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Posted: 7 years ago
When u will update please can't wait now...eagerly waiting love ur story plzz update this weekend plzz
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: rahul399

When u will update please can't wait now...eagerly waiting love ur story plzz update this weekend plzz

Thanks Rahul! 😳 This weekend is difficult for me! Though would try for sure.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: doublecross

Realization, it often is followed close on the heels by repurcussions. Here too we see the same, first the dawning of the ultimate truth which was right out there glaring and staring into your face yet the denial made it so hard to accept.


Naina's feelings, that i felt while reading the update:

You kept on coddling your soul to keep it guilt free, saying what we had was simply 'friends with benefits'. But my heart, what about it? It thudded and beat only for you, i could see glimpses of same feelings in your eyes. Your protective behaviour would always perplex me and give me that ray of hope, your understanding nature, that mutual pining that we felt when away and that ready to quit all the vices that you harboured for all these years. I was like that ship caught amidst baleful winds and turbulent waves, hoping against hope for some miracle but alas! Miracles are for farytales ours was never the one.


Sameer's anguish:
We met after days, it was one of those special days when we leant on one and another basking in the warmth of eah other's presence, i kissed you to make us the perfect moment. Your very presence is a balm for my sore wounds, wounds that i kept camouflaged for years from the world. They were mine and i would hide them with my arrogance. But then you came, peeling me layer by layer, the start wasn't the best, but what it culminated into is special. Initially i had thought that you would wear me off in a week or two but slowly and ateadily your presence grew upon me. Then it was no longer solely about the physical intimacy but about those long walks that we qould take in the comforting presence of one another, about me indulging dont know why?! But your whims and fancies, about you and me baring our souls to each other. Then no vow, no promise, no boundary could bind us.we were like two bodies with enterwined souls. We were one another's solace. Staying away from you even for minutes made me writhe and we were ready to risk everything only to be together. But amidst all of this i always pushed those feelings away, brushing them off in the name of friendship. My heart would beat in sync with yours but my mind denied and didn't let me accept. But today you brought me down with a crash, when you told me about your intended alliance with a different man. Even your name with some tom dick and harry made my blood boil and my heart seared in pain, the anguish spilled like some lava from a volcano and instead of pulling you to me and kissing you senseless and laying my claim on you i pushed you aside with my anger. Why did i do that? Because my mind was still in denial and in the battle of heart and mind it was making that one last futile attempt to distance me from you but it failed and my heart triumphed and in just a jiffy i knew i was in love all along. I was in love with you from the times i hated you for being teacher's pet in school, from when you ratted about me in front of the principal, from the time when you brushed me aside in that party from where it all started. I have loved you since eternity and will continue loving you for infinity no matter your desicion be. This frantic search that i have launched myself into is not only to confess my feelings but also to lead us on a path a where we would have each other as 'us'. Naina i love you please come back. I just hope my stupidity hasn't pyshed you away from me forever. These tears are of anguish, pain and helplessness, what i had i didn't treasure and now am hoping against hope that i get it back, that it isn't lost forever. Am berating myself every second for not seeing what the world could right from the very start. Come back to me my love and i would hold you tight in my arms while my heart would lavish you with all the love.



I loved it Sur

Hey Pooja!
I already told you I loved the words you put in here...summing up the whole story...the gist of it in the feelings of the two protagonists...and you left me speechless...I wish I was able to write it the way you have! Thanks a lot dear! Your comments always mean so much to me! 😳
Love
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Hey Neha! Thank you so much for the wonderful review yaar! My replies in pink!
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Sur


Ladki tumne meri gulabi kalam chura li toh ab mujhe laal rang se likhna pad raha hai😆 Yes babe if destiny works we shall meet in the future for sure!
."Deewana tera...tujhe hi bulaye...ye marzi teri...tu aaye na aaye!" yeh gana, Sur dil le leo😛Deewana word se kuch alag hi connection hai SRK ki debut movie or Sonu Nigam ka debut album. I was just about to enter teenage when this album had released back in 1999. I swear each and every song from this album had my heart, kya din the woh yaar❤️ Do you remember Pankaj Udas ka Stolen Moments album released that summer as well, Sameera Reddy and Australian guy's love story...I so wanted to move to Australia back then😆
Coming back to this story, please cliff ko hanger se nikalo, bad joke🤣 Write soon, before you get busy with Sunday finals😉

