Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44 - Page 16

Originally posted by: Anjali33

It was awesome Minu

I loved the part where Sameer combed her hair.. That was just❤️

Flashback was nice.. BTW Preeti coming to college with jijaji in his car😎 that was cute

Please update asap

Originally posted by: moumita04

Minu - first of all apologies for the delay... I am so lagging behind in commenting on all the updates, especially yours and Sur's...

So here's my comment for part 2:

Sabse pehle to I love bright red nail polish... 😳😳

This colour has an impact na?😳

Yay..!! Sameer scored, and then he sauntered off to collect his reward... hahaa... Naina was so nervous... all that brave talks of flying kiss se zyada came back to torment her... but still she went with him to that abandoned basketball court... aww... so much trust and love...

Trust is what keeps a relation going and this is very necessary for the age they are going through.

Sameer is fabulous boy-friend... The way he struggled to study... wanting to ensure her happiness... He had said Naina ki khushi ke liye main kuch bhi kar sakta hun... and he proved it... her smile, her happiness means everything to her...

This studying Sameer is my goal.😉 Anything for love also involves being in rankers list.

And Naina asks tumhe sach me kuch zyada chahiye kya... hahhaa... my girl, you don't even know how much more he wants... 😆

Loved Sameer's declaration through that song... along with Naina I laughed too...

Should put his song and shayar abilities in tense situations to lighten up mood.😃

Then her happiness on knowing the results... that squeezing hug and a forehead kiss.. lovely...

The inclusion of Priyank is not giving me good vibes... I am sure JBR told the truth the first time... kuch to jhol karke enter hua hai... not really scored... and there's a reason you have kept Sameer's score just slightly above the required criteria...

Yeah yeah..Unanticipated moves as it has already been titled.Kuch bhi ho sakta hai.

Off to read part 3 now... Have a meeting though, so might take some time to comment... 😳

As always, beautiful writing sweetheart... 👏👏

Love,

Mou

Originally posted by: moumita04

Part 3 also done...

Minu, I want to complain... Kyun Naina ke sapne tod diye... She so wanted to go with Sameer, and I had my heart all set for some Nagpur romance... even though I was anticipating this to happen after reading about Priyank in part 2, I was trying to keep my fingers crossed and hope for the best...

Nagpur mein Romance kaise karte hein..I don't know.Isliye nehin bheja ek saath.😈😆 Oh darling..Hope for best and be prepared to read the worst.😉

But I too felt so sad to read about Naina crying so much... But adored the way Sameer comforted her... and he was right she shouldn't back out of the competition just because he wasn't going... Loved the line where you mention he could bear her tears, but not let her be a broken dreamer...

👏👏

Sameer had his mind set.He didn't know he would score even s much if Naina would not have pestered him.But then he is responsible for her future.He can't let her fall and fail.

That gesture of combing her hair, and putting on that hair band was pure love... ❤️

And of course, Sameer hai to matlab Naina ke sawaal pe flirt to karega hi... to kya sochu nahate waqt... 😆😆😆 I was also like - yeah Naina, please be specific... there are a lot of things to dream about while bathing...

Yeah who better than you knows it...😉 Two two cold showers...Naina yahan bachi hai use kahan pata ki kya kya sochte hein nahate waqt.

The rain flashback was cute... Auto me sab saath me... and that stare from fellow passenger on seeing that Sameer wanted to pick up girls... hahhaa... 😆😆

The fellow was put for this reason.😆

So now, there's something that happened which made Naina lose her smile... Not good, not good... Are we going to get to see an angry Sam??

Anticipate the Unanticipated.😉

All in all, loved it Minu... 😳

Looking forward to read more...

Love,

Mou

Originally posted by: bushraurooj

great update...hahaha safari suit ka damaad...sameer combing naina's hair was just ... hope kuch zyada bura na Hua ho brains meet me...

update soon dear...

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Minu..

I was trying to read it kabse...finally aaj office me chup chup ke padh liya...mujhe lag hi raha tha ye sukapr gang kuch siyappa karenge...I'm sure Sameer deserved to go...but ye trustee ke pote ki chaal hogi...I was as sad as Naina here...n the flashback was love...baarish! Need I say more? Sameer akele thodi chodega apni jaan ko...ab kya naya kaand kar diya us kutil tikdi ne...Sameer koot dega us Kartik ko!!

