SamAina FF (16+)- Leap to your heart closing note p.82

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UnknownJhalli

@UnknownJhalli

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

nice update dear

Ab dekhna yeh hain ki Sameer Maheshwari Naina ki zindagi ka Salman kaise banta hain😉

plz update soon

Lots of love

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

That's a lovely chapter

Sameer being all charming n stuff, but Naina ne to left right jhad diya ise😆 poor guy got a harsh reality check

Now let's see how he woos her😉

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Teaser and the plot:

The plot is truly intriguing as it's already mentioned Naina has a past, what could it be is one question that will be in my mind till it's revealed. But what caught my instant attention is that you have mentioned Sam as a wealthy kid who lives with his Nanu, then you have written both their tragic lives, so I am assuming there's something about Sameer, maybe same as his past from the show or something other.

The teaser, quite obvious, he's enchanted by her who is taking big leaps in the form of dance, to run from her past?

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Priya

@Priya2910

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

A brilliant update.

Hero is already head over heels in love with this intriguing Heroine. And our heroine is dying to break free from the hell.

Very interested to know how this story will progress.

Thank you so much for the PM. Hoping to read more soon.

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Prologue:

First thing I would like to mention is the date, 5th Sept is when our dear show first aired. 😃

Naina's father seems too have tortured her a lot, I can sense the fear is not new and her turning 18 is surely profitable for the man.

Sameer's life is relatively better or so you have it portrayed, with a memory of his mother, a touching memory.

The scene with SaMunDit is always a treat, hope you are keeping their friendship as the same. 😳

Finally Sam is enchanted by the woman in front of her, dancing away carelessly, forgetting the bitter memories, doesn't matter if it's temporary.

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Isha

@mystique123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: IamIbe

Isha! Thank you so much for your comments dear. I really look forward to your comments on my stories. Somehow you describe the essence of whatever write so beautifully. Are you a writer as well? If not I really think you should try your hand with the pen. You have a way with words.

Bundles of love,
Sims <3 <3

This means a lot to me Sims, thank you so much ❤️

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Shreya

@PehliDafaHai

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Beautiful chapter!

All set to woo the enchantress who has captivated him but well, it's not a bed full of roses, like they say, the girl isn't interested slightly in him and the game gets more spicier now when the chase begins...Something tells me there's gonna be a lot of pain with this love but if they overcome this pain, the love would transform into their biggest strength.

Whatever it is, the squabble has intrigued Sam more as well as grabbed Naina's attention...

I am loving this one as I am a person who can relate to this quote- I prefer the thrill of the chase than the satisfaction of the catch 😃

But in this story, the catch would be more satisfactory!!

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@IamIbe

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed
Thankyou for the pm and an update girl
You explained their feelings so perfectly ..

Thank you <3

Aww my poor Naina wants to be free from that hell

Yes and she will be.

And Sameer my boy is already in love with her awww

I won't say he is already in love with her. He is falling definitely but its still a new feeling for him.He needs to process it and understand her to be completely in love.

Just hoping to see that how Sameer will help her to get free from that shit ..

He will be her strength and their love will motivate her to fight for herself.

Wiatkng for next part eagerly

Thank you for your comments dear!

Bundles of love,

Sims <3 <3

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@IamIbe

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: JaySee
Awesome update. Thanks for the PM.
Thank you dear.

It is looking like Sameer is completely bowled by Naina's beauty and she is not giving even single percent acknowledgement. All his charm and style is of no use in front of her.

Yes he is whipped by her beauty but Naina has seen only the hideous character of men in her life and they disgust her. So she is not responding to his interest. But our Sameer is not going to give up.

Looking like Naina is having a really painful situation in her life.

Yes she does but she will fight through.

Eagerly waiting for next update.
Pls do it soon.

Thank you so much for your comment dear. I am still working on the next chapter but will upload it soon.

Bundles of love,

Sims <3 <3