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Posted: 7 years ago
#51
Sims...
How could I ever thank you for all the love, this is the second time you have dedicated an update for me. Lots and Lots of 🤗

Coming to the update: Glad that you brought in the reference of 5th September, the day our show entered our lives 😊

So how does it happen, great love? Nobody knows... but what I can tell you is that it happens in the blink of an eye. One moment you're enjoying your life, and the next you're wondering how you ever lived without them. Ain't this going to be the definition of their love? ❤️

Sameer is totally bowled over by the captivating beauty that he could not take his eyes off her.And she...she is beauty and chaos intertwined...she is a mystery that Sameer is eager to decipher.

A charming woman does not follow the crowd...she is herself : this is what I felt when I saw Naina reacting to Sameer's encroachment into her privacy. He may be the one whom many girls drool over but all she care in the world is herself.

The nervousness of Sameer, him trying to impress Naina kept on echoing that madly crazily he has fallen for her. He never seemed to be taken back for a moment with her reactions rather was more determined to win this confident girl. Isn't a confident woman a man's everything(This chance encounter of them is truly going to weave something magical. 😊)

Sameer and pain of unknown memory, is there a dark past for him as well Sims 😲

The pain in him, the overwhelming feeling of sadness which is inexplicable, the ocean of silence that is lingering, his eyes missing her as much as the rest of him whispered: You fall in love with the least expected person at the most unexpected time.❤️

Cant wait more to read the next

Lots of Love 🤗
Edited by mystique123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Anjali33

That's a lovely chapter


Thank you dear <3 <3
Sameer being all charming n stuff, but Naina ne to left right jhad diya ise😆 poor guy got a harsh reality check
ahaha ab hamari Naina hai hi aisi. Kya kare. Ek second me Sameer ke swag ki dhajiya uda di usne. Love Savage Naina.
Now let's see how he woos her😉
Oh the next update will show you that its going to be harder than you think


Thank you for your constant support for my stories, Anjali dear.

Bundles of love,
Sims <3 <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Teaser and the plot:


The plot is truly intriguing as it's already mentioned Naina has a past, what could it be is one question that will be in my mind till it's revealed. But what caught my instant attention is that you have mentioned Sam as a wealthy kid who lives with his Nanu, then you have written both their tragic lives, so I am assuming there's something about Sameer, maybe same as his past from the show or something other.

They both our connected through their tragic past. You will see.

The teaser, quite obvious, he's enchanted by her who is taking big leaps in the form of dance, to run from her past?
Its both a leap away and a leap towards her past. I will unravel this to you slowly.


Thank you for your detailed comment Shreya dear. I know you are busy yet you took the time out.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Prologue:


First thing I would like to mention is the date, 5th Sept is when our dear show first aired. 😃
I know! I thought what better day to assign their birthdays to.

Naina's father seems too have tortured her a lot, I can sense the fear is not new and her turning 18 is surely profitable for the man.

Yes indeed. I am glad you picked that out from this update. He is her stepfather but his true face will be revealed gradually through Naina's traumatic memories.

Sameer's life is relatively better or so you have it portrayed, with a memory of his mother, a touching memory.

Yes it is. The touching memory will go a long way in bonding Sameer and Naina. You will see.
The scene with SaMunDit is always a treat, hope you are keeping their friendship as the same. 😳

Yes the friendships are too precious to change. I love SwaPreeNa and Samundit too much to change them.

Finally Sam is enchanted by the woman in front of her, dancing away carelessly, forgetting the bitter memories, doesn't matter if it's temporary.

He fell in love with her dance which is a reflection of her soul.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Beautiful chapter!

Thank you!

All set to woo the enchantress who has captivated him but well, it's not a bed full of roses, like they say, the girl isn't interested slightly in him and the game gets more spicier now when the chase begins...

Yes the girl has simply too much on her plate. Her biggest priority is to escape. Only time and Sam's actions will make her realise that his love is her true escape.

Something tells me there's gonna be a lot of pain with this love but if they overcome this pain, the love would transform into their biggest strength.

I am a strong believer of angst in love. The more painful, the stronger and deeper the love.

Whatever it is, the squabble has intrigued Sam more as well as grabbed Naina's attention...
I am loving this one as I am a person who can relate to this quote- I prefer the thrill of the chase than the satisfaction of the catch 😃

Indeed! You will see in the coming update just how deeply Sameer and Naina have been influenced with this encounter. I know! For me Pooja di's shaadi ka track is fave because of this. There is something so blushworthy when the hero tries to woo. Also why I particularly love both Zain and Randhir.

