SamAina OS: Broken Star - Deleted - Page 3

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Posted: 6 years ago
#21
Mou, what a beautiful way of taking a different path for the story. Thanks a lot for this.
Went back to those school day innocence of Naina and Sameer. Glad that in this story Sameer also realized his feelings on the first day itself. He also felt that soul connection with her. Salute your imagination and positivity that you are bringing in your stories.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#22
This is so beautiful! Dil le lo!
I'll have to read this one more time...'cause I can't get over it!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#23
what a beautifuly written os..u took us back to the olden golden times...i could visualise the sotry with wonderful clarity ! Hope you are healing well ! Cant wait for more !!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#24
omg this was just Amazing, mesmerizing.. I could picture them while reading and I was smiling the entire time. It brought me back to golden school days (my school days as wells as our shows school days)!!😳 You are such a gifted writer. 👏❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#25
Di, what have you done?

When i read the title i was intrigued on what's in store and then when i clicked and read the note above the one shot, i was curious to know how the incident was connected to a broken star, whoa! this was beautiful, so deep and such an angle out of that situation was never imagined, at least by me. a big thank you for writing this one and fulfilling that wish of mine, you are really a magician! 😳

The song, beech like the tree! 😃

I loved this one for one more reason as the one shot was situated during the school times, earlier ones where naina agarwal was the synonym for innocense and purity and sameer was the synonym for mischievous and charming.

the series of events was skillfully tweaked by you yet the essence was lost, not even one bit, i also loved the fact that you didn't change the backgrounds at all, just the interactions and how the twirl came into the picture. ❤️

The interplay of all the incidents, some loops closed in the show and some not but all the open ends were put into a knot by you and i couldn't be more grateful. 🤗

My favourite part was how you showed the thought processes of both naina and sameer- though sameer's made way for a paradise of my own and you know what? Now when i watch those episodes again, this OS would be in the back of my mind and now i can imagine this exact thoughts associated with the show sameer.

that lack of attentions brought annoyance within him and he was intrigued by the girl with to pig tails who he found cute strangely, the emotions coursing through him were unknown yet he found her familiar as he had known her his whole life.

The hopscotch scene was simply lovely and the chase, wow!! and the conversation left me speechless, whoa, you are set to kill us. Akdu and badtameez and your naina is always the woman with self respect, i adore it!
and every time sameer's eyes filled with sadness, naina trying to divert the topic away from the subject of his dejection had my heart...❤️

Hindi mein bolona was there too, you aced it with this OS! ⭐️😳

i had expected the reaction of protectiveness and you gave that, what if naina would have asked some other boy the meaning of the song and then his answer, haaye and the his heart burned, for some known and unknown reasons!!!

the wish and the shooting star, can i say i loved all of it and i am unable to choose my favourite instance...yeh kaisa dharamsankat! 😆
the tap water place, it seems more special..we have always got the best scenes there and that scene just takes place in that list, fiction or not.

I have a lot to say but time crunch. So i am stopping now but loved every bit of it...❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#26
Mou Mou Mou
Dear I have read almost all stories of urs . Sb itni fab hoti h bit ye wali iska kuch alag hi jadu tha. I m still smiling. M like ye khtm kyu ho gyi abi se. Plz do continue. M re reading it again. I hv no words to give reviews. It's YOUR BEST STORY till date. Love u lots. Love u so much.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#27
This was love
Mou such a beautiful shot it was
Hayeee mera toh dil aagaya
School days samaina
Lag raha tha jaise sab kuch rewind ho raha hai
Tum ne story ko new angle se start kiya jo bhut hi khubsurat tha
I totally fall in love with it
Even words are not enough to explain this beautiful piece of art of yours ..
Hayeee can I please get part two ..
Khatam kyun kiya .. Please isko continue karo .. Please

And thankyou so so so much for the pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
#28
Absolutely no words. Just that one word of wish to the shooting star "Sameer is the complete essence of their convo & ur story
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Posted: 6 years ago
#29
It's almost 2am and I am reading this and grinning..I just could not resist and had to read it today itself and I am so glad I did..after a crazy day this was a blessing!
That is the kind of affect your stories have on me 😊
Thank you for another wonderful OS..please keep writing and keep blessing us xx
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Posted: 6 years ago
#30
Oh god...how you get such ideas...I could just imagine each and every scene...oh God just loved it to core...God has really blessed you with this skill of writing...Keep writing on our Samaina...

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