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Posted: 6 years ago
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It took me back to school days... Mou u create a different magic whenever u write something ... U described their famous twirl so accurately... Reading krte time bhi TV wale feels aarhe they... U r just love and so is your work ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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you have magic...whenever I read ur writings it just make my day...and I'm really sorry that I am not able to comment on ur updates...bt I love ur stories...u r one of my favorite...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Mou, this is going to be not a very thought out reply since I have time crunch but nonetheless this story deserves every bit of appreciation.
I am simply awestruck at your caliber as a writer and story teller. Never would I have imagined there could be such a wonderful twist to Aag barasti hai sawan tale. During the initial phase of the show I was a bit disappointed with the makers for showing Naina too smitten with Sammy boy and he being on the brink of arrogant behavior all the while. Even now they have made a complete Majnu out of Sam post the bet phase which is again a bit OTT😆 I agree the theme is Naina's love changing Sam but I thought they could have balanced both characters better. Your story does exactly that. The way both of them responded to each other during their first meet was ❤️ Naina's frankness with Sam and his soft behavior coupled with the sadness that resides within him took this story to another level.

Honestly this OS could be incorporated in a 90s Yashraj movie, what a beauty👏 The whole shooting stars scene has my heart, remembered one of my fav songs " Airplanes!" Just when Sam was fighting his feelings God sent him his Naina with an answer.
If I had to award the best dialogue ever it would be this "Naina suno... woh gaane ka matlab kab samjhau?". Oh dear god when has a man proposed, confessed his love, and rights so smoothly...what a master stroke😳

Hope we all get to see a broken star in our lives...after all everyone could use a wish!

P.S. Gotta thank Mayashika for giving you this brilliant idea!
Edited by NikiAries - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34
wow lovely. i am fan of ur writing
thanks for update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35
Such a beautiful OS. Loved it.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
A lovely twist to Sameer and Naina's first iconic twirl😳
It was very cute how one moment they're arguing and the next moment, trying to indirectly heal each other

She actually asked him the meaning of aag barasti hai saawan mein paani ka hai naam☺️

Both Sameer and Naina couldn't stop thinking about each other.. Naina atleast realised she loves him, while Sameer was clueless of his own feelings😆

I died of feels n happiness when she wished for him😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Mou! This is the best ever written piece on their school life ever! How cleverly you took instances from the initial episodes and moulded the circumstances and weaved a new story around, but with the same characters!
I thoroughly enjoyed it- Sameer's hindi me bolo na, sanskrit ka shlok, the law garden meeting, Dev Anand (my fav) ka song and the references to the broken star, the famous toh and the water tap, mil gaya jawab! And the aag barasti hai saawan mein! Hayeee! I absolutely loved it!
This is one piece I can read over n over again!
Awesome!!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
You just took away my heart.
Freaking beautiful.
Got all the feels.
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
Another beautiful story Mou, though I don't feel connected to stories related to tracks in show but here is a different story. I can take it as a different story of Samaina altogethed. You have described it so nicely with the same dialogues, looks like you have watched it again or you have a very sharp memory. 😉 School days ki yaaden taaza ho gayi, kya din the woh!
The wish part is my most fav and how they were thinking abt each other.
"The broken falling star had found a destination"
This lines is just perfect for Sameer and his journey towards his destination.👏 I am feeling blessed and lucky that I read this piece and didn't skip it like earlier times. 😳...Thanks for this piece aur lagta hai tum mujhse bahot si reading karwa ke rahogi. 😆
Edited by Ross11 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Mou
This is one hell of a beautiful piece of writing...it brought back so many memories...and helped us visualise one of the most beautiful tracks if the show along with a beautiful closure of the famous "aag barasti hai sequence"

You know I always wanted to know Sameer's inner thoughts during the whole bet track...and no matter how little...but u definitely provided us with a beautiful thought process of Sam... The best one being his own take on his very handsome looks😆

Mou...I simply loved how u described that familiar feeling of Naina...as if destiny was trying to give hints to Naina...and the way she immediately co related that feeling to this unknown yet familiar guy⭐️

Aah...coming to my favorite part of the os.
Sameer's self obsessive thoughts...
I simply loved how you described the way he was fully aware of the attention he got...or the way everyone made sure to give him a second glance... But wat blew me away was the way u paved the path for the most handsome boy in the school falling for plain Jane...I was simply grinning wen Sameer thought of Naina only coz she did not give him a glance(one that he was not aware of😆)

I also loved how you brought abt the difference in the girls of nainital and ahemdabad through Sameer's eyes... And I could easily see myself relating to one😆...and no I'm not going to mention which one 😆

Loved... How just coz naina did not pay attention to him...Sam was drawn towards her ..her thoughts ruling his mind...and he wondering..."kaun hai wo jisne murkar mujge nahi dekha"😆

And mou... Dil Le to...u did not just recreate their iconic twirl...but took it to a notch higher by adding their words to their thoughts... marvelous...simply marvellous⭐️

Their first banter...⭐️
I loved how you brought about their awareness towards the physical aspect of each other ... Be it him noticing her features it she realising how handsome he actually was...and wat bowled me over was that their love at first sight was not limited to looks...but things beyond physical beauty...⭐️...be it her noticing his sadness or she nit mentioning her mother .. . Be it he realising she was someone to look out for...or she realising that he was in pain...and she should soothe him⭐️


Mou...I can't thank you enough for closing so many loops which were ignored in the show...right from the chewing gum...to dupatta to the aaloo paratha...⭐️... And I'm again going to repeat... Jo show mein nahi milega wo mou ki stories mein milega 😳

I was simply awed by the way you brought about the first realisation of love...both realising that they are doing things out of the way just to be with each other...Sam talking with a girl for so long...and strangely being attracted to her too...and Naina...missing her classes and feeling the first pangs of love ⭐️

Aah...the whole aag barasti hai sequence
There could be a no better way ... The way Sam was in a fix...the way it was her cuteness and innocense that drew him towards her was endearing😳

Mou... The whole contemplation and dawning of the new feelings it was brilliantly portrayed... U know I always feel that unless u understand a character completely... U really can't do justice to their feelings and actions. ..

The way u brought about the contrasting personalities of both...naina being sure of wat age felt for Sam...Sam still in a dilemma looking out for that one sign from God...and finally finding it in the form of Naina herself... Mou you just need to take a bow for this sheer artwork...

And and and... U brought back the toh sequence...that too for the acceptance of their love for each other

Love love love this one mou...sure going doing as one of my favs...please keep writing more on the school romance

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