Naina- Sameer : FF Vishakha and Agrawals -Part 37 (Page 25)updated - Page 5

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Part 5...Naina and Vishakha conversation aur "Maa ka ehsaas...

Naina ka ghar:

Naina (N): yeh subh kutch khaas thi...en nayi subah thi mere aur Sameer (S) ke liye...Kal ki kaali raat ke baad yeh aisi lag rahi thi jaise kutch der paani mein saas rokay rehne pe jab aap upar aate ho to... saans to fuli hui hoti hain par man ek ajeeb si khushi mehsoos karta hain. Thik vaisa hi haal tha mera, kal khuley manse baat karne ke baad ek nayi aas- ek naye vishwaas sey ... hamara rishta sajane wale tha..Aunty ko milne ki baicheni bhi thi maan mein aur ek naye ehsas ki tarang bhi ... baat ab sirf mere akele ki nahin thi.. ab unke har sawal ka jawab sirf mere nahin hoga.. vo hum dono ka tha... kyunki unhone hamein is khoobsurat rishtey mein bandh jo diya tha... Isi khushi aur kasmakash ko leke mein jaldi se taiyaar ho rahi thi aur Preety (P) ko bhi bol rahi thi ke vo jaldi tayar ho jaye...taki hum time pe udhar pahonche... aur mujhe maloom tha..jaisa haal mera hain idhar.. Uska bhi vahi haal hoga wahan...

N: P ki bacchi jaldi kar.. varna late ho jayenge..

P: sorry sorry sorry.. mujhe maaf kardo behna.. aage se aisa nahin hoga.. waise ek baat kahoon... kaal raat tum dono ko baat karte dekh kar mein aure Swati ( ST) chain ki neend soye the... Tumne to hum dono ko dara hi diya tha Naina..

N: haan P sach kahoon to mein bhi ek pal ke liye khud se dar gayi thi.. ki mere man mein itni purani baat ko leke itna gussa bhara hua tha.. par Sameer ne sambhal liya.. and she remembers their yesterday night's hug and smiles..

Sameer ka Ghar:

Sameer: "aye subh aaj tum kutch aisi khili ho... nato sirf mein, mera pura jahan mehek utha hain vo aaj kya pehen ke aayegi .. mummy usse kya puchegi.. vo kya jawab degi... ek ajeeb si excitement thi mere maan mein ..mujhe yakeen tha naina.. na to sirf uska par hum dono ka khayal bekhubi rakhna jaanti hain.. mein shayad ek pal ke liye khud pe yakin na bhi karoon par Naina pe vishwas attoot tha. Isi khayal se mein jaldi se ready hone laga...

Sameer waiting anxiously for N to come...he was pacing around the house ... and banging into random things

S: munna pandit jara dekho to bahar jaake vo aagayi kya..

Munna: Arey Sameer tu tension mat le.. Bhabhi aajayengi vaise bhi abhi thoda waqt hain.

Vishakha (V) was watching all this silently from the corner of the room. She knew something had happened yesterday night between S and N... because when she had come to bid good night to Sameer, she saw him leaving home with teary eyes , without saying anything. I wanted to stop him and ask him what happened and why are you crying.. but at that moment I realized.. he is now not only my son but Naina's life too...mujhe pura vishwaas tha agar Naina uske saath hain to Sameer ko kabhi koi dard chu hi nahin sakta.. Aur isiliye mein bhi baichen thi.. Naina se milne ko..kai sawal maan mein uth rahe the.. jineke jawab ek maa ke dil ko chaiye the.. aur tabhi maine auto kay aane ki awaz suni.

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Auto ki awaz sunte hi Sameer daud ke gate pe pahonch gaya.. aur tabhi Naina ne bhi auto ke bahar jhaank ke Sameer ko dekha... dono us waqt bas ek dusare ko dekhte hi rahe.. mano pehli baar dekh rahe ho... Sameer ne bhaag ke auto kay paise de diye aur Naina ki taraf pyaar se dekha.

Preety: good morning jijaji.. sab thik ?

S : good morning saaliji... haan sab thik..tumhare hote hue mujhe kisi baat ki tension kaise ho sakti hain ? P and S ki nok-jhok se N muskurane lagti hain.

Preety aage ho leti hain aur Naina vahin khadi hain.. Auto ke jaane ke baad Sameer jee bhar ke usey dekhta hain. Aaj usne wahi wala suit pehna hain jo mujhe bahut pasand hain.. blue wala.. jo usne freshers party ki practice ke dinon mein bhi pehna tha... aaj usne maa ke diye hue kangan bhi pehne the aur delhi se jo baliyan maine bheji thi Mundit ke saath vo bhi.. meri aankhein to jaise us pey tham si gayi thi..

