Originally posted by: doublecross
Love
Well what is love?
Is it just about feeling secured in the care of that one who had eyes only for you? Or is it just about that one man or woman who lavishes you with endearments making your heart swell and making you feel the most precious person? Or is it about the claim that the one exercises upon you?
Well, 'What is love' is a debatable topic with many different yet thought provoking opinions and many of these opinions mostly are formed from our experiences and what we see and read which to an extent influences our thoughts. I read somewhere that it isn't a feeling we feel for someone but instead what we share with a person but then again, how do we then describe one sided love? The last question made me wonder, I could try to be perfect and say it isn't but we all have a little selfish trait that will show our claim upon them and it is not wrong.
The opinion varies, all I can say is it is an intense strong feeling that is capable to make or break us.
The claim of love which ignites the fire of jealousy within and unleashes that protective side which makes you pounce on any foreign entity lurking in close vicinity of your beloved. Even if that foreign entity means no harm yet you lose your power to reason and keep him at bay completely from your love. Is it lack of trust that makes you be such a jealous beast? Nah! It's your protective instinct that kicks in and also that claim that you cherish over that one person makes you feel jealous.
Beautifully and perfectly said! They have learned to trust each other with their share of ups and downs but this anger and tantrums were directed at Ishaan, not Naina. He displayed it on Naina because he can't bear the division of her attention, that's where the character sketch of Sam came in, the lack of attention in his childhood has made him more possessive of his loved ones.
I am happy that you understood my intentions well, quite some thought went into it!
Here the jealous sameer felt was a real treat to read about. And the vivid scene that you painted with your words made me smile. Shreya when you say you admire me for my vocab I must commend you for yours. You are a master at the game and in no time are you going to be that genius who spells magic with words.
Thank you so much! 😳
@bold: Di, I will never forget this, coming from you, a person I adore and love very much means a lot. You made my day but there's more to be done before I reach somewhere in my goal and you have motivated me to work harder.
The mischief that twinkled through that smile of naina when she found how her love was being jealous, the moment was just perfect. The way naina confesses her feelings, accepting her love and giving the relationship it's much desired name was sugary sweet to read about.
And I was wondering if it got too sweet when people needed intimacy now in the show, but I wanted to display the romance that will be remembered and cherished in our life and I simply love it when I write an emotion in a descriptive way and then has to cut it down due to the length. 😆
That teasing and those feathery half kisses on those cheeks oh! Girl you made my day with it. How I wish sameer in the show someday teases her like he does here. Although the feeling of jealousy had already proclaimed sameer 's love for naina yet hearing her confess her feelings for him and then reciprocating the same with all the love was something I loved reading about. Especially when he calls her his love , that was stupendously done.
I am glad! Yes, the comfort that the reassurance and confession provides has a magic that can't be explained and it's such a personal exchange between two lovers that everyone experience a different kind of enchantment. It was a little hard to write but I am happy you loved it. 🤗
The handheld and that flashback into the past made me burst into giggles too. Now when I see naina and sameer taking bike rides across the city it's actually tough to imagine naina hitting him in the past for holding her hand. So here too It was enchanting to read how they remnicise and laugh at the memory of it all since now their relationship have progressed to a new level ready To scale heights of love.
That was my intent too, to show how they have proceeded in love that it isn't awkward now, it's just a beautiful memories that they are too fond of and reminisce often and that paves a path to make new memories. Kudos to you for coming up with this brilliant os.
I.always enjoy reading your work.
Do write some more and give me some more opportunities to lavish you with heaps and heaps of praises.
I hope I note did justice to your writing.
I am honored and I will be eagerly waiting for your comments in all my upcoming works. 😳
The note has me all elated, enjoyed reading and replying.