Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Ramy_ani

Kya suspense he can't wait to read further

Updating soon.Thank you.

Originally posted by: yashimalhotra

Awesome story

I love the conversations you write for them ..So on point with the characters and delightful

Absolutely lovely

Please PM me when you upload next

Thank you dear for appreciating.Would surely PM.

Originally posted by: Hitanshivyas

Amazing update kuch to jhool hua hai Nagpur mein but I know sameer jasoos will find out about it soon i just loved the way he consoles her and make her understand that he loves her not her markes or anything else .. waiting for the next update update soon

Thank you Hitanshi for loving it in whole.

Originally posted by: Prizi

amazing update...

Thank you dear.

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

Wonderful update but thoda suspense bhi hai ... I think swati aur naina k beech kuch gdbad hui ... But karthik bhi involve lgta hai .. lets see how sameer jasoos maheshwari figures it out ... Eagarly waiting for next update ...thank you for the pm

Thank you Suman for loving it.updating soon.

Originally posted by: tanya119

From where shall i start?
I would review each part with one word "Mind-blowing".
Your concept and title is itself a mystery.
And after each update, you leave a cliffhanger in a way that no one can predict whats next in store. Thats what grips the readers to your story, which is amazing.
You write each and everything so smoothly, that whether its a dialogue or emotions, everything just goes with the flow.
Every scene starts and ends so well with no question in mind.
I just loved each and every bit of it.

Ps: after the break this is the first one which i read and iam glad that i started with this.

Thanks for the pm😃

Update soon😳

Thank you Tanya for appreciating it.I am humbled by the kind words.😳 Glad that you loved it so much.Updating soon.

Originally posted by: Radkam

Read both parts together... abhi mere andar ka Jason's bhi activate jo Gaya! I loved how Sam cared for Naina at her lowest...
So now, Sunaina is in love with Sam? 😡 plz triangle mat bana dena 😔 & Nagpur ki mystery jaldi unfold karo...waiting!

Thanks Radhika for loving it.Hope you don't get disappointed with the moves the story would take

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Hi Minu, lovely update dear! The way Sameer supported Naina when she arrived upset from the trip was just awesome!

Ved character sounds like a good addition to the story. Looking forward to see why Karthik tried to sabotage him. Karthik seem to be set to create problems for lot of people... but why??!

Aur Sunaina Kaha khoi hui hai? It seemed she was oblivious to Sameer too!

Looking forward to the next update!

Thank you May for all the encouraging words and appreciating me always.😃 All the whys would be answered in further updates and hope your interest gets piqued.

Originally posted by: shravyarao

Loved the twists n turns you are coming up with, its making the story intriguing. I can't stop laughing with the sameer n sunaina's convo, loved it, nagpur mein kisi pagal kutte ne nahi kaat diya isko lol. Yaar, totally loved how sameer took care of naina, when she was feeling all out of sorts. So, kartik stole ved's notes n naina was late for the competition. What is karthik upto now? Kartik deserves some more, priyank deserves more than him. I don't know why, but i don't like priyank at all in the show, i kinda want to kick him everytime he comes up, no offense to anyone but i think his character was built to be disliked, Sameer loudly proclaiming and asserting his love for naina to get rid of her insecure self to see herself through his eyes hayee..!! and him becoming ahmedabads jasoos 😆 can't wait for the next one.

Thanks for the PM love.

Thanks Shravya for appreciating and loving it.You are a fabulous writer and such kind words coming from a writer does encourage to strive better and write out the best.No body loves Priyank and I feel his character is being wasted making him flat.Round character can anyday be interesting to watch.Sameer is definitely goals here.Updating soon.

Originally posted by: Azraa01

I will patiently wait for detective Sameer to unfold the Brains Meet mystery.

Thank you for the pm.

Patience is the key.Thank you dear.