N: Sab thik hain? Mein thik lag rahi hoon ..

S: giving his classinc ok sign and a wink says perfect.. ab chalo aa jao mummy tumhara intezaar kar rahi hain.

Dono living room mein aa jate hain... jahan dining table pe Munna Pandit pehle se hi jame hue the aur Preety unke saath khadi thi.

Munna: Bhabhi aaj to aap bahut acchi lag rahi ho.. Pandit: arey Munna vaise to Bhabhi har din acchi lagti hain.. par aaj to aunty ko milne ki khushi mein kutch aur bhi acchi lag rahi hain.. and they give their knowing smile..

Tabhi wahan Sameer ki mummy aa jaati hain.. aur N ko pukarti hain

V: arey beta tum aa gayi.. kaisi ho.. sab thik ? aur ek minute ke liye ruk jati hain aur Naina ko sar se pao tak dekhti hain..aur ek halki si muskurahat unke chehre pe aajati hain... koi itne saade kapdoin mein itna sundar kaisa dikh sakta hain...

V: Sameer beta Naina ko ghar key mandir-kamre mein le jao mein aati hoon..

S was a little surprised and looked at V and then at N aur ishare se kahan Naina ko saath chalne ke liye.. N ishra milte hi S ke piche chalne lagi.

N -aaj vo ghar apna sa lag raha tha.. mandir ke kamre mein pahonchte hi.. ek ajeeb si shaanti mehsoos hui aur jo sawal aur kashmakash dil mein leke ghar se chali thi ... mano vo sab hal hote huein lag rahe the.

Tabhi aunty ke aane ki aahat suni. Vo andar aayi aur hum dono ko aarti di. Maine jhat se aarti li aur Sameer ne bhi li. Yeh dekh ke vo bahut hi khush hui aur heraan bhi.

V: arey wah mera beta bhagwan ki aarti lena bhi sikh gaya hain aur un mein maan bhi laga raha hain.. yeh sab meri is honewali bahu-beti ka kamal hain. Yeh sunte hi S and N lower their eyes and smile.Accha Sameer tum dekho bahar munna pandit aur preety ko kutch chahiye to nahin. Waise to Poonam hain wahan.. par preety shayad thoda uncomfortable feel kar rahi hogi to tum usey company do. Hum log aate hain.

Yeh sunte hain S kabhi meri aur dekhe to kabhi mummy ke aur and instintctively says..mummy muhje bhi aap dono ke saath rehna hain.. aisi kya baat aapko karni hain jo aap mere samne nahin keh sakti?

V: S kutch baatein hain jo mein Naina ko kehna chahti hoon aur usese sunan na bhi chahti hoon.. aur ab tum jao warna tun sabko college jaane nein der ho jayegi.

Na chahte hue bhi S wahan se jaane lagta hain par jaate jaate apni ma ko ek accha sa hug deke jaata hain aur N ko ek acchi si smile aur dilasa ki sab thik hain...

N-aunty ko dekh ke aisa laga jaise vo apne andar kutch chaupay hain aur ek ajeeb si shikan unke mathe pe aa gayi thi.. us waqt maine mud ke bhagwan ji ko dekha.. aur pranam kiya..

V -jaisai hi maine dekha N ko mandir mein sir jhookate hue mujhe samaj aaya ki aaj bhagwan bhi yahi chahte hain ke yahan se jaane se pehle mein apne saare sawaloin ke jawab leke hi jaaon.. tabhi is naye rishtey ki shuruwat sahi mayano mein ho payegi.

V: Naina tumhe maloom hain..zindagi hamara har mod pe ek naya imtihaan leti hain... us mein safal hone ke liye hum jo bhi karte hain usese hamare hone ka ahesas aur vishawas hum mein aata hain. Sameer ke papa jab chale gaye to papa ke hote huin bhi, mujh mein ek aisa khaalipan aa gaya tha ki mujhe laga nahin tha ke main kabhi bhi fir haans paaongi.. par jab Sameer ki aur dekha to laga bhagwan hamensha jab ek darwaja band karte hain to jeene ki dusari raah dehi deta hain.. Sameer meri zindagi mein vohi kiran banke aaya tha.. jisne us waqt meri bejan zindagi me ek halki si phuwar bhar di ... Jis mein main aur papa dono hi behte chale gaye.. aur isiliye hamne uska naam Sameer' rakha taki us ehsas ko hum hamesha yaad rakhein... (she smiles remembering holding little Sameer close to her heart) .

