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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Please dont add another villian to samainas love story. I dont have a good feeling about vicky so how about you bowl him out of the romance
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update!
Ab toh Arjun bhaiya ko manake hi chodega sameer😆
I also felt that Vicky definitely is impressed with naina In the show...ek toh Bandi khud ki ragging karwati hai... plus he agreed to change the competition list jab usne pucha...
We get to see jealous Sameer!!yayy!
Pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yup he is not going to be around for long.. I hate him already.. so I am hoping he is going to be gone just like Sunaina.. but definitely will make S look at N a little differently at the end.. in a good strong way.. and that is what I think Vicki's role is
to be frank he has not revealed his plans yet to me.. so will see what he shows and will rein him in if he tries something other than smiling and giving looks to naina...
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Part 7: Mission Arjun bhaiya... Vicki ka fisalna..and Jealous Sameer

Sameer (S) - Male Lead, Naina (N) Female Lead , Pandit ( PT) , Munna ( M), Swati ( ST), Preety ( P), Arjun bhaiya ( A), Rakesh sir ( R), Vishakha ( V) , Poonam Bhabhi ( PooB), Pooja didi ( PooD) Karthik ( K ), Sunaina (SN), mama, mami, taiji, chachaji, chachiji, Shefali (SF) , Mundit ( Munna + Pandit) , SaMunDit ( Sameer + Munna + Pandit), Samiana ( Sameer + Naina ), Vicki (VK), Kartik (K)

Vicki (VK) gives instructions to S to do better but he is preoccupied and S fails that irks Vicki and says you better concentrate on what you are doing and not think about anything else... A also asks S if everything is ok? Are you distracted or worried about something? S says no nothing like that.. I will be careful next time.

After the practice A asks N and P to lets go home.. and VK notices this and goes to talk to A

VK: A tum N aur P ko jaante ho? Pura gang wahin hain kyunki sab ghar jaa rahe hain.. S wahin thaer jaata hain VK ko A sey baate karte hue dekh.

A: Arey VK haa maine tumhe bataya nahin.. N meri ek lauti aur pyari behen hain aur P mere chachaji ki beti hain. hum sab joint family mein rehte hain isiliye hum sab ek saath hi pale bade hain. VK is super happy to know that.. arey wah mujhe nahin pata tha N ka koi bhai bhi hain jo itna accha cricket khelta hain... S is getting super annoyed... with the way VK is talking looking at N.

M: yaar S yeh Vicki to kutch jyada hi interest le raha hain N mein.. mujhe iske lakshan thik nahin lag rahe hain..

PT: haan yaar vo jaise Bhabhi ko dekh raha hain .. mujhe bilkul pasand nahin aa raha hain.. man to kar raha hain uska moon tod doo..

S: hmmm mein bhi dekh raha hoon Vicki N ko kutch jyada hi bhav de raha hain..mujhe thoda chokkana rehna hoga aur tum dono bhi N ko akele mat chodna jab mein ground pe hoon samje dono?

M aur PT get shocked S getting so angry on Vicki and they look at each other seeing S first time jealous of someone and thinks yeh bhi thik hi hain.. inse inka rishta aur bhi ghera ho jayega ... shayad...

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Din bitate jaatein hain aur cricket ki practice pure josh mein chal rahi hain.. aur Vicki aur bhi khule tarike se N ko dekh ne lagta hain...

Ek din ghar jaate waqt... Vicki aata hain A se baat karne jab puri gang wahi hain aur A, S ko cricket ki kutch seekh de raha hota hain.

VK: arey A aaj raat ko tum kya kar rahe ho? A: kutch khaas nahin kyun? VK: nahin soch raha tha kyun na mein aur tum kahin milke 3 din baad jo preliminary rounds shuru honge uske baarein mein gehrai se baat karein. A: hmm accha thik hain.. waise hum log kal college mein jaldi bhi mil sakte hain VK: college mein bahut distractions hote hain looking at S , to agar raat ko hum log mil sake to accha hoga, kya kehte ho? A: hmm ok kahan milna hain? VK: agar tumhein koi dikkat na ho to main tumhare ghar aajaoon?

A is surprised but doesn't see any problem in it. And says thik hain.. to fir 8 baje milte hain. tum khana khaake aana taki hamara time usmein barbad na ho thik hain. mera address likhlo aur phone no. bhi agar tumhe raasta dhoondh ne mein dikkat ho.