❤️Neha
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Posted: 7 years ago
When are we getting new update 😆 ?
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Posted: 7 years ago
My reaction to this much awaited update is " der aay durust aay "
Sameer finally realized his feelings for naina
I'm soon happy ..
This story is so close toy heart ..my mood depends on the kind and length of the update lol
I was waiting for his realization and it finally happened
It was beautiful .. You showed it in the most subtle manner possible .. I used to imagin his realization in my head but it was nothing like yours .. You always pleasantly surprise me by your writing vision

Surprisingly I love sanjay tibriwal in the update .. For me he was the highlight lol
Your way of bringing characters in between is beautiful as literally they made a difference and do or say something that effect the others and the readers
I want to see more of this kind of one liners by people to sameer .. It will be hilarious


Sameer's wait for his love made me remember sushant in pk
I'm really excited for his reaction on seeing naina
The whole waiting sequence was beautifully shown
As always I felt your words .. His pain
Can't see him like this .. But I must say he disserves at least this level of wait and tadap keeping the fact he made naina wait for years
I forgot to mention sameer dressing up for naina
Taking that extra effort to look presentable enough for his naina .. It was soon cute
Sameer's fear of getting rejected was also soo sweet ..
Poor guy he himself was consoling his soul that she will not reject you .. Aww
It was superb

I can't tell you his much I'm excited for the next part
Please update soon
Aur zyada mat tadpao mere sameer ko ..

Love
Laalchi reader
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Posted: 7 years ago
Waiting for the update dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
Waiting for the update dii update soon ab ap itna bhi mat tadpao ... waiting waiting
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: samenthadcruz

When are we getting new update 😆 ?

Hey yaar sorry...was just overloaded since the past two weeks. I'll try till tomorrow! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

My reaction to this much awaited update is " der aay durust aay "

Sameer finally realized his feelings for naina
I'm soon happy ..
This story is so close toy heart ..my mood depends on the kind and length of the update lol
I was waiting for his realization and it finally happened
It was beautiful .. You showed it in the most subtle manner possible .. I used to imagin his realization in my head but it was nothing like yours .. You always pleasantly surprise me by your writing vision
My dear Manisha! Pehle toh I'm incredibly sorry but I didn't have time to even breathe last week! 😆 I know I'm late in replying as well as in updating the story...I'll try to do so by tomorrow though if possible. Thank you so much for finding the time and putting out such an awesome comment. To be honest, I'm kind of dejected by the response I'm getting on my stories and I had half a mind to quit IF and the stories too. I'll see how it goes though in near future, or else, I'll try to wrap up things here at the forum! But that said, I'll always remember your comments which make my day! 😳🤗I'm happy you liked the realization piece of it. I'm trying not to deviate from my initial storyline here. I do hope the audience would like it the way it is! 😳
Surprisingly I love sanjay tibriwal in the update .. For me he was the highlight lol
Your way of bringing characters in between is beautiful as literally they made a difference and do or say something that effect the others and the readers
I want to see more of this kind of one liners by people to sameer .. It will be hilarious
Haha...thanks dear...I just wanted to show...everyone has a good side as well as a bad side! 😃

Sameer's wait for his love made me remember sushant in pk
I'm really excited for his reaction on seeing naina
The whole waiting sequence was beautifully shown
As always I felt your words .. His pain
Can't see him like this .. But I must say he disserves at least this level of wait and tadap keeping the fact he made naina wait for years
I forgot to mention sameer dressing up for naina
Taking that extra effort to look presentable enough for his naina .. It was soon cute
Sameer's fear of getting rejected was also soo sweet ..
Poor guy he himself was consoling his soul that she will not reject you .. Aww
It was superb
Haha...true...when your lover leaves without as much as a word...or worst..there is a misunderstanding and neither knows about it. Sameer does deserve to wait, but would he get a chance back from life? You'll have to read on! 😳
I can't tell you his much I'm excited for the next part
Please update soon
Aur zyada mat tadpao mere sameer ko ..
Pakka dear...trying my best to update asap! 😊
Love
Laalchi reader

Hey Manisha! Thank you so much dear!
My replies in blue.
Love
Sur

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