SamAina OS:- Yours Truly

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: vidrev
Such a nice update. Really fabulous and fantastic. The emotions are explained nicely. Nice one. Plz do continue writing.

Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you liked it!

Will try my best to write more! 😊

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Shippu92
I have only one thing to say after reading.. It Ws magically beautiful

I feel honored! Thank you so much!

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: chaaru26
God!! This was soo beautiful and romantic.. And the mehendi scene has my heart ❤️.. wish they had shown something similar in the show.

I wish so too!

Thank you so much!

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: dakshatas
Wow!!! Yeh kya likh dala... 🤗

Itna achha lag gaya?

Thank you so much!

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Janani214
Oh wow just wow . It was sooo amazing ND beautiful. Reading this made me feel like I am in a dream Land sitting ND watching Samaina.

Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you liked it!

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: dilse99
Wow this is just so fantastically written! 👏

You completely brought back those beautiful memories of the mehendi episode, but with so much more detail. I clearly remember how so many on the forum were disappointed that we were never shown Sameer's reaction to the "S. You did a great job in creating a perfect scenario around this, and the intensity and romance gave off all the right feels - u stayed true to the characters and the situation too.

Loved it! 😊

Thank you so much!

I've had this idea in my mind for quite some time now...and this OS is just an aftermath of the disappointment by the show. How much we all longed for this one scene!

I'm glad to hear you liked it! Wanted to keep the characters as similar to the show as possible so that I could present a justification of Naina's actions.

Thank you so much once again!

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Beautiful OS
Naina's trying hard to show that she doesn't love Sameer anymore.. But Sameer is dheet😆
Plus saaliji bhi to sath h
The S on Naina's palm

Thank you so much Aarti Di!

Toh aur nahi toh kya...Madwadi hai apna Maheshwari...dheet toh hoga hi 😆 Naina has tough competition here! 😆

'jinki main saali hoon, jo mere jijaji hai'...hayeee...your reference to Preeti reminded me of this!

Socho agar show mein bhi aisa ho jaata toh? 😉😆

Thank you so much once again!

Muskan 😃

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Asmita

@asmita21180

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Extremely beautifully written story...Good work..Loved it

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mehraan

@mehraan

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Thanx for writing such a passionate OS...!!was really dissapointed when S was not addressed in the show...n urs is much more intense n romantic!!!...

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Muskan, truly a beautiful piece!

The transition of emotions of Sameer, Naina, Preeti and the interconnected feelings was in flow and my greedy self was so disappointed when I scrolled to nothing. Ah, I wanted more, darling!

There are three things that made me instantly fall in love with this OS...

Firstly, the theme was Pooja Di's wedding which is my second favourite track from the show and I simply love when it's the chase time, the thrill of the chase is gives you an adrenaline rush.

Secondly, you closed the loop of one of the much awaited reaction. The S on Naina's hand which Sameer never got to see and how disheartened were we! And I bet, yours was much satiating yet left me craving for more of their close proximity...😳

Thirdly, it was written by you! No flattering, you have written fabulously and no one could have said you have written this after a break. 😃

I turn rusty so easily with my writing if taken a break! 😆

Loved the confrontation between Naina and Preeti, the cold stare of Naina's with her brooding eyes and Preeti's solemn eyes that just wanted her sister's good.

The close proximity was so pleasing to read, the end scene just melted me into puddles!

This one deserves a re-read just like your Love Kills and ABFOT!

Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago