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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: YUDKBH.

Please post the next part soon with him and Naina before I decide to cry with Sam.

Aww udaas mat ho dear...😳😳 thanks for the love to the story! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: bmk28

Thank you for the PM, Sur.. I love you (for making sure that reliazation stung sameer so hard) the way I hate you (for ending story on a suspense note).. Haha.. I read fast to make sure that the next para would be about Sameer accepting his feelings to Naina.. But it didnt come and the part got over.. Waiting for the next one.. Emotional confrontation of Naina and Sameer is what I am looking forward to..

Thanks dear Beena! Haha...love-hate relationship ho gayi yeh toh...😆😆 I know I'm to blame for the cliffhanger...but thoda suspense to banta hai na! 😉 Actually update had become too long...😳 Confrontation kab aur kaise hoga jaanene ke liye padhte rahiye ye story haha...zyada dramatic ho gaya...but I hope I'm able to live upto your expectations. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Mere Dil to sachme dhak dhak kar Raha tha throughout this update
Firstly, FINALLY Sameer realised his love for Naina. Tibrewal was right, moti Budhi hai ladke ki.
And secondly, Nooo! Don't just stop like that. I really wanna know what happens next asap. This is way too intriguing for me to be able to handle for long.
So please please update soon the next part.
Also, your writing is so wonderful. Could feel Sameer's pain and tadap.
Did i mention please update soon.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Sameer Ka Pta nai let me say this to u.. love u soo much sur ...i liked the update alot ❤️ it was little sad to see sameer so restless but he deserves this at least thoda Tadapna toh bnta hai... Pure college ko khabar thi but usko nai thi ki he has fallen in love with Naina... In fact I feel Naina ko itni jldi nai mnana chahiye. . Kya smjhta hai sameer khud ko Jb mn Kare timepass bol de Jb mn Kare pyaar. . I really want Naina to be a strong girl... Accepting the relation on her own terms. .. Pehli Baar story mei tebriwal Acha lga Mereko ..
Though Mandir wala confession of sameer was heart touching l. Let me tell u cliffhanger par chodne se paap lgta hai 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: A.Green

Res

Update! 😳

Unres!

I am first When you updated this yesterday, I was drop dead tired, I had a blasting headache, but as soon as I saw the update, I forgot about it and read it two times before finally going to sleep 😆
Aww really dear? Thank you so much Aayushi! 😃🤗Made my day! And I've read your comment multiple times already 😆 and enjoyed the short- story you've written here!

Though I was sure, I would have to comment today, in peace, re-reading it again 😳

Sameer Maheshwari is in love with Naina Aggarwal - reading this line, I was sooo happy. ❤️
Finally 🥳And in what stylee! So cutee both of them are, finally they'll be together But I know the caller won't be Naina :P

Or it can be Naina, your story and it's title, can't make me predict, expectedly unexpected 😉
Haha sahi baat hai...kabhi expected, kabhi unexpected 😆 Ab pyaar kiya to iqrar (khud se hi sahi) style mein to hona chahiye na! Long due thi iska realization! 😆

Although I was rooting for Sameer to suffer, everytime he spoke a stupid thing, like he did in here as well, mujhe bta do main koi aur dhund lunga, hum pyaar thodi na karte hain! 😡
But seeing him suffer, cry and crave for her, I couldn't help but feel his pain. 😭
I know dear...he's behaved really badly at times towards Naina, wantingly or unconsciously...partly in anger...but then, he himself is a poor, emotional soul! 😕

After I read this yesterday, I felt so sad initially seeing his state, I went to sleep on my bed and I started crying then, a kinda late reaction but damn, I felt so connected that I couldn't help but shed tears for him and his helplessness. You wrote it so so well, I could totally feel he was justified, he is like the poles of a magnet. Either he'll be in complete denial about his feelings or he'll go all out to get her. I love this characteristic in his character I realized today ❤️
This whole para! ❤️ Isse bada compliment kya hoga dear...that you felt connected and finally understood the complicated character of Sameer...he's actually a person who lives in extremes...and I too somehow admire such people...perhaps because my real life Sameer is also wired this way! 😳 I'm glad my writing could convey Sameer's anguish, his helplessness to the extent that you felt emotional about it all! Thank you very much dear! 🤗

The way you gathered his possessiveness in the form of Arvind and her marriage, wonderful! He would have indeed reacted that way, felt it transpire in front of my eyes. 👏
Then, his realization was bang on. A cigarette and all the questions in his mind, finally he found an answer to them and he wasn't even scared of her rejection! Okay I admit, you made me fall in love with him despite his flaws.
Hehe...tumne thodi der kar di...abhi abhi bande ne realize kar liya ki he's in love with Naina...😆 I'm glad I could do justice to the scenes I've written here! 😳