S and the whole gang are shocked and Mundit know S is not going to be happy at all about it...and they look at S . S is red with anger and flared up. He is mad at A and VK to agree to meet at A's place.. and is super annoyed at the thought of N being there in her night dress and Vicki looking at N and smiling at what he is seeing.

S: arey A agar tum logon ko thik lage to mere ghar pe milna hain? mein K ko bhi bula leta hoon taki hum Charon baith ke strategy bana sake.. waise bhi hum dono captain aur vice captain hain to is discussion mein agar hum bhi ho to accha rahega team ke liye..

A: likes that idea but Vicki is not happy...K also likes that ides.. so VK has to go ahead with it. And they all decide to meet at S place for the discussion.

S sighs a relief and calms down... Mundit go to him and say " sahi hain Sameer .. yeh to hamein maloom hain ki tu jugadu hain... par is baar to tera dimag kuthch jyaada hi tej dauda.. aur hansne lagte hain... "

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Sameer's house:

A comes on time and is impressed with S's home. Tabhi Poonam Bhabhi (PooB) aati hain juice leke.. S: Bhabhi ye A hain mere coach .. aur N ke bhai...

Poo B : are wah bhaiya.. aapne bataya nahin rishtedaar aa rahe hain... unki khatir dari thik se karte...

A and S are both shocked: Poo B realizes and manages the situation.. are mere kehne ka matlab hain.. cricket ka khel bhi to ek rishety jaisa hi hain... jahan ek family saath mein milke khel ti hain. isiliye keh diya... maaf karna mujhe..

A: hansne lagata hain.. arey nahin Bhabhi.. koi baat nahin.. S lets out a relief sigh... Vicki and K walk in together.

PooB goes to get ice crme for all.

The boys start talking about the game.

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Next day in college:

Samiana are talking about yesterday night at S's house. N is shocked that bhabhi said that but feels good that she also diverted a big problem coming their way , if A would have known about them , N would never get to come back to college.

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In the evening at the cricket ground:

S and K are playing and both VK and A are very happy that they are really playing good together after iniital tashan between them, Just then the girl gang comes to watch the practice and VK becomes super elated to see N coming there too and he cant stop staring at N. samundit notice it and Mundit gets really angry.

M: Man to kar raha hain jo balle se vo tum logon ko sikha raha hain.. uski balle se uska sir fod du.

PT: haan chennu yeh VK to kutch jyada hi khush ho jata hain Bhabhi ko dekh ke.. mujhe to yahin tension ho rahi hain apne bhai ka kyaa haal ho raha hoga.. usne to kabhi aisa kutch socha bhi nahhin hoga sapney mein..

M: Ponga pandit tu baat to thik keh raha hain.. Sameer ko is ehsaas ne kabhi chua nahin hain.. ab dekhna yeh hain yeh ehsaas aage kya rang dikhaega. Bas khushi ki baat to yeh hain, jaisai hi cricket match khatam- Vicki out aur yeah kissa khatam. Shaam ko baith ke S se baat karte hain, kyunk ki iski wajah se uske aur Bhabhi ke bichmein kutch bhi jhagda hua to mein sach mein jake us VK ki chutney bana doonga.

VK is training the team and is stealing glances to see N and S is fuming at that. In the break, S goes to the water cooler to drink some water and pour some on his head to cool down so he can put his mind in the game. Yeh kya ho raha hain mujhe. Aisa maine pehle kabhi mehsoos nahin kiya. Sari zindagi sab mujhe hi khubsurat mante hain aur ladkiyan mujh se dosti karne ke liye line lagati thi.. aur naina meri Naina jo sirf aur sirf mujhe hi dekhti hain.. aaj usko kisi aur ne dekh liya to mujhe gussa kyun aa raha hain.. kyun.. aaj mujhe samaj aaya naina kya feel karti hain jab dusari ladkiyan mujhe dekh rahi hoti hain?

Tabhi N wahan aa jati hain... taki vo S se mil sake sab ki nazaron se door.

N: S yahan akele kyun khade ho? Mujhe ishara kar dete mein bhi aa jati to thodi der aur tumse baat kar leti, waise bhi aajkal cricket aur A ki wajah se hum ek dusare ke saat jyada waqt nahin bita pate aur cricket match ko khatam hone mein abhi ek hafte se upar hain.

S-in sab ke bich mein sirf N ko dekh ta rehta hain pyar se. aur apni kismet pe rashka (proud) mehsoos karta hain, ki na jane vo kya acche karam honge jiski wajah se N ne mujh sey pyar kiya aur meri zindagi ko sawara aur sajaya bhi.

