Originally posted by: Mayashika
Well, here I am again: 😆
Well, it's a known fact for all the readers of this story that when Sameer and Naina are in a room, then some actions are a must. Hehe. I am happy with the turn outs but just scared for Naina, one sided love hurts when it is done with such intensity, I mean Sam's realisation is pending but the only assurance that you will do it in the next update. I still remember how Naina realised her love for Sam under the shower and broke down and I cried buckets. She is so sensitive and it's already clear how she won't be able to conceal her feelings for long.
Hehe...I know dear...Sameer n Naina of this story can't stay without doing anything when inside one room! 😆 You are right...Sam's realization hasn't happened n Naina fears to lose him...
But if I leave practical thinking, that flashback of the night before was too much endearing especially his style of saying her measurements, haaye.
Yup...itna to hai ki Sameer does care for Naina n does find himself desiring her! 😆
Shefali's sudden entry did build my expectations suddenly as we all know how intelligent she is in all the love matter. And loved, loved, loved how you used the messy state if her room to show how messy has her life become with no direction, with no reassurance. And the another worth mentioning was the 'hawa' Shefali and Naina used when the former found about the packet, it reminded me of hawa ka jhonka and this time, with a deeper meaning.
Wow! Bingo Shreya...you identified both the subtle symbolisms here...Naina's life has indeed become messy and that hawa ka jhonka who brought the packet was indeed "Sameer"...Shefali is the only one who can knock sense in Naina in matters as intricate as these...
The confrontation with Shefali was much needed and was spot on, tbh from a readers view few lines Shefali said would have been wrong as we know Sameer loves her, just didn't realise which is causing problems. Note I would be saying about the conversation between the friends in a more emotional and individual point of view if you feel I contradict somewhere. Right in their own places, I wondered about the hints, did Sam give them? Maybe is my answer. The first day they made love and the present is far different if they look at their relation keeping aside the physical aspect. Naina had not noticed Sam's body language changing, his reason for jealousy. I am not really sure whether you will get jealous for someone 'who just satisfies the needs'. But it's true too that he never allowed his actions to be pondered upon, there were multiple times when it felt Sam pressed the 'just friends' unintentionally.
You are right dear...to readers, some of Shefali's words might seem contradictory or odd or hurtful😕. I actually felt bad writing all that, honestly!..But then I tried to show Shefali as a third party..as an outsider who knows only as much about Sameer what Naina has let her know..and then Shefali knows he's a rich, spoilt kid, who apparently was a thief and who never resepcted her or her family. We know Sameer has actually fallen in love with Naina, but here Shefali doesn't know, nor does Sameer, nor Naina...had there been any other unscrupulous guy in Sameer's place, he may have actually used Naina and dumped him...such guys are adept at sweet-talking innocent girls and in the end when they get bored, or when the girl demands a committment, they vanish leaving the girl to fend for themselves...😕 Thankfully, Sameer isn't like that...but I wanted to show what Naina did wasn't entirely sensible...yes, one does lose their minds in love, yet it can have dangerous consequences, especially if you are madly in love with that person. Naina does realize there is more to Sameer than meets the eye...she knows he desires her, she knows he considers her as his best friend n truly cares for her, yet everytime the conversation steers to the angle of love, he conveniently acts ignorant...Naina is confused n worried...I just tried to show the conflicting emotions racing through her mind n heart...I hope I've been able to present this side clearer now dear...😊
Assurance in a relationship is important too which she never got if she thinks, they say live in the moment but there should be at least a small thing to look forward to. And what they are sharing is not some simple thing, Naina has competent given her mind, body and soul to Sameer and Shefali is right, it will hurt her very very badly.
What Shefali said at the end was the best advice, propose him and then see..The hope she has in her heart will only crush her to pieces if her love is rejected. Not much being written as I know my answers will lie in the next update.
True dear...Naina has done what all is there in her power for now...probably more...now she needs to toughen up and put Sameer to a test!😉
A birthday spent to clear the troubles in her life, amazing! I loved Shefali here, her unexpected entry did surprise me and then the story is about unexpected twists, hehe.
Hehe...that's true...Shefali ko maine isi purpose ke liye introduce kiya tha story mein shuru mein...instead of Swati n Preeti! 😆
Gosh, that was something, am still laughing. Sameer is so involved with Naina now he seems to think that whoever is in the bed is Naina, I say, this boy has lost it. I am unabe to stop laughing but that action of his paved the path towards the confession to his friends which I absolutely loved.
In this serious situation too I couldn't stop laughing when Pandit said Baha, his sense or humour is very much appreciated here.
Batao...nind mein hi Naina hi dikhti hai...aur kehte hain ki pyaar nahi...ab kya kahun main iske baare mein! 😆 Ab jahan Mundit n Sameer hain, wahan a tinge of humour is necessary na...😆
Very much grateful towards Munna and Pandit for putting the Love word in Sameer's brain, he should think about it, join the dots and realise soon until it's too late, his friends has already joined the dots which is something to be relieved about.
Hehe...Mundit hi daal sakte hain iske dimag mein wo 4 letter magical word! 😆 Aur chinta mat karo, inhone daal diya hai...program is running at the background...abhi preprocessing stage mein hai isliye ye denials hain! 😆
I will thrash Sameer, I am annoyed as well as feeling excited as he's gonna realise, finally. Along with his oblivion, he's blind too! Did he seriously ask himself about Naina's liking for him? Can I hit your Sameer, di? Hehe.
Haha...maaro maaro...he deserves it I know...dumbo hai na ye! 😆
Basically this was a rant post, as I am very late and everyone would have said their thoughts about this update and I didn't want it to be repetitive. Sorry for the delay though and hope you enjoy reading my rant 😉
Nah...that was a great rant post dear...I enjoyed it thoroughly! 😃
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