SamAina TS:- Love Kills Part 3 Page 13

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#71

Nice update Muskaan😃

Loved it😊

Thanks for the pm😊

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vandana

@VandyP

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Posted: 7 years ago

#72

Aah muskaan

Loved the update. ... Loved how you close the loop of the na wali track from delhi...

Naina should've known about them... And how sam developed this bad habit...

Im so happy you covered this part so brilliantly

Please write more

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tannulove07

@tannulove07

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Posted: 7 years ago

#73

please update soon...Yaar at a time your are writing two stories...

please try to maintain both sorry but to say it's more then week you still not post ashdeep ts- who first ... i really waiting for the ASHDEEP TS update

so please post soon

i cant wait for

i really fan of your written your are doing great job...

really well written...

Edited by tannulove07 - 7 years ago

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

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Posted: 7 years ago

#74

I read both parts together muskan and I really loved the story... I think cigratte smoking se zyada naina ko isliye bhi hurt hua ki sameer was lying to her all this while and that too without any regret ..sad on his part .. But the fact that naina stood against it was best part ..

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Shreya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#75

Naina was hurt not because she felt smoking was bad, of course it's harmful but it's an individual choice but Sameer's lies without an ounce of hesitation and guilt.

It starts with one, two then a bunch and by then, you will lose the count. You become under the spell of addiction and often, addicted are judged but no one tries to understand and empathise.

There, hats off to you for writing such a sensitive topic in a most simple manner that it touches the heart successfully!

I especially really liked how you brought the reason very clearly with necessary flashbacks why he got addicted again, this time with a feeling of no turning back but I know he will be proved wrong.

I have always mentioned how I like you bring subtle flashbacks. ❤️

The second flashback made me blush so much, in spite that was half lie. That needs to get closure in the next one. 😉

The way he clutched onto her, pleading not to leave him shows how much emotional dependant on her. She stood by him made me fill with warmth, she won't leave him, I know or else he will be pushed into the darkness completely.

Love is an addiction and this addiction will overpower the other addiction, leaving it out for the good.

Muskan dear, loving this! Waiting for more.

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: A.Green
This got back really bad memories for me 😭 Something similar has happened with me! :/
I hope you could overcome this...just like Naina and Sameer 😊

I liked how you brought this issue out. It was written really well, the pain, desperation, the addiction! Really appreciate your thought of writing this out.
Thank you so much. Though the source of inspiration was a picture uploaded my SSM on instagram, yet this is one life-threatening issue that deserves attention. Thank you so much for appreciating my work, Aayushi Di! 😃

So is it gonna have a part 3? Where he leaves it with his determination?
This surely will have a part 3...might turn out to be as expected to some and shocking to others...I won't reveal anything more.. 😆

Liked how you tried justifying Sameer's stance but alas, it has no explanations.

Continue soon if you can! I would love to read a part 3! 😊

Thank you so much, Aayushi Di! I know I've procrastinated a lot on this one and have delayed the update by nearly a month...probably more than that 😆

Do reread both parts to refresh your memory 'cause the next part is coming out soon! 😃

Keep Spreading the SamAina Magic ❤️

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: _shweta98
Loved it!.. It was perfect!
This is it? Or there's more to this?

Thank you so much!

There is a part 3 to this...which will be coming out really soon!

Keep Spreading the SamAina Magic ❤️

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

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Posted: 6 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Yudkbh30
So heart touching
Lovely update

Thank you so much!

I'm glad to hear you liked it!

Keep Spreading the SamAina Magic ❤️

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Finally Muskaan😆
Sameer has hurt Naina n her trust on him.. We understand that he was alone but she was alone too.. N if your love is strong enough, being lonely shouldn't make any difference

But as they always say, love heals😳 her love would yet again help him get rid of this fatal addiction

You might be thinking ki pata nahi kab aayega next part...or maybe you might have forgotten this TS too...I'm really sorry for not updating this one as frequently (which is pretty rare too 😆) as my other ones.

True...when you are in love, nothing should intimidate you. However, such is not the case with Sameer. He had always been emotionally weak, and Delhi just took advantage of that. Despite Naina's love, he found himself drowning into darkness...that's where men fall weaker than women.

Love shall heal...let's see when and how... 😃

Keep Spreading the SamAina Magic ❤️

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 6 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Radkam
Too many bad memories associated with smoking. Several years ago was in similar situation when I finally decided to break up!

Oh...I hope my TS doesn't become too painful for you... 😊

Keep Spreading the SamAina Magic ❤️

Muskan 😃

Edited by AMereWanderer - 6 years ago