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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Dr.Don
A very sensitive issue and penned down with equal sensitivity.

Commendable, Sur!

Hey Doc! Thank you! I'm glad I could do justice to this angle! 😊

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Azraa01
You mentioned you were not happy with the way this turned out, may I ask why?
Coz as a reader this is perfectly portrayed... The pain, sorrow and yearning to be parents are well picturised

Hey Azraa! Thanks a lot dear! Glad I could do justice to the story! 😳

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani
Wonderful Sur di wowww...
It was very emotional
Loved it
Plsss continue soon
I'll be waiting
Lots of love

Hey Aishwarya!

Thank you so much dear! 😳😳

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: mehraan
Kindly an update please😃

Hehe Meher! Karti hun...aaj nahi to next week pakka! 😃

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: lakku19
It s so good dear.. I loved it

Thanks dear! 😳

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: ujwal_v
loved it..
Sameer is love ❤️

Thanks dear! 😳 Yes he is!

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Booklover94

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Hi Sur!

This is very very different from your usual work...and frankly,it was amazing❤️

I don't know why you're not happy with this one, because it's not just beautifully written,but also very realistic.

Unfortunately,we still see situations in which the woman is always held at fault,and then there's Sameer,who deliberately tries to hide the truth to keep Naina happy.sameer is totally love😳

Especially since he wants to protect her from everything,including her own thoughts and insecurities.

I loved how you managed to portray their exact reactions inspite of the delicate topic❤️

Naina is going to be heartbroken when she comes to know of the truth,it's not like Sameer can hide it for long...but the very fact that she has a husband who is,truly,in all possible ways,her other half,makes her a lucky woman.aur vaise bhi,Sameer koi bacche se Kam thodi hai,itne demands hai uske😆

It was beautiful,Sur...update soon😳❤️

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Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Booklover94
Hi Sur!
This is very very different from your usual work...and frankly,it was amazing❤️
I don't know why you're not happy with this one, because it's not just beautifully written,but also very realistic.
Unfortunately,we still see situations in which the woman is always held at fault,and then there's Sameer,who deliberately tries to hide the truth to keep Naina happy.sameer is totally love😳
Especially since he wants to protect her from everything,including her own thoughts and insecurities.
I loved how you managed to portray their exact reactions inspite of the delicate topic❤️
Naina is going to be heartbroken when she comes to know of the truth,it's not like Sameer can hide it for long...but the very fact that she has a husband who is,truly,in all possible ways,her other half,makes her a lucky woman.aur vaise bhi,Sameer koi bacche se Kam thodi hai,itne demands hai uske😆
It was beautiful,Sur...update soon😳❤️

Hey Viji! Wow- thank you so much dear! Yes- the tone of this story is slightly different from my usual one! Yes- the story is actually inspired from real life events around me, and the pressures and the turmoil it entails along.

It can be either or both the man or woman at fault- but as you rightly pointed out, the woman is often scarred for it. That is improving these days- at least in the educated segments of the society, yet the trauma is intact. And it is then, when a couple seeks solace in each other. I wanted to show how Sameer should and would react (Sameer vaise bhi ideal hai na! 😆)

Happy to see I could do justice to the emotions experienced by them here...haha Sameer bhi bachhe jaisa hi hai that's true! I think I had it in mind or even wrote something of this sort down as well. 😳

Love

Sur