If I leave it for later, I probably won't comment so I am gonna comment abhi 😆
Your titles are the best always but how you linked it with a song and shooting star was lovely! ❤️ I could immediately recognize the song coz I have been imagining it on Sameer whenever I listen to it 😛
The whole twist in the tale with Naina and Sameer meeting in school that day itself, loved your direction 😳
The way they both wanted to meet each other without even looking at each other was awesome. And finally they met with the famous twirl wow
The whole conversation that followed was outstanding 👏 Naina Aggarwal wasn't telling her name at first 😆 But then Sameer called her Akdu and Badtameez making her take offence 😉 Naina ki self respect can make her a lioness and you did show that not only to us but also to Sameer 😳 Be it when she asked him to say sorry or when she proudly defended her school 😊 And Sameer said Sorry! Wow , never anticipated that 😃 Also loved how everytime he felt sad because of his mom or his so called friends Naina diverted him. Babiess
The way he realized how innocent she is asking the meaning to that song was my favourite moment along with the "wish" of course. 😛 He thinking how any other guy would have taken it as a signal or thought she was flirting with him! Frankly when I read you'd written an OS on this, I thought the same reaction out of Sameer but expect you to surprise us ❤️ He understood and asked her to question this to her future lover and he didn't like it. Best part of the story, aag dono taraf barabar lagi thi 😉😆
And both of them restless and missing each other was awww
Then they met again and Naina didn't get to know but she wished for him! OMG! ⭐️ Naina wished for her star. ;)
That scene was so nicely written, felt it happening in front of my eyes <3
And Sameer Maheshwari did fulfill her wish by coming to the school and his eyes searched only for his Naina and other girls didn't exist! ☺️
The ending where he told her he knew she had wished for him ,feels attack..🤗
But major attack happened when he asked her when would she like to know the meaning of the song! I was officially dead here ❤️
Loved it Mou! 🤗 You light up someone's day by writing! You are gifted. You should make a show really.. 😉
Love you! ⭐️👏
P. S. And of course special mention to Shreya for this brilliant idea 😳
Edited by A.Green - 6 years ago
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