Jaldi jaldi update karna Minu...I'm eager to know hua kya hai!

Originally posted by: doublecross

This story is depicting a new side of naina which is quite lovable. We usually see her as someone with a sound mind and judgement with he'll lot of patience and quite mature for her age though her innocence deep down within is intact. But here we are seeing a more childlike naina who throws tantrums and sheds a year or two to get her way with sameer. Love it when sameer holds her close and consoles her with all the reasons and logic. That prize talk was cute Minu. I felt like tweaking their cheeks together. They are such overload of cuteness. You left It as a cliffhanger, now what happened that naina is upset. Am intrigued.

Do update soon

Please forgive me for replying late. Amidst dirty diapers, a equalling infant and sleep deprived eyes, it's a little difficult at times. But promise I'll always come abd read your work because I enjoy them a great deal.

Update soon

Originally posted by: Ramy_ani

Superb story awesome updates continue soon

Originally posted by: Mayashika

I knew it wasn't going to be easy to go to Nagpur together but they didn't even reach there together😭 Well, life doesn't go as planned..It's sad, actually.

True dear..Life is not as per our plan ..Man proposes and god disposes.

The guilt and the sadness was perfectlly represented, I could feel the heaviness in my chest maybe because I have seen it closely...When it seems like your dreams are shattering, it's such an unpleasant feeling you get.

Its really unsettling and choking.

He would withstand it all but never let her be a broken soul or broken dreamer.

That pretty much sums up his feeling, isn't it!? There is nothing to add.

Such a romantic moment that was, him setting her hair. Her imperfections are just for him to see!

And haha, that quick innuendo.😉

Glad you loved the whole of it.😃

I loved that short scene of Jija-Saali, I always enjoy them😳 They have such an adorable bond.

Loved the flashback!

Something happened in the trip. If the reason is someone, I would like an angry Sameer.

Can't wait for the next...!

Updating soon.😃

Originally posted by: _.SilentHeart._

PART 2..

So sorry dear for being late in commenting

Happy belated birthday to Chachaji.. 😃

Thank you dear on his behalf.😃

As usual beautiful update.. Loved it!! 👍🏼

Thank you for appreciating.

Umm bright red nail polish.. This girl is totally tease 😉

She is giving hug to him, this means that this girl has come a long way.. But he wants more, consolation prize

Sameer is such a despo boy, can't control.. "Hum tum ek basket ball ground mein khade ho aur kiss ho jaaye" he was singing this, it was really funny 😆

Glad that the song actually made you laugh.😃

So the forehead kiss was his prize, it was cute... but he wanted something different

I enjoyed the tashan between Sameer and Kartik's gang.. loved the way he answered them 👏

Kartik needs a good tashan.I am not liking how they are forcing the tashan on show.

Preeti is very smart.. She knows perfectly that how to deal with Taiji, her idea was an awesome

Bad Jokes of JBR.. It was fun to read 😆

Priyank ko 76% kaise mil gaye, cheating hi hogi yeh toh.. Fir bhi jeetega nahi wo

Iske liye stay tuned.😳

Thanks for the PM dear

Originally posted by: _.SilentHeart._

PART 3

Again beautiful update dear.. Loved it!! 👏

Loved the scene where Sameer was consoling Naina..

Sameer is a perfect SIL for SS.. thappad ki baatein kar raha tha 😆

Firse Naina Sameer ko choose kar rahi hai.. She must understand that the study is also important.

Isliye toh Sameer samjha raha hai.He is near her and can't let her fail like last time.

You have written beautiful dialogues for Sameer.. "Pushpa! Sorry Naina!I hate tears re", loved this one 👍🏼

Glad you are loving the dialogues.😃

Rain flashback was so cute.. It was totally pyaar ❤️

Felt bad for Naina, she has also lost her smile.. Her dream also broke, Hope that Sameer will do something 😃

Sameer would do but what he does for that keep reading.😃

Cliffhanger!! But I love it.. It increases curiosity

Update soon and Thanks for the PM dear