The moment he understood it wasn't about her feelings, it was about him realizing his own feelings, I literally wanted to hug him then and there. That dialogue was so well thought out. You reached some other level with this update I think 🤗
🤗I'm honoured dear! Thank you so much! This part was an extremely pivotal one in their story...I was actually apprehensive about how it would be received...😊

His helplessness and longing, made me hope against hope that Naina would appear out of thin air 😳 Naina topped and he was a proud boyfriend! Hayye mera bachha 😃

Tibrewal and his confrontation, another brilliant piece 👏 The way he said sabko pata tha , tujhe chod kar gadhe, ek toh ye Tibrewal gadha! Pehle hi bta deta na? 😆😛 Anyways, the way he said you got the best girl, couldn't agree more ☺️
Haha...Tibru pehle bata deta to kahani aage nai badhti 😆 aur fir Sameer ne iski kaafi baar ache se pitai ki hai...thoda darr gaya hoga! 😆

Sameer and that one moment when he imagines Naina stood out for me. When he imagines her saying, "Baarish mein bheegta hua samandar kitna sundar lagta hai!" Aaah! Someone notices things like these, warmed up my heart 🤗
Bilkul...ye line actually mere husband ki hai...he loves to see "baarish mein bheegta hua samandar"...wo bhi Mumbai mein...So all credit goes to him here...But I couldn't help but put it in here...😳 And it's these little things around us, which adds spark in our lives doesn't it? 😊

I really hope phone par naina ho but I'm 99% sure nahi hai, he needs to work to meet her 😉 Though I loved this new version of Sameer!
Hehe...iski details next part mein reveal karungi! 😆
When he came out all dressed and thought to himself sabko lagega shaadi mein ja raha hun. Kahin meri toh nahi. Awww
Hehe...shaadi wala pyaar ho gaya na ab Sameer ko! 😉
I was always right in thinking you're gonna give an update that's gonna blow up my mind and it did. 😃 It was so much worth the wait :D
Love you so much Aayushi!🤗 I'm so happy that I was able to deliver what was expected of me here! 😳

Much love
I can't wait for the next, but I am willing to wait if the result is this amazing.
I'll mostly try to update the coming weekend dear...hope you'll like that one too! 😊

Aayushi <3

Aayushi! Such wonderful comments yaar! Dil garden garden ho gaya!
My replies in pink.
Love
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Too good Sur! Intezar ka phal bohoot meetha tha :)

I'm honoured May!

Sameer reacting without thinking when Naina tried to gauge his feelings was expected! But the overnight realisation was unexpected! You really know how to keep us guessing all the time.
Haha...thanks yaar...kahani mein twist ho tabhi to maza aata hai na! 😃

Poor Naina. I want to hug her! You have beautifully written the agony experienced by her.
I'm glad I could portray her emotions well here! 😊

That scene of Sameer crying in the rain and praying in the temple was took my heart. Sometimes I think hard situations are gods ways of making sure that we forget our ego and now to him. Sameer praying so desperately for the first time that he will never ask for anything else shows just how essential and integral Naina has become for his life to hold meaning. But he is still a fool. He has still not realised how much she loves him. If he who has been with other girls for just time pass or physical gratification, was stuck with her for long out of love. How could she be with him for anything but love?
Very true May! 👏Another insightful comment from you. This is actually God's way of letting us know the things we are taking for granted are actually very valuable to us...and if God can lift us up in a jiffy, then also in an instant, the same Supreme power can bring us down to our knees!
That's true...the realization that he's been in love after all is new to Sameer...new to digest and assimilate...but then he also fears Naina's reaction...he's much rendered devoid of love all his life, now that he can't abstain from it...he wants it to be reciprocated. He's trying not to be too optimistic, lest he gets his hopes high and stumbles back to the ground! 😊 Naina's actions have been shouting love all the time, but Sameer is yet to realize this. 😊

The words - he hoped the cyclone would not have a catastrophic impact on his own life, almost felt like a warning of something about to go very wrong...
It could have been...could not have been...I'll not reveal the suspense here! 😆
Eagerly waiting for the next update!

Hey May! My replies in pink.
Love for the wonderful response!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya2910

Wow!! What a smashing update.

Finally realisation strikes. And a dhak dhak moment of all of us including Samaina.

Looking forward to an exciting update.

Thank you so much Priya...yes Sameer's home now! Glad you found the update exciting!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: yashimalhotra

Mere Dil to sachme dhak dhak kar Raha tha throughout this update

Firstly, FINALLY Sameer realised his love for Naina. Tibrewal was right, moti Budhi hai ladke ki.
And secondly, Nooo! Don't just stop like that. I really wanna know what happens next asap. This is way too intriguing for me to be able to handle for long.
So please please update soon the next part.
Also, your writing is so wonderful. Could feel Sameer's pain and tadap.
Did i mention please update soon.
Thanks for the PM.

