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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sur dear, I earnestly feel you should never ever be apprehensive of your story telling skill. You just weave magic with your words and the choice of topic, well take a bow sweet heart ❤️
One word to describe the story: marvelous 👏 The plot is so realistic wherein we have seen the life tumbling down for many because of being childless. Our society even today is nurtured on the belief that a woman is complete only when she bears a child. Little did they realize the pressure and grief it bestows on those who could not.

Though this is just a story, the turmoil, the anxiety, the grief, the fear, it all got etched in my heart. Hats off to you Sur. Even in the midst of it, all I could see was the protective shield of Sameer around his Naina. How badly he wanted to keep her away from the pain and anguish.My eyes welled up on seeing his gesture and actions of how he composed himself and regained his confidence, how he took it on himself and assured all the peace in the world for the love of his life. He rekindled their paradise with such a heart warming act.

Loved it Sur, for its plot, narration and for awakening hope in Sameer and Naina. ⭐️
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: mystique123

Sur dear, I earnestly feel you should never ever be apprehensive of your story telling skill. You just weave magic with your words and the choice of topic, well take a bow sweet heart ❤️

My dear lovely Isha! 😳 Ab main kya bolun! Tumne itni tareef kar di ki ab I'm blushing 😳🤗Thank you so much love- you've no idea how each bit of appreciation and encouragement inspires me!
One word to describe the story: marvelous 👏 The plot is so realistic wherein we have seen the life tumbling down for many because of being childless. Our society even today is nurtured on the belief that a woman is complete only when she bears a child. Little did they realize the pressure and grief it bestows on those who could not.
Yes dear- this is sadly a commonplace occuring even today and probably more so these days. In our hectic lives, we see people spend a major chunk of their youth in trying to carve a future for themselves, to settle academically, professionally and then in matrimony. Yet the stress this life brings has led to infertility being a really prevalent occurrence, which actually inspired me to deviate a bit from the happily ever after and write on this topic. It is painful to see them trying to smile, when couples all around them are blessed with kids. Similar is the situation of Sameer and Naina here, and despite their love for each other, they are both facing the trauma associated individually, trying not to sadden the other.

Though this is just a story, the turmoil, the anxiety, the grief, the fear, it all got etched in my heart. Hats off to you Sur. Even in the midst of it, all I could see was the protective shield of Sameer around his Naina. How badly he wanted to keep her away from the pain and anguish.My eyes welled up on seeing his gesture and actions of how he composed himself and regained his confidence, how he took it on himself and assured all the peace in the world for the love of his life. He rekindled their paradise with such a heart warming act.
Sabse pehle toh- the word Paradise stood out! And you know why! 😆 Well, isn't Sameer our beloved Matt Farrell, who definitely wants to be surrounded by his progeny, but nothing matters to him more than the well-being of his beloved wife! 😃 And in circumstances like these, it is the support of a couple to each other that matters the most.
Loved it Sur, for its plot, narration and for awakening hope in Sameer and Naina. ⭐️
Thank you so much Isha!! 🤗 You are a real gem! 😳

Isha! My comments in bold!
Love
Sur

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Isha! My comments in bold!
Love
Sur


Sur sach bolu toh Matt and Paradise dint come to my mind while I was penning down this piece but since you have reminded me of Matt, guess its time for us to fangirl on Matt and Zack again 😆
Edited by mystique123 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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You really know how to tackle a difficult subject.
Very well done
Waiting for the next part
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: yashimalhotra

You really know how to tackle a difficult subject.

Very well done
Waiting for the next part
Thanks for the PM

Thank you so much Yashi! Your appreciation means a lot to me! 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Plz update this TS..and exceptedly unexpected.. waiting eagerly...update please
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rahul126545

Plz update this TS..and exceptedly unexpected.. waiting eagerly...update please

Hi Rahul! Thanks! Would update either of the two today! 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sur, this was.. 👏 I really don't have any words. This was heart touching, the way Sameer stood like a shield trying to protect her from knowing the truth and standing tall against the force that is trying to knock them down. Such a well written piece man. Hatts off for the topic. Dil le lo ❤️
Edited by shravyarao - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hey Sur!! This is simply outstanding!! You have outdone yourself with this one. It is beautifully written and such emotional brilliance.
The topic you are dealing with holds such relevance in today's life and soo many couples go thru this in a regular basis. I could feel the emotions of both Naina and sameer with the doctor's reports and the struggle to deal with it and be the strength for each other.

Its great to see the love and understanding these two share...it is through this love that they will win this battle and will bring in the boy with sameer's naughtiness and a girl with naina's eyes in this world( I am hopelessly positive person)

Beautiful! 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Surbhi u chose a very sensitive topic and m really happy how to well it came out. I don't know why u doubted over it but sach mei it came out nice.. Sameer is such a darling husband keeping his male ego aside Usne itna bda baat apne upar liya just for the sake of his beautiful wife not all men are capable of doing this ..waiting for the next part how the couple overcomes the odds together

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