V: Papa hamesha se hi waqt ke hisab se kafi practical the..unhone mujhe ek nayi shuruwat karne ke liye prerna di aur Rohan ke papa meri zindagi mein aaye. Vo pal mere liye khushi ka bhi tha aur dard bhara bhi tha..us nayi shurwaat ke liye mujhe Sameer se juda hona tha( flashback to dadi saying u cant get Sameer here).. tab papa ne mujhe kaha.. beta is imtihaan ki ghadi mein tum sirf aane wale kal ke baarein mein socho, na ki bitey hue pal ke baarein mein..kyunki agar yeh pal gujar gaya to tum akeli hi yaadoin key kashmakash mein fasi hui hogi aur hum sab aage nikal gaye honge..tum Sameer ki hasi, vo khushi key ehsaas ko apne maan mein chupa ke aage badho...main tumse wada karta hoon...tumhare is Sameer ko kabhi bhi maa ke pyaar ki kami mehsoos nahin hone doonga..aur usey waise hi bada karoonga jaise tumhe kiya tha( Flashback to nanaji's death bed scene)

V: Us pal mere saare gham aur gharahat door hogayi aur maine Sameer ka haat papa ke haat mein dediya.. aur Rohan ke papa ka haat thamey unke saath delhi chali aayi... tum soch rahi hogi main tumhe ye sab biti baatein kyun bata rahi hoon .. hain na? Kyun ki mujhe yakeen hain S ne tumhe uske nanu ke bahut saare kisse sunaye honge..S apne nanu ki jaan tha aur papa uski.

Naina V ke chehre pe nanaji ke jaane ka vo dard mehsoos kar pa rahi thi. Tabhi aunty aage badh ke mera haat aapne hatoin mein le leti hain. Unke haat mein mujhe us garmahat ka ehsaas hota hain jo kadi thand mein kammal odhne ka baad hota hain.

V: Mujhe lag raha hain shaayad tum bhi is waqt kisi dorahe pe khadi ho.. jahan ek aur tumhara kal hain aur ek aur tumhara aane wala kal hain.. aur tum tay nahin kar paa rahi ho kay us beete hue pal ko tum pakad ke rakkho ya usey chod ke aane wale kal ki taraf badho...

Aunty ki baat sunte hi mein chonk gayi kyunki unhone ekdum sahin pehchana tha... kaal raat mein isi mod pe thi wahan ek aur bitey hue kaal ka gussa tha aur ek taraf Sameer ke saath ek naye safar ki shuruvat...Par mein is baat se heran thi ki unhone vo kaise mehsoos kiya jab ki vo to abhi mujhe thik tarike se jaanti bhi nahin... aur us sawal ko leke maine unki tarf ek baar fir dekha.

V: Tumhe lag raha hoga.. main to abhi tumhe thik se jaanti bhi nahin aur aachanak tumhare jaazbaat kaise jaan liye...hain na? Tumhari aankhein bata rahi hain, ki tum sachmein kisi dhorahe pe khadi thi ya ho. Aur is ka karan kahin na kahin Sameer hain.. kal raat ko maine jab usey rote hue jaate dekha to maa ka maan bechain ho utha. Par jab vo ghar vaapis aaaya to uske chehre pe ek sukoon tha. Usi pal mujhe yakin ho gaya ki tum hi ho jo S ko sambhal bhi sakti ho aur use samajha bhi sakti ho.

N soch rahi thi ki aunty na jaane mere baarein mein kya soch rahi hogi.. ki maine unke bete ko pareshaan kiya..us waqt mujhe apne aap pe bahut gussa aa raha tha.. ki vo maa jo Sameer ki khushi ke liye mujhe pure dil se apna chuki thi...maine unko hi dukhi kar diya...

V-Ek nazar N ko dekhte hi main samaj gayi ki vo khud ko doshi maan rahi thi kaal raat kay liye... maine turant apna haat naina ke gaal pe rakha aur sehlaya.

V: N tum ghabrao mat..main tumse bilkul gussa nahin hoon.. balki is baat ki mujhe khushi hain ki mera vo beta jisne kabhi kisi ka socha nahin tha apne aage.. vo tumhare dard ko samjhta bhi hain aur use door karne ki puri tarah se koshish bhi karta hain.. aur is baat ke liye main tumhe Thank you kehna chahti hoon.. tumne sahi mayno mein Sameer ki zindagi mein uske nanu ki kami ko pura kiya hain... aur V ne naina ke mathe ko chum liya...

aunty ke chumne sey mere andar jo dard bhara hua tha.. vo aansu banke behne laga.. aur mein usey rok bhi nahin paayi..