Hey Yashi! Glad you enjoyed the anticipation and excitement I'd intended for the update...Tibru is smarter than Sameer after all! 😉 Hehe...update bada lamba ho gaya tha yaar already n kaafi din se cliffhanger nai diya tha na isliye thoda pareshan kar liya sabko! Sorry kaan pakad ke Sameer style mein! 😆 I'm glad my writing touched your emotional cords dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Sameer Ka Pta nai let me say this to u.. love u soo much sur ...i liked the update alot ❤️ it was little sad to see sameer so restless but he deserves this at least thoda Tadapna toh bnta hai... Pure college ko khabar thi but usko nai thi ki he has fallen in love with Naina... In fact I feel Naina ko itni jldi nai mnana chahiye. . Kya smjhta hai sameer khud ko Jb mn Kare timepass bol de Jb mn Kare pyaar. . I really want Naina to be a strong girl... Accepting the relation on her own terms. .. Pehli Baar story mei tebriwal Acha lga Mereko ..

Though Mandir wala confession of sameer was heart touching l. Let me tell u cliffhanger par chodne se paap lgta hai 😆

Hey Suman! 😃 🤗Dil le lo...arey yaar is baar maaf kar do...cliff hanger pe choda...😆 Glad you enjoyed the update...Sam sad hai true...but he's realized his love a little late for Naina...Tibru n pure college ko bhi pata tha socho! Ab tadap jitni zyada...pyaar utna gehra hota hai na! 😃 Naina strong hai don't worry...😳😳
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Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
Realization, it often is followed close on the heels by repurcussions. Here too we see the same, first the dawning of the ultimate truth which was right out there glaring and staring into your face yet the denial made it so hard to accept.

Naina's feelings, that i felt while reading the update:

You kept on coddling your soul to keep it guilt free, saying what we had was simply 'friends with benefits'. But my heart, what about it? It thudded and beat only for you, i could see glimpses of same feelings in your eyes. Your protective behaviour would always perplex me and give me that ray of hope, your understanding nature, that mutual pining that we felt when away and that ready to quit all the vices that you harboured for all these years. I was like that ship caught amidst baleful winds and turbulent waves, hoping against hope for some miracle but alas! Miracles are for fairytales ours was never the one.


Sameer's anguish:
We met after days, it was one of those special days when we leant on one and another basking in the warmth of each other's presence, i kissed you to make us the perfect moment. Your very presence is a balm for my sore wounds, wounds that i kept camouflaged for years from the world. They were mine and i would hide them with my arrogance. But then you came, peeling me layer by layer, the start wasn't the best, but what it culminated into is special. Initially i had thought that you would wear me off in a week or two but slowly and ateadily your presence grew upon me. Then it was no longer solely about the physical intimacy but about those long walks that we would take in the comforting presence of one another, about me indulging dont know why?! But your whims and fancies, about you and me baring our souls to each other. Then no vow, no promise, no boundary could bind us.we were like two bodies with enterwined souls. We were one another's solace. Staying away from you even for minutes made me writhe and we were ready to risk everything only to be together. But amidst all of this i always pushed those feelings away, brushing them off in the name of friendship. My heart would beat in sync with yours but my mind denied and didn't let me accept. But today you brought me down with a crash, when you told me about your intended alliance with a different man. Even your name with some tom dick and harry made my blood boil and my heart seared in pain, the anguish spilled like some lava from a volcano and instead of pulling you to me and kissing you senseless and laying my claim on you i pushed you aside with my anger. Why did i do that? Because my mind was still in denial and in the battle of heart and mind it was making that one last futile attempt to distance me from you but it failed and my heart triumphed and in just a jiffy i knew i was in love all along. I was in love with you from the times i hated you for being teacher's pet in school, from when you ratted about me in front of the principal, from the time when you brushed me aside in that party from where it all started. I have loved you since eternity and will continue loving you for infinity no matter what your desicion be. This frantic search that i have launched myself into is not only to confess my feelings but also to lead us on a path a where we would have each other as 'us'. Naina i love you please come back. I just hope my stupidity hasn't pushed you away from me forever. These tears are of anguish, pain and helplessness, what i had i didn't treasure and now am hoping against hope that i get it back, that it isn't lost forever. Am berating myself every second for not seeing what the world could right from the very start. Come back to me my love and i would hold you tight in my arms while my heart would lavish you with all the love.



I loved it Sur
Edited by doublecross - 7 years ago

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