😉😆

Sameer- yesab tum hmesa karti ho?

Naina- Haan cooking and eating are staple.. and because these days I am preparing for competitive exams I do not get time for the rest.

Sameer- How do manage to be so vibrant with job ..studies ..cooking.. It's not easy to manage .. Even if one manages.. How do you stay so cheerfull.. I am not able to manage my life.. I am always lost in the thoughts of work even when I am sleeping..

Naina- Sameer mujhe lagta hai ki mere paas na jada dimag nahi hai to main apne brain ko jada stress nahi deti.. When I am at job all I think about is of my job.. When I study I never focus on anything but my books..Just like now when I am on a holiday I would only holiday.. What gives me strength for everything is my smile.. whatever might be the situation.. I do not loose my calm and tell myself this will also pass..

naina ne galat profession choose karliya. She should have been a philosopher.. I mean this paragraph was so good. You did an amazing job here👏. Well done. Ab se main bhi yahi sochungi ki mere pass kam Dimag hai.. 😆

Sameer- I wish I could be like you.

Naina- don't worry.. I will teach you.. ab tum meri sangat me ho na..bas dekhte jao..

Pandit- Hello Sir Madam..hum dono bhi hain yahan..aap dono would be friends ne to apna group hi bna liya hai aur hamein ignore kar rahe hain..

main bhi bhool gayi thi ki Mundit bhi yahan the. .😆

Sameer- Aisa nahi hai Pandit.. acha ye batao koi plan hai kin ahi tum dono ke paas ..time paas kaise karna hai..

Munna- Are Bhai yahi to sunna tha hamein.. Sara jugaad hai hamare paas.. aap bolo kya karna hai..Hamare paas cards hain. Chess hail udo hai..carrom board hai phone me.. gaano ki list hai antakshari khelne k liye..

jugaad ne Inn dono ko yahan bhi NAHI choda.😉

Naina- Chalo ludo khelte hain..

Munna- kar di na aapne wahi wali baat.. hamein cards khelna chahiye.

Sameer- Haan..munna sahi keh raha hai..

Naina- hmm lekin mujhe nahi aata kaise khelna hai..

Sameer- Hum hain na.. Sikha dege tumhe..

(they kept playing for few hours.. gradually Naina learnt the game.. Slowly Sameer was opening..and Munna Pandit were bonding with them

did naina win? ?

Sameer- kya baat hai 3:00 baj gaye aur Miss petu Naina ko bhukh nahi lagi ab tak..

sameer ki ye Chinta thi?? 😆Kitna observe karta hai Woh usse.

Naina- actually kya hai na bhukh to lagi hai lekin Munna Pandit ki company me itna enjoy kar rahi hun ki bhukh k bare mein bhul gayi..

Sameer- Haan main to boring hun na Munna Pandit hi tumhare dost hain (making baby face)

haye bichara hurt Ho gaya😃

Naina- waah tumhe to sab pata hai

This was hilarious.😆.

.. tum bhi mere dost ho samjhe.. Next stoppage Bilaspur junction hai.. waha se kuch khane ka le lege..

naina was comforting him.. .😊

Sameer- No need to eat station's crappy food..

so caring..

Munna- haan haan Sameer apna tiffin box nikalo.. jarur aunty ne kuch acha pack kiya hoga..

Pandit- Munna tub hi nikal tere bag se daal puri ki khushbu aa rahi hai.. Maine aunty ko call kar k kaha tha mere liye bhi bnane..

inn sabki dosti humesha salamat rahe. .

Naina- lekin Sameer aunty ne to sirf tumhare liye pack kiya hoga na..main kha lungi to phir tum kya khaoge..

Sameer- Don't worry meri mummy ne mere friends k liye bhi pack kiya hoga.. (read friends as Naina)

agle kuch parts mein tumhe friends ki jagah girlfriend likhna padega..😉

Naina- thik hai lekin abhi samose aur pakode wala ayega to mujhe wo bhi khana hai bas..

foodie naina

Sameer- Ok lekin thoda sa khana bas.. wosab kha k tabiyat bigad sakti hai..

so loving..

All of them shared food..Naina and Sameer served the food.. Sameer was observing how Naina was eating and sometimes she was using both her hands to eat.. Sameer wondered how can someone be so untouched by the worldly norms..

he observes her too much.. But I'm loving it..

Naina- Aunty khana bahot tasty bnati hain.. mujhe sikhna hai unse

Sameer- unki tarah khana kabhi nahi bna sakti tum..

haan Haan Bilkul . Saas apni bahu ko toh sikaegi na?? Aur tab sameer naina ko itni taareef karega ki she'll be red as a tomato because of blushing..

Naina- acha aisi baat hai.. to phir Munna Pandit ye kha k batao ki kaisa bana hai..(Naina took out a box of gulab jamuns that she had made herself.. Munna Pandit could not stop appreciating it's taste.. but Sameer just kept smiling) Kuch bolo na Sameer kaisa laga

Sameer- Nahi bataunga..(and he laughed)

this was so cute..

Naina- Ok nahi batao (sticking her tongue out) box do mujhe main sab dho kar aati hun wash basin se..

Sameer- Main bhi chalta hun

Naina- Nahin jarurat nahin hai..

(When she was done and was coming back the train was arriving the next station. Passengers had gotten off their seats.. It was difficult to get pass through them.. Naina was making her way back to her seat when Naina felt someone's hand through the length of her spine. She absolutely knew that it was intentional. She turned immediately to register who did it but to her dismay it was impossible to know. The assaulter either disappeared or was in disguise in front of her. Naina was all teary yet she tried to compose herself.. She felt helpless.. She blamed herself for it..Why wasn't I carefull enough.. Why it has to be me all the time.. Did I drop any such hint? All sorts of negativity engulfed her.. She was horrified by the incident and wanted to bury her face and hide.. Naina was shivering when she reached her place)..

a true reflection of our society.. Rather than the girl finding ways to seek justice or punishing the assaulters ,she finds mistakes in her actions 😭😡which is very wrong. . And if by chance she is a strong headed woman who thinks that it was the assaulters fault, the society makes her look like the one at fault, blaming her for the assault..😡 We want the change. And for That we need to change..

Sameer- Naina kya hua tumhe? Bolo kya hua

Naina-kuch nahi

Sameer- Naina please bolo kya hua..

Munna-Pandit- Please btaiye kya hua..

Sameer- Naina calm down first..(He gave her water to drink) Munna Pandit abhi kuch nahi bolo Naina ko..She will tell us everything once she is at peace..

he is so understanding

Naina- Sameer while I was coming back.. somebody touched my back as if he would scratch it.. It was very rough and he even pinched me at my waist.. It was just for a moment.. but it was horrifying.. I am scared.. I want to go back home..

she is getting comfortable with them.. 😃 You go girl.👏 . Well done. - this was for naina and you too for you included such a thing in your story to spread awareness..

Sameer- (held her hand and rubbed them to calm her racing nerves) Naina please don't worry .. I am with you.. kuch nahi hoga tumhe.. I will find out who that sociopath is.. He will have to pay for this..

possesive sameer ki entry. 😆

Naina- Pata nahi kya ho raha hai Sameer.. Av to ye journey shuru hui hai.. pehle wo obscene messages aur ab ye..

Sameer-Tum us message karne wale ko ignore kar rahi thi na.. It might be the same person who did it..

Naina- yes..may be.. as per the messages he is somewhere around us.. he is watching us..

Sameer- What? (angrily) tumhe pata tha ki wo yahin hai aur tumne use ignore kiya.. How can you do this? Show me those messages.. ( Sameer read them and was red with rage and clenched his fingers in a tight fist..Munna & Pandit also read it) Yeh jo bhi hai.. he is part of our trek group.. He is not a stranger.. We just need to find out who is that wretch.. who do you think can do this?

possesive sameer in action.. 😆

Naina- Pata nahi Sameer main to kisi se baat bhi nahi karti.. aur hamare group me se koi aisa kare main soch bhi nahi sakti..

Sameer- Kya wo Karthik ho sakta hai? I have observed that you both have a bad equation and few days back I heard someone talking about your bitter relation with him..

bahut tez chalta hai sameer ka dimmag.. He observes her alot and that proved beneficial here. 😆😉

Naina- hmm.. may be.. ho sakta hai.. But I don't think he would stoop so low..

Sameer- This is Karthik for sure.. Now all we need is to prove his crime.

Munna-Pandit- WE are with you.. We won't spare him..

jab hanuman yahan hai toh fiqar Kis baat ki?? 😉

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Originally posted by: Prizi

lovely update dear

Originally posted by: Rahul126545

Samaina convo was super cute..loved it...please update soon

Originally posted by: Kkadss

Interesting story

Pls continue

Originally posted by: Princesswarrior

An awesome update👏⭐️. Thanks for giving such a long update. I am in awe of your writing

You are improving day by day. My replies in red.. Waise kya woh creep sachme kartik hai?? Well written . Update soon

ps:(forgot to write earlier) : you are doing a great job here sweetie .. I don't know how many times you read and reread your updates because I don't find any typos in them. Hatsoff to you girl for it. . 👏

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Inayat