SamAina TS:- Love Kills Part 3 Page 13 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990

Part 2:

What a way to represent the topic at hand Muski! Bravo! You nailed it!

Right from the time Sameer started to smoke, to the times he tried covering up his habit with flirtatious lines- lying not to break Naina's trust, yet doing so in the end!

No relationship can ever survive without trust! Sameer was naive when he thought he could keep it hidden from Naina.

I liked how he tried to abstain from smoking even in front of the Delhi gang- but then peer pressure and his vulnerable age got the best of it!

But love prevails- Sameer knows he is always going to choose Naina over anything else!

The heart to heart convo between Sameer and Naina at the temple! Wow! And I especially like the line- the dried leaves swayed defiantly as the wind blew vigorously! Don't know why, but this line brought a certain element of pain and nostalgia around the two souls standing at the temple there!

And Naina confesses she fell for him at first look! Show wali Naina se to umeed nahi! CVs to bhul gaye Sameer ki cigarettebaazi! But tumne dil ki tammanna puri kar di...and actually it's a habit which is not easy to do away with!

So great going girl! The writing & the approach to it was very realisitc!

Loved it!

Sur

Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

First of all Sorry for replying late Muskan ... I loved the part though yeh sach hai I had to re read the previous parts Kyunki main bhool gyi thi plot 😆 ... Yeh jo end ka twist I loved it . . Seriously u have out of the box thinking .. Unpredictable at times. .. All the emotions were bang on and subtle romance was cherry on the cake. . U describe the romantic scenes so well it just adds up the feels to hundred times more. . Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Mayashika

Muskan! 🤗

Firstly, the intentions between the dialogue I badly need one at the beginning and at the end just shows how he has transformed, how the story has progressed beautifully. The twist was good.

I liked Naina's tenacity and you stood by it till the end which made me happy.

Love is a meeting of two souls, fully accepting the dark and the light within each other, bound by the courage to grow through struggle into bliss.

The strongest drug that exists for a human being is another human being, that is why cigarettes didn't stand a chance. I loved how you brought in the fact that all humans are flawed but most important fact to be understood is all are worthy of love. What brought me immense happiness was the acceptance of each other, they truly make each other a better person as they know love isn't only about having a strong feeling for your partner but it is also a a decision, a judgement and a promise.

Love wins, love always wins! ❤️