N: S kya hua tum thik ho? Kutch bol hi nahin rahe ho? Bahut thak gaye ho, tumhare per dabadoon? Mujhe maloom hain tum match ke liye bahut mehnat kar rahe ho aur A ko safalta dila ne ke liye aur extra kar rahe ho. Yahi bol ke vo S ke haat pe apna haat dhar deti hain- aaj mujhe aisa lag raha hain- jaise kutch to accha kiya hoga maine kisi ka ki tum meri zindagi mein aaye.. warna meri zindagi ghar school aur ghar college ke bich kahin kho jati.

S gets super surprised hearing N say that, as he was thinking the same thing about N. and he gives a sweet smile: N tum mano gi nahin mein bhi abhi yahi soch raha tha jo tum ne abhi kaha.. hum hamensha se aisa hi karte hain hain na? and they both smile and head out to the the field.

VK was searching N in the break and sees Samiana coming out together, gets a little shocked, worried, and wonders are they both just friends as they have always been from first day of college or is there something else brewing between them. I need to find out as I know what N means to me and I need to find out what N means to S too.

S sees VK looking at them and realizes that he might think something is going on between them seeing them come out together. Maybe I should just tell him the truth so he can back out and we can both concentrate on some cricket.

Practice ke dauran VK S ko ignore karta hain jo A ko bhi dikhai deta hain. A S ko honsla dete hue aur acche se khelne ke liye kehta hain.

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Practice khatma hone par- A jab N aur P ko bulata hain ghar jane ke liye- to waha VK bhi aa jata hain- aur A ko kehta hain: A meri aaj gadi kharab ho gayi hain- to kya tum mujhe ghar pe chod sakte ho? Tabhi wahan Samundit bhi aa jate hain aure sab sun lete hain.

A: umm haa thik hain mein tumhe pehle ghar chod dunga waise bhi tumhara ghar to raaste mein hi hain. Aajao baith jao aage.

Yeh dekh ke S bahut hi gussa ho jata hain aur mundit usey shaant karne ki koshish karte hain. N bhi S ko gussa hote hue dekh leti hain- aur ishare se puch ti hain kya hua? S sirf VK ko hi dekhata rehta hain. tabhi S- A ki gadi ke pass jake kehta hain- VK agar tumhe lift chahiye to mein tumhe chod sakta hoon . VK yeh sun ke surprise to nahin hota par samaj jata hain kutch to pak raha hain N aur S ke bich jiske barein mein A ko nahin maloom.

A: arey S nahin nahin koi problem nahin hain- hum log VK ko chodte hue chale jayeenge- tum ghar jaake thoda aaram karlo aaj bahut jyada practise ki hain tumne.

Isi ke saath VK aage baith jata hain aur gadi ke mirror se N ko dekhne lagta hain.. N and P are busy talking and don't pay any attention to VK. A gadi chala ke nikla jata hain aur Samundit wahin khade reh jaate hain.. S gusse mein waha khadi cycle ko per se gira deta hain... Mundit yeh dekh ke shock ho jate hain (aur unhe puja di ke shaadi wala din yaad ata hain jab S ne aisai hi guseey mein cycle ko dhakka mara tha). SaMundit gadi mein baith ke nikal jaate hain.

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Nighttime phone call:

S baar baar N ke ghar phone karta hain, aur N thodi shock ho jati hain ki S itni jaldi phone kyun kar raha hain- kyun ki abhi ghar mein sab jaag rahein hain. Isi karan N phone nahin utha sakti aur S aur bhi jyada gusse mein aa jata hain.. aur har aadhe ghante phone ki 2 ring maarta rehta hain.

Jaisai hi sabka khana ho jata hain aur sab haath dhone ke liye jaate hain.. S wapis phone karta hain aur N phone jhat se utha leti hain.. S: Hello, N : hello S.. kya hua tum kab se phone kiye jaa rahe ho.. mein abhi baat nahin kar sakti.. baad mein karti hoon. Ab phone rakho... byee aur phone rakh deti hain. S abhi kutch aage bole uske pehle hi N phone kaat deti hain... ring tone sunke S itna gussa hota hain...phone ko bed pe patak ke bike ki chaabi leke nikal padta hain.. apna gussa thanda karne...

