SamAina TS:- Love Kills Part 3 Page 13 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Mayashika

After reading the chapter, my eyes darted to the title, the title which I couldn't comprehend yesterday when you posted the teaser..

Smoking Kills- Love Kills...Did I reach somewhere in this guess game? I am so intrigued now! When can we expect the next chapter?

I so love your writing style, Muskan!

I loved how Naina was transported to her memories in the school at the same time I was hit by nostalgia too- the school being the base of their love story, where everything started..that is why whenever an OS idea pops in my mind, it's based on school.

Aah, the flashback was so sweet..you twisted it to your imagination where the N and S was scribbled in the by Naina in the show...

Their understanding of each other's action made me amazed, how Sameer guessed where she would be present..

Originally posted by: Muskan2001

You guessed it right, Shreya! I always wanted to write something on Sameer's bad influence in Delhi, and the wrongdoings he has hidden from Naina. So cigarettes was the best option I could find. It took me quite some time to figure out an apt title for the TS because I wanted it to be linked to the concept i'm writing on. The problem that threatens to separate them; cigarettes and smoking, and what binds them together; love. Thus the title of the TS; Love Kills 😆 Bang on, Shreya!

Thank you so much for appreciating my work! School definitely holds a special place in their hearts thus the mention of it in each of my works. I'm really happy to know you liked the flashback!

Thank you so much once again!

Muskan 😃

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Cigarette!! Zarur Naina ne Sameer ko smoke krte dekh liya hoga

I know Sameer wouldn't hv wanted to smoke.. Maybe someone insisted too much

Anyways, this was totally out of my guess😆

Update soon

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani

Amazing update dear

The fb scene was so cute

Update soon

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Still very intrigued..
Waiting patiently for the next update

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Thanks a lot Muskan for starting a new TS😃

Intriguing teaser and what to say about the update...you brilliantly expressed the memories which she was cherishing in her school...also his anxiety on not being able to find her... but cigarette😲

I'm sure you would definitely have a reason for all this...would be waiting to know this😃

I know im late once again...so sorry dear😳

Thanks a lot for the pm😃

Originally posted by: moumita04

Muskan - I had read this on my vacation... and so I was hunting it down to comment... I usually leave PMs unread when I haven't commented but you sent me the link for this one in the PM we were talking on... so it was read... and I was so frustrated trying to find it...

Finally, dimaag ki batti jali... I remembered the title and I knew it would be in story index...

Koi nahi Mou Di! I'm glad to hear you liked it...I too found your comment today...when I opened this thread to update 😕😆

Okay to begin with... I now understand the title completely... At first when I had guessed manhoosiyat, that too was based on title because it had the potential to kill their love, destroy their relationship... but this one is so much better...

Thank you so much! I guess I was studying Sylvia Plath and thus the title...hidden with a deeper meaning 😉 Manhoosiyat pe kaafi kuch ho gaya tha and smoking was an issue I wanted to write on for quite a long time. Though they didn't show it on-screen, yet SSP had uploaded a picture of Sameer smoking...thus the idea 😆

So Sameer dear is still having the old habit... maybe not that frequent.. and he had stopped completely in Ahmedabad... but this new beginning is influenced by his Delhi gang, is it? He has left the gang, but the renewed habit of smoking is not that easy to leave...

Bang On! Kaise kar lete ho aap? 😆😳

I hate smoking... and honestly I wanted to slap Sameer for it... but I think Naina has found a better way now...

Loved the flashback to school... Naina is so precise in remembering dates... typical quality of girl... and Sameer distracted her with his eyes, his touch and sneakily spied on her doodling...

NS - Truly said Sameer... he knows the meaning of love because of Naina... he know he is worth being loved because of Naina... Naina is the one who brought out the better in him, and will be by his side helping him to become the man he should be... ❤️

Sameer didn't only succumbed to a bad habit... but he has broken the promise he made to Naina of never breaking her faith... And now her faith has wavered...

The love will not die easily of course... but Sameer needs a jolt... which Naina is surely going to give... the process has started... 😳

Beautifully written Muskan... Eager to read more..!!

Love,

Mou