Couplet : Inspired by Naina

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Asmita

@asmita21180

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

As suggested by Ross.. this is some lines penned by me inspired by Naina..

Dil me ummeed ek jagauN maiN..

Kuch Naye Khwab fir sajauN .maiN..

Saari duniya se mil chuki lekin..

Khud se khud ko bhi ab milaauN maiN..

Har Waraq par hi zikr tera tha..

Naam kaise tera mitaauN maiN..

Khud se ummeed jab nahiN mujhko..

Tumse ummeed kya lagauN maiN...

Band palkoN meN khwaab haiN kitne..

Soyi aankhoN ko kya jagauN maiN..

Aaj jo hai wo kal nahiN hoga..

Falsafa yeH tujhe sikhauN maiN..

Tu har ek raaz jaanta hai mera...

Tujh se kya kya bhala chipaauN maiN...

P.S- please do comment ...

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bmk28

@bmk28

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Lovely Asmita!! You are very talented!! So well describes Naina and her dil ka rishta with Sameer!!

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Asmita

@asmita21180

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bmk28
Lovely Asmita!! You are very talented!! So well describes Naina and her dil ka rishta with Sameer!!

Thanx so much Beena !..For your appreciation and kind words...

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Ross11

@Ross11

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Amazing poetry Asmita. Keep up the good work. 👍🏼

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Asmita

@asmita21180

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: -Ross-
Amazing poetry Asmita. Keep up the good work. 👍🏼

Thank you Ross... For suggesting to make a post..And your appreciation

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ashona

@ashona

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

Awesome poetry Asmita, well done on your effort 👍🏼

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

Amazing asmita ... U wrote so well... Something these days in naina's character is amiss which u tried to compensate through ur poetry and I loved it

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Lavender25

@Lavender25

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Beautiful poem. 🤗 Would like to read more from you.

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shelly_nair

@shelly_nair

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Nice one girl. Do continue the work n share here too.

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May

@SixteenAgain

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#10

Hi Asmita, I loved it! It fits what should be Naina's current state of mind perfectly.

Please do keep writing and sharing more with us. 😊

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