Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44 - Page 21

Minu, why was the a lil bit short than all the previous ones?

Maybe it's me who is not getting enough of the story 😆

Loving the way the story is shaping up yaar, i seriously thank you for not making sunaina fall for sameer here, thank you, thank you so much. i kinda got fed with everybody falling for sameer in the college 😆the seniors giving flying kisses made me puke🤢 in the show, but thats just me wanting sameer only for naina 😆.

This story is giving me thriller vibes with all the sameer jasoos kaam he is hell bent on doing, i don't know why i end laughing when he goes into questioning mode. You are giving such unexpected twists dear, can't really even guess where the next one goes. It's got me hooked up to ur story.

Awesome one Minu!! Keep coming up with more and please longer ones de do na!!

Thanks for the PM love.😳

Part 4 and 5: Yaar...First of all, I must applaud you for bringing out the suspense in this story...Initially I thought, it was more of a romantic getaway pe story on Samaina...but it wasn't. At every stage, you've proved your readers wrong n kept them guessing as to the next line of plot. Me being a huge fan of crime and suspense, was hooked onto this one. That reminds me- what happened to Keshav's murder story? Do you not have plans to continue it?

Again coming back to this one, Sameer ka Detective Byomkesh Bakshi avatar...haaye I love it. The changed behaviours of Naina, Swati, Sunaina, Kartik, Priyank and trying to decipher what exactly happened at the Brains Meet n Sameer trying to decode all was a treat to read. Why would his Naina lie to him? What has happened to Swati? How did the best buddies Priyank n Kartik end up fighting? Why would Kartik want to help Naina? And of course, the twist with the videshi angrez. The humour in this story is another of it's plus points. You are quite good at it Minu. You should explore that area more. Videshi angez vs. desi angrez convo was a treat to read. I could so imagine Mundit's reaction. And yahan, Sunaina ne ek hafte mein kiss bhi kar liya...n Samaina ab tak atke hain! Kya hoga in dono ka haha! But I'm very curious about the guy Sunaina has fallen for...doesn't seem one bit right to me!

A wonderful job Minu!

I'm eager for the next one now!

Lots of love

Sur

You write very well, thanks for the PM...

This is turning more and more interesting!

The scene in the basketball court had my heart, one of the things I love in their relation is how they instantly make each other feel better about the situation..And Sam's asuurance of his love is neither based on her merits nor how she looks. I felt so happy there

And those cracking jokes when someone's sad is so me, hehe.

Just when I thought the reason for Naina's sadness is revealed and now it's all gonna be romance, you have introduced another twist which I am simply loving considering my love for suspense/thrillers.

This Ved reminded me of that stuck up guy I had as my partner for an assignment, it's so hard to deal with them 😆

But on a serious note, the fight has perked up my curiosity!

Just like Sameer's confusion, why would Kartik steal Ved's study material and as far as I recall, you haven't even mentioned any enmity...I am pressuring my brain to think!

Sameer in jasoos mode is so cute, Naina is making hard for him by not answering his questions. She was late and I am curious to know why.

Along with that, I am waiting for Naina to give Sam his deserved prize😉

Sunaina. It seems she isn't crushing on Sam and its someone else. Who caught her eye?

Running to read the next one as I am finding it hard to contain my curiosity 😆

Abbas mustan ki aatma shayad tumhare andar ghus gayi hai..

It was wonderful..

It seems Swati has a lot going in her mind which is resulting in her mood swings and now the hint that Sunaina can be the reason behind it.

I would like to say that I am elated to find that Sam is not the boy Sunaina is smitten by. When I was pondering about the Sunaina- Swati angle, for a second is thought maybe Swati is crushing on the same guy which Sunaina likes too but well, it's SwaMun

You know now I am raking my mind thinking various possibilities. Sunaina sharing the whole Nagpur adventure felt a little fishy for me but well, she's a dreamy girl so I can't comment much about it. Isn't Kartik Sunaina's boyfriend here and he allowed her to go on a date! Or did she sneak out?

Now Swati giving the wrong timetable!!! I mean, I sincerely hope there's no underlying intention against Naina as I adore their friendship. 😳

The moment of the chapter was the talk about kiss between Samaina, their interactions have my heart as always.

I know I am being such an annoying reader here by bombarding you with questions but can't help. The plot which holds suspense is my weakness😆

Eagerly waiting for the next move!🤗

Waiting for next! PM me if possible please.. so i won't miss the next!

Sameer is the best boyfriend he never wants to make his Naina uncomfortable

Sunaina ko bhi loveria ho gaya

But why Dear Swati had given wrong timetable to Naina "kuch toh gadbad hain Daya"

Update soon dear yeh toh kisi detective novel se bhi jyada interesting hain 😳