But in this story, the catch would be more satisfactory!!

Yes because the catch would mean psychological healing and courage to fight for Naina.


How can I ever thank you for your support Shreya! Despite being busy, you didn't just take out the time to write comments but also left such detailed feedback with some quite minute observations. Dil le lo dear <3 <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
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Originally posted by: mystique123

Sims...

How could I ever thank you for all the love, this is the second time you have dedicated an update for me. Lots and Lots of 🤗

You deserve all the love for how much you have motivated me dear <3

Coming to the update: Glad that you brought in the reference of 5th September, the day our show entered our lives 😊

Yeah I couldn't resist adding that date

So how does it happen, great love? Nobody knows... but what I can tell you is that it happens in the blink of an eye. One moment you're enjoying your life, and the next you're wondering how you ever lived without them. Ain't this going to be the definition of their love? ❤️

Sameer is totally bowled over by the captivating beauty that he could not take his eyes off her.And she...she is beauty and chaos intertwined...she is a mystery that Sameer is eager to decipher.

You have described Sameer's love at first sight so well. This is exactly how I wanted it to come across.
👏👏

A charming woman does not follow the crowd...she is herself : this is what I felt when I saw Naina reacting to Sameer's encroachment into her privacy. He may be the one whom many girls drool over but all she care in the world is herself.

Indeed that is how Naina is. Her past has made her so disgusted of men that she is her own individual. I take this characterization further in next part.

The nervousness of Sameer, him trying to impress Naina kept on echoing that madly crazily he has fallen for her. He never seemed to be taken back for a moment with her reactions rather was more determined to win this confident girl. Isn't a confident woman a man's everything(This chance encounter of them is truly going to weave something magical. 😊)

I love a smitten and nervous Sameer. MMajnu Maheshwari determined to win Naina with his love for her is my kryptonite. Naina's confidence is not so much confidence but a way to vent her suppressed angry for Raman. This chance encounter will change their lives completely.

Sameer and pain of unknown memory, is there a dark past for him as well Sims 😲

Oh yes there is. A memory so traumatic that he suppressed it. And here's a hint: it's related to Naina as well. They have a past connection here. There I revealed it but now you will itch to see it gradually unfold

The pain in him, the overwhelming feeling of sadness which is inexplicable, the ocean of silence that is lingering, his eyes missing her as much as the rest of him whispered: You fall in love with the least expected person at the most unexpected time.❤️

That's what love is. Its when you ache from the emptiness inside you because you miss the person so much. Isn't love so ironic? To think that in a matter of seconds your breaths become theirs.

Cant wait more to read the next

Lots of Love 🤗


Thank you so much for your amazing comment Isha. You have provided so much food for thought that I am going to edit the next part a bit and upload it in the next hour.

Bundles of love to you dear,
Sims <3 <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: asmita21180

Very beautiful chapters...The first look was so beautifully described..Heavenly ...

Thank you. I am glad it struck you like it struck poor Sammy boi's heart.

I would like to know the back story of Naina ...Poor girl...And how will she even fall for Sameer after all that happened in her life ...

Yes the back story will unfold little by little in each update. Sameer's love for Naina is so pure and unconditional she has no choice but to surrender. Plus his charm and swag is irresistible.


Bundles of love,

Sims <3 <3
Edited by IamIbe - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani

nice update dear

thank you dear
Ab dekhna yeh hain ki Sameer Maheshwari Naina ki zindagi ka Salman kaise banta hain😉

Yes I am excited to write about his wooing of her.
plz update soon
Lots of love


Bundles of love,
Sims <3 <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: gugul

Loved reading the update and thanks for the PM.

Thank you and your very welcome dear.

So Sameer is now head over heels in love with Naina.. love' at first sight.. or is it attraction towards a mystery girl... Sounds very interesting.

This is exactly what Sameer will debate in the next update. I hope you like that ending.

Whereas Naina is stuck in a hell and the only thing she is bothered about now is to get a good job and run away from the hell as far as possible.

Indeed, that is her goal. But she will realise that her escape is not running away but fighting Raman head on with Sameer by her side.

And maybe because of her earlier experiences with men..she hates men.

Yes she does hate them indeed. But Sameer will be her exception.

Eagerly waiting for the progress of the story.


Thank you for your comments dear.

Bundles of love,
Sims <3 <3
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Posted: 7 years ago
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