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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sur
You dont need to berate yourself or even express your doubts regarding your prowess as a writer especially for this one, rather you need to give yourself several pats on the back on behalf of your innumerable followers for coming up with such an unique concept.

I'll share with you my own story. We concieved our baby after 5long years of marriage, though ours was a deliberate decision yet the taunts and the questions lobbed in by thr society made it quite difficult, i often found myself in naina's place, being an emotional mess. Somedays i would even doubt my desicion to wait this long and cry thinking the day would never come but eventually it did and we were rewarded with our little sunshine. So this one struck a chord with me.

The sensitivity, the angst, the pain, the misery of it all is so very well depicted. The fact that your partner feels your pain and tries to fill in the void with love instead of raising fingers and venting out at you for being at fault is something touched me to the core. Sameer, the way he handles the entire scenario and especially when he took blame upon himself made my heart swell in love.the way he counsels for and gets her consent for the treatment made me go misty in the eyes. Yes sur you did that to me and quite early in the mlrning let me tell you. This ts is so so close to my heart now. I hope and wish that you continue soon very soon because am gonna be unrelenting with this as far as updates are concerned.

Loved it to bits and hence penned down my comments straight from heart.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32
A very sensitive issue and penned down with equal sensitivity.

Commendable, Sur!
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Posted: 6 years ago
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You mentioned you were not happy with the way this turned out, may I ask why?
Coz as a reader this is perfectly portrayed... The pain, sorrow and yearning to be parents are well picturised
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wonderful Sur di wowww...
It was very emotional
Loved it
Plsss continue soon
I'll be waiting
Lots of love
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Posted: 6 years ago
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It s so good dear.. I loved it
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
loved it..
Sameer is love ❤️
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: bmk28

Sur, thanks for the PM!! I loved reading it totally. It's very different yet quite realistic. I have observed that you try and get realism built into your story which makes it very unique and connected. Happy to know that you have next part already lined up as I can't wait to read it.

Hey Beena! Thanks dear! I'm glad you connected with the story...ohh that's quite an observation! 😊 Makes me see myself in a new light! 😳 Yes...the next part needs some editing though..would try n see if I can find time this Sunday for this one! 😳
Love
Sur
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: meinfrau14

You have beautifuly written about the pain and anxiety many couples go through while planning for a baby . This is a very sensitive topic and thank you for writing about it in such a profound and moving manner !

Hey dear! Yes...it's a very poignant yet an extremely prevalent issue in the modern world! The society comes with its share of pressures. To add to it, the woes of being denied parenthood! I'm glad I could do justice to it! 😊
Love
Sur
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mayashika

Why are you apprehensive when the story and the writing is so beautiful that it made my eyes water...I am glad that you chose this topic...I can sense how painful it would be to be denied motherhood, it's so heartbreaking! 😭

Thanks a ton for the words of encouragement dear! 😳 And yes, it is a sad yet a common issue in the modern world- both for the man and the woman to cope up with!
So, Sam lied but I am scared till when can he keep the secret hidden? You can say, I am intrigued to read more...😃 It would be a hard task too when Naina can understand the meaning behind Sam's each body language and the reports hasn't marked it's presence yet.
Yes! Naina can't be fooled for long though! Let's see what's in store! 😊
They will come through this too- life is not a bed of roses always! Absolutely!
One strongest point is Sameer is extremely supportive, he lied too just to avoid the shattered Naina. Their love sometimes makes me too emotional. ❤️
That is what makes a man click! 😳 Husband's support is very crucial at this stage or vice versa! 😊
I loved the fact that you allowed Sameer to grieve about the situation, he needed that lone time or else he could never comfort Naina. That subtle touch of the fact stole my heart!
Thanks dear! He may act strong, but he's a human too...a very emotional one, vulnerable one deep down! He too is saddened but his love for his wife- to see her happy, overpowers him and his grief!
And also the mention of how it pained Naina to see her brother, sister and friend having kids when she tried and had none. That state would be so painful. 😭
Yep- and again a very common thing!
If you say you haven't written nicely the next time, I won't talk to you! 🤔😆
Are re..."Sholly sholly" Sameer ke tota style mein! 😉 Ispe to maanana padega...Naina bhi maan gayi thi 😆

Waiting for the next and I am sorry for not so nice review, I am struggling between everything and not getting enough time, I know though you will understand! ⭐️

Arey Shreya! Chill...tumne itna likha wahin bahot hai mere liye...I know how hectic life is for you! 😊😳

Shreya! Lots of love dear! My response in bold.
Sur
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shri_12

Kudos to you for writing the story. Already read twice. I love it when fictional characters deal with real life issues in a practical way. You did the exact thing. Fertility issues are common in today's world and the way Samaina are going through it is realistic.

In real life there may or may not be a happy ending bit I wish Samaina have a happy ending.
Update soon.

Hey Shri! Nice to meet you here! Wow! Am I honoured! Thank you so much! Yes- it is a very real and a very prevalent scenario...wanted to showcase a different side of their family life or lack of it and how SamAina cope up with it! 😊
Love
Sur

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