SamAina OS:- Yours Truly - Page 4

Muskan I really loved this OS. .. First of all it was based on my favourite shadi track so that's y I loved it more ... Muskan u have a very strong vocabulary it felt like reading some good novel ... It was passionate and romantic. . I could relate to Naina's fears so much. .She was right at her place obviously it's very difficult to cope up with a heartbreak so it's natural she would be scared and here Majnu maheshwari's role comes into play... He's trying to remove all her insecurities all her fears.. Hes simply bf goals ❤️ ... After such a depressing track this os made me happy . ... Really I enjoyed reading it ... Thank you for the pm .. Keep writing more

Wonderful OS

Originally posted by: asmita21180

Extremely beautifully written story...Good work..Loved it

Originally posted by: Prizi

Loved it dear

Originally posted by: mehraan

Thanx for writing such a passionate OS...!!was really dissapointed when S was not addressed in the show...n urs is much more intense n romantic!!!...

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Hi Muskan Darling!🤗

Minu Di! It feels so good seeing you review my work ! Thank you so much!

This OS surely brought Muskan to my face.From now onwards everytime I am gonna scribble an application to authority ...Yours Truly would surely make me nostalgic turning my cheeks into pink charcoals..😳

Hayeee...mere chehre pe Muskan aagayi yeh sunke ke main aapke chehre pe Muskan laa payi! 🤗

Coming to the update--

Submission is not about authority and it is not obedience; it is all about relationships of love and respect..

For him it was no more trying to mock the authority of her father's petty authority or pulling her obedience and innocence to a nasty game of 'bet'.Now it was immense love and respect..truly...

True that, Minu Di. Love is incomplete without faith and respect. Love is you doing something for your love, but not compulsively, but rather on your will, by following your heart!

I loved Preeti's dialogues.Some of the dialogues really stood out.Each emotion of Preeti and Naina in those heated talks were vivid.Kudos to you.👏👏

Thank you so much, Di! Preeti has been everything to Naina, her mother upon her actions, her sister at her antics, and her best friend at times of need. How couldn't she have stood by her and knocked some sense into her? 😆 They're bond is something I adore; both onscreen and offscreen!

Love is giving up control. It's surrendering the desire to control the other person. The two--love and controlling power over the other person are mutually exclusive. If we are serious about loving someone, we have to surrender all the desires within us to manipulate the relationship.

True! The mind will always be on guard but heart knows the secret plans of destiny.The way she is confused,losing battle of not succumbing,not submitting yet blurting out his name at nick of time...I must thank the parlour girl..A mistake worth committing.😉 The name etched in alphabet...How symbolic it is...The letter 'S' ..twisted ,bent yet beautiful the alphabet is..So is their relation...From a Snake to Soulmate ..he definitely has come a long way with 'S' ..Our Mr.Sameer.

Have I ever told you how much I love your reviews! Because I do, and for this very reason! You've brought out such a new and unique meaning by reading between the lines, that it leaves me in awe! From a curse to a blessing, Sameer has been everything to Naina! Thank you so much for interpreting this piece so well, Minu Di! Dil le lo!

One does not create beauty, one surrenders to it...

The beauty of language describing the scene where he notices her Mehendi and the soft ministrations..Well this obedience and submission needed faith..And he finally has won it..He was truly hers and she his...❤️

Sometimes words fall short and are meaningless, sometimes your actions contradict your words, sometimes you don't need to communicate through words to convey your feelings for each other. No matter how many times Naina clarifies of not loving Sameer anymore, he knows through her, and he knows her love for him as well as his love for her!

To feel most beautifully alive means to be reading something beautiful...And I absolutely love the use of your language and the smooth flow of the update.

Thank you so much Minu Di! Sangat ka asar...😆🤗

Thanks for the PM and keep coming with your best.

With love-

Minu.

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Muskan, truly a beautiful piece!

Shreya! Thank you so much for reviewing! I was eagerly waiting for this! 😃

The transition of emotions of Sameer, Naina, Preeti and the interconnected feelings was in flow and my greedy self was so disappointed when I scrolled to nothing. Ah, I wanted more, darling!

Ah...it's not me, but the magic SamAina and the show never fail to reflect; at least through the stories on the forum! Kyunki yeh dil maange more...every time! 😆

There are three things that made me instantly fall in love with this OS...

Firstly, the theme was Pooja Di's wedding which is my second favourite track from the show and I simply love when it's the chase time, the thrill of the chase is gives you an adrenaline rush.

I guess I know what you're favorite track is...but I'm happier to know this track comes under your favorites too! The gist, the magic, the energy, them! Everything about the shaadi track is worth binge-watching!

Secondly, you closed the loop of one of the much awaited reaction. The S on Naina's hand which Sameer never got to see and how disheartened were we! And I bet, yours was much satiating yet left me craving for more of their close proximity...😳

I could sense your disappointment, Shreya! And we find another similarity between us! 😆 My frustration and disappointment led to this OS, so I think I could credit the makers to some extent for propelling me into writing this...and pleasing you all too! As far as their proximity is concerned, my heart races even when I write. Yeh 90s hai na...dheere dheere hoga... 😆

Thirdly, it was written by you! No flattering, you have written fabulously and no one could have said you have written this after a break. 😃

I turn rusty so easily with my writing if taken a break! 😆

Once again, I would credit you all for the constant support and motivation...I wouldn't have written this without such wonderful readers cum amazing friends! 🤗

Loved the confrontation between Naina and Preeti, the cold stare of Naina's with her brooding eyes and Preeti's solemn eyes that just wanted her sister's good.

Preeti-Naina conversations are treat to write! I'm so happy to hear you liked it! 😳 Preeti has always been her sister's pillar of strength; something I respect and admire from the show and offscreen!

The close proximity was so pleasing to read, the end scene just melted me into puddles!

And I was shivering in nervousness! 😆 We can never get enough of their proximity and sweet ministrations, can we? 😳

This one deserves a re-read just like your Love Kills and ABFOT!

Shreya, you deserve one big wala hug!

🤗 + 🤗= Shreya ke liye hug!

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Muskan I really loved this OS. .. First of all it was based on my favourite shadi track so that's y I loved it more ... Muskan u have a very strong vocabulary it felt like reading some good novel ... It was passionate and romantic. . I could relate to Naina's fears so much. .She was right at her place obviously it's very difficult to cope up with a heartbreak so it's natural she would be scared and here Majnu maheshwari's role comes into play... He's trying to remove all her insecurities all her fears.. Hes simply bf goals ❤️ ... After such a depressing track this os made me happy . ... Really I enjoyed reading it ... Thank you for the pm .. Keep writing more

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani

Wonderful OS

Perfectly penned one

Lots of love

This was such an amazing OS.
It was nice to read a romantic OS after a long time
Thank you for the pm