SamAina TS:- Love Kills Part 3 Page 13 - Page 9

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Awesome update Muskaan!

Thank you so much May!

You have taken on a very touchy and difficult topic. Hats off to you for that 👏 it's very easy to criticise unhealthy habits like smoking and drinking without understanding the reason people especially young kids get pulled in that direction. You have explained the origins of Sameer's addiction very well. Every time he has felt lost and in need of something to reduce his pain he has turned to smoking. Not that it can solve any of his problems but it does provide him a temporary escape from reality and momentary high.

My source of inspiration was the picture posted by SSM on Instagram that showed Sameer gambling and smoking. Although they didn't show that in the show, yet that picture stayed in my head and gave me an idea of writing on this topic. Criticizing is easy, but quitting smoking is easier said than done...by a long shot. Since this starts in early teenage years when we are easily swayed under social pressure, I thought of writing on this. And because relationships too tend to brew in this age, I thought of combining the two...only set in un dino..😆

Naina's hurt is caused not only by his bd habit but more due to the fact that he has been hiding it from her and lying to her so effortlessly. This lying is the bigger culprit from their relationship point of view. Of course Naina will stand by him and help him overcome his demons!
Once a trust is lost, it is very hard to regain it...just like Sameer said to Swati the other day...it's all about your wants and needs and how sometimes your wants become your needs. That's when you need someone to pull you out of the sheath of darkness. And that's what Naina has promised to do. 😃
Eagerly looking forward to the next part!

I'm eagerly looking forward to posting and hearing your reviews on it too! Will do so very soon! 😃

Loved it!!!

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed

Update was so good

Very well written

You penned the whole situation very beautifully ..

Loved it

Waiting for part 3 ..

So Sameer will leave it

And naina is indeed his light

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani

It was very nice dear😳

waiting for part 3

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Naina's Love has truly healed Sameer
Lovely update
Thank you for the pm
Is there a part 3 to this?

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

Amezing it was

It was surely worth waiting for

The conversation and emotions was simply beautiful

Loved it to the core

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Love

Laalchi reader

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Nice update Muskaan😃

Loved it😊

Thanks for the pm😊

Originally posted by: VandyP

Aah muskaan

Loved the update. ... Loved how you close the loop of the na wali track from delhi...

Naina should've known about them... And how sam developed this bad habit...

Im so happy you covered this part so brilliantly

Please write more

Originally posted by: tannulove07

please update soon...Yaar at a time your are writing two stories...

please try to maintain both sorry but to say it's more then week you still not post ashdeep ts- who first ... i really waiting for the ASHDEEP TS update

so please post soon

i cant wait for

i really fan of your written your are doing great job...

really well written...

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

I read both parts together muskan and I really loved the story... I think cigratte smoking se zyada naina ko isliye bhi hurt hua ki sameer was lying to her all this while and that too without any regret ..sad on his part .. But the fact that naina stood against it was best part ..

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Naina was hurt not because she felt smoking was bad, of course it's harmful but it's an individual choice but Sameer's lies without an ounce of hesitation and guilt.

It starts with one, two then a bunch and by then, you will lose the count. You become under the spell of addiction and often, addicted are judged but no one tries to understand and empathise.

Aced it, Shreya! Smoking is a bad habit, I agree. But lying is a form of encouragement of this bad habit, which Sameer has done to Naina. She wouldn't have been this hurt by the fact that he had started smoking than she is now that Sameer lied all this while, that too so effortlessly. She felt as if her love had been betrayed and that she hadn't been able to establish the faith in him...the hesitance in confiding to her left her more devastated. Sameer on the other hand couldn't see her break down due to his actions, and thus decided to hide this fact from her. He couldn't see himself stoop so low in her eyes and thus began the rigmarole of lies.

There, hats off to you for writing such a sensitive topic in a most simple manner that it touches the heart successfully!

Thank you so much for reading, reviewing and appreciating my work, Shreya. Your words as readers give me the confidence to write on such topics...😃

I especially really liked how you brought the reason very clearly with necessary flashbacks why he got addicted again, this time with a feeling of no turning back but I know he will be proved wrong.

I have always mentioned how I like you bring subtle flashbacks. ❤️

Thus the soft corner and preference for ABFOT 😉😆 The flashbacks not only emphasize important events but also bring a depth to the story...I'm really happy to hear you liked it! 😃

The second flashback made me blush so much, in spite that was half lie. That needs to get closure in the next one. 😉

I can't promise anything since intimacy is still something I'm trying to understand and write...other stories on the forum act as a source of inspiration and motivation (Mou Di's, Sur Di's, Minu Di's) and I'm trying my best...kyunki koshish karne walon ki kabhi haar nahi hoti 😆

The way he clutched onto her, pleading not to leave him shows how much emotional dependant on her. She stood by him made me fill with warmth, she won't leave him, I know or else he will be pushed into the darkness completely.

She understands him more than himself. And she loves him unconditionally. Or maybe...I'll leave it at that.

Love is an addiction and this addiction will overpower the other addiction, leaving it out for the good.

Loved this line, Shreya! ❤️

Muskan dear, loving this! Waiting for more.