Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44 - Page 18

From where shall i start?
I would review each part with one word "Mind-blowing".
Your concept and title is itself a mystery.
And after each update, you leave a cliffhanger in a way that no one can predict whats next in store. Thats what grips the readers to your story, which is amazing.
You write each and everything so smoothly, that whether its a dialogue or emotions, everything just goes with the flow.
Every scene starts and ends so well with no question in mind.
I just loved each and every bit of it.

Ps: after the break this is the first one which i read and iam glad that i started with this.

Thanks for the pm😃

Update soon😳

Read both parts together... abhi mere andar ka Jason's bhi activate jo Gaya! I loved how Sam cared for Naina at her lowest...
So now, Sunaina is in love with Sam? 😡 plz triangle mat bana dena 😔 & Nagpur ki mystery jaldi unfold karo...waiting!

Hi Minu, lovely update dear! The way Sameer supported Naina when she arrived upset from the trip was just awesome!

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Loved the twists n turns you are coming up with, its making the story intriguing. I can't stop laughing with the sameer n sunaina's convo, loved it, nagpur mein kisi pagal kutte ne nahi kaat diya isko lol. Yaar, totally loved how sameer took care of naina, when she was feeling all out of sorts. So, kartik stole ved's notes n naina was late for the competition. What is karthik upto now? Kartik deserves some more, priyank deserves more than him. I don't know why, but i don't like priyank at all in the show, i kinda want to kick him everytime he comes up, no offense to anyone but i think his character was built to be disliked, Sameer loudly proclaiming and asserting his love for naina to get rid of her insecure self to see herself through his eyes hayee..!! and him becoming ahmedabads jasoos 😆 can't wait for the next one.

Thanks for the PM love.

I will patiently wait for detective Sameer to unfold the Brains Meet mystery.

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update

Thank you dear.

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani

Awesome update dear

Kuch toh jhoot hua hain Nagpur mein

But Sameer jaasoos sb pta laga lega we trust him

Update soon dear jyada din suspense mein mat rakhna pls

😳

Thank you dear for appreciating.Updating soon.

Originally posted by: mystique123

Why am I feeling that we are going to get an unexpected twist 😉

The manner in which Sameer tried to bring a smile on Naina was so endearing. Sameer is the best bf. His love, care and belief is inexplicable 😊

Ved, Priyank and Karthik, something is cooking for sure and Sunaina is the dumbest.

Waiting for the next update.

Love

Thank you dear for loving this piece.😃

Originally posted by: dreamyp

Hey minu

It was lovely update dear.. naina n sameer both r strength of each other. Tu gire to me sambhal lu or me guru to tu sambhal lena.. very nice..

Thank you Minakshi and yes you said it true..strength of each other.