V ( N ko bahon mein bharte hue): rolo beta tumhara maan shaant ho jayega...aur useke baloin ko sehlane lagi...

V: duniya hamse bahut sari umeed lagaye hue hoti hain..ke hum sab ki khushiyon ka dhyaan rakhe.. kyunki hum ek ladki.. ek aurat hain.. par vo yeh bhool jaati hain ke hamare paas bhi ek tootne wala dil hota hain jo sab ko khushiyan dete dete..khud bhi bahut bhar jaata hain.. aur hum us boj ke tale mare jaate hain...isiliye rolo aur us dard ko beh jaane do aaj...Tumhare aur Sameer ke naye jiwan ki shurvaat tabhi ho payegi...

N: aunty vo mein ... (roney ki wajah se mein aur kutch bol hi nahin payi.. unse lipat ke mujhe ek ajeeb sa sukoon mila raha tha.. ke mere aasoon thamne ka naam hi nahi ley rahe the...)

In sabke bichmein na jaane Sameer kabse aake khada tha par mujhe is tarah aunty ki bahon mein rote dekh vo sahem gaya..

V: (naina ko sehla tey hue uske chehre ko apne haatoin mein lekey): Aunty nahin.. maa.. aaj se tum mujhe maa kahogi...main jaanti hoon.. tumne is shabad ko apni zindagi mein kabhi nahi pukara..par ab mein aa gayi hoon aur ab tumhe is shaabd se milana chahti hoon...

Unke Maa kehne par.. main chonk uthi...Maa ek naya shabd tha mera liye.. kyunki janam se maine chahiji ko hi meri maa ke roop mein dekha .. par kabhi unhe "maa keh ke nahin pukara... us ek shabd ne meri zindagi ko pura kar diya tha... Jaise Sameer ke aane se meri disha hin zindagi ko ek mukaamil jahan mil gaya tha... uski mummy ke is ek shabd ne mere janahn mein kai saare rang bhar diye the.. pyar kay... J

Tabhi hum dono ne dekha Sameer ko darvaje pe khade..aur V ne turant use apne paas bulaya...

Sameer ney jaisai hi meri aur dekha , vo samaj gaya ke mere aasun ..dukh ke nahin par khushi kay thay aur usney maa ki aur dekh ke unhe gale se laga liya kyunki vo janta tha vo khushi dene wali mummy hi thi.

S: (ne hum dono kay haat V ke haat mein rakhke ) mummy mein tumse aur tumhari hone wali bahu sey wada karta hoon kay mein uska pura pura dhyaan rakhoonga.. aur aaj ke baad uski aankhon mein kabhi bhi aasoon nahin aaney doonga.. aur usey har mushkil sey bachaoonga humari taraf aayegi.. S ka Humari sunte hi V ko garv hua aapne bete par aur hanske hum dono ki baliyan leli.

V: accha mein bahar jaake dekhti hoon yeh munna pandit kya kar rahe hain.. tum dono aa jaon jaldi sey thik hain..

S aur N abhi bhi vahin haath pakade khade the aur ek dusare ko dekh rahe the...tabhi N ne aapna haath dheere se chudaya aur ek acchi si smile di aur us hansi ko dekh Sameer ko yeh vishwaas ho gaya ki .. aane wali zindagi kafi haseen aur rangeen to hone hi wali thi par is mein abhi kaye khatte meethe ke saath saath teekha ka bhi swad aane wala tha.

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Continued... Plan A : Arjun ko manana...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow it's awesome ..loved their conversation.. continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome. Keep up the good work. Waiting for next.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved this update too! It's so much like the show 😃
I loved the bonding between Vishaka and Naina!! Naina is so perfect in every sense 😳
Love how you portray the characters, makes you fall in love with them. Seems like one can read it again and again. 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I loved the bonding between Vishaka and Naina.
It was soo heart warming.
Thank you for the pm.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice update
I'm loving Naina and Vishakha's bonding
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you guys for appreciating the story.. I am trying to feel the void I felt the show has and that at some where in time needs to be shown bcoz to me they are integral part of the characters and that defines them somewhere..
Hope you like the next part...Part 6..Where we get to see jealous Sameer and how he defends his love... while trying to woo Arjun for his successful grahpravesh in Agrawal khandan...
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Good one!!😊
I loved Naina and Vishakha together...hope we also get to see it in the show someday.
Next up is arjun😆
But he can be convinced...with Shefalis help😉

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice update! Very interesting story... Now need to see the tikhapan of their life...😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Well next up is Arjun, and a Jealous Sameer.. so will see how that turns out to be and how he feels to be on the receiving end :)
I have posted Part 1 on Instagram too if you would like to catch it there.

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