N bhi yahi soch rahi thi ki aakhir S ko hua kya hain? ghar jaate waqt bhi vo gusse mein tha aur baar baar phone kiye jaa raha tha.. usey laga shayad mujhe S sey baat kar leni chahiye thi.. taki mujhe maloom to hota kya chal raha hain.. jaisai hi sab so jayenge mein jaldi sey phone kar loongi.

Tabhi achana- bike ki 2 ghanti sunai deti hain.. N ek dum shock ho jati hain... aur bhaag ke balcony mein pahonch jaati hain aur S ko niche khada dekh surprise ho jati hain...aur ishare se puchati hain kya hua? Tum yahan kaise? S usey ishare se niche bulata hain.. N kehti hain mein nahin aa sakti abhi... S: pay phone se phone karne ke liye aage badhta hain.. N: jaldi se bhaag ke phone ke pass pahonch jaati hain.. aur jaisai hi ring bajti hain.. phone utha ke hello bolti hain...

S: tum niche aao aabhi isi waqt.. mujhe tumse baat karni hain..

N: S kya hua hain sab thik hain tum aisai kyun behave kar rahe ho? Aur abhi kutch agey bole uske pehle hi uske mooh se... Tum " nikalta hain...

S: hello kya " Tum kis sey baat kar rahi ho? Hello N tum ho wahan? Hello??

N: VK tum yahan is waqt aur uske haath mein phone hain... jise pe S sab sun raha hain..

S: VK ka naam sunke vo itna gussa hota hain.. vo ghar tak pahonch gaya... hello N tum ho wahan...

VK: hi N kaisi ho? Vo mein yahan se gajar raha tha to socha A se milta jaaoon aur kutch baatein bhi puchani thi usey.. jara bula dogi A ko... arey tum phone pe baat kar rahi ho kya? Tumhare haat mein phone hain...

N: umm vo phone?? Ohh nahin vo to worng no tha.. rakhne hi wali thi... mein A ko bulati hoon... aur phone kaat deti hain...

S: ka gussa ab satvey aasman pe chad gaya hain.. vo samajh hi nahin paa raha usey itna gussa kyun aa raha hain.. N to usi ki hain.. aur usey kya chahiye.. fir bhi vo itna gussa kyun ho raha hain? vo phone rakhke saamne jaake park ke bench pe baith jata hain aur N ki balcony ko dekhta rehta hain...

A: arey VK sab thik hain tun achanak aa gaye ghar?

VK: sorry yaar 3 din baad games hain isi liye thoda tension mein tha socha tumse baat kar loonga aur mil loonga to better mehsoos karoonga.. aur vo N ki taraf dekhne lagta hain... N tab tak andar jaa chuki thi.. aur daud ke balcony mein chali jati hain.. use maloom hain S wahan se use miley yaa baat kiye bina nahin jaaye ga..

N: idhar udhar dhoondane lagti hain S ko, tabhi S ko dekhti hain... aur ek halki si muskurahat uske chehrey pe aa jati hain..

S: ki bhi mano jaan mein jaan aajati hain N ko dekh ke.. vo apna sara gussa bhool jaata hain.. aur muskura deta hain..

Dono aisai hi bina kutch kahe ek dusarey ko dekhte rehte hain... shayad dono ko hi maloom tha aaj shabd (words) kaam nahin aayenge bas jee bhar ke dekh ne sey hi sukoon milega... kafi der ke baad N ko A ki awaz sunai deti hain .. aur vo jor se kehti hain.. aayi bhaiya... aur S ko byee bolke andar chali jaati hain...

S: N ko dekhne ke baad ek ajeeb si khushi mehsoos kar raha tha... kahin na kahin VK ka gussa abhi bhi tha par N ki vo pyar wali nazar se uskey dil ko rahat ho gaya thi aur vo ghar ki aur nikal jata hain...ek muskurahat ke saath...

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Part 8 : Mission Arjun bhaiya.The execution...Jealous Sameer :


Edited by viraf4u - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
Lovely chapter and I am so happy with arjun's approval uff Sameer ka woh jealousy Dil le lo. Will Vicky create any problem to Samaina I hope not. Really loved the update and hope to see you soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It's just fantastic
Plz update super soonish
Can't wait to read further
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
Am so glad Arjun is on Samaina's side now.
Atleast now they will hopefully be able to convince Nainas family.
Please tell me Vicky is out now. Cant stand him.

Thank you for the pm.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome write up..I was waiting for the next part and I found it ..Now will have a good night sleep lol..More laters..
So about the chapter ..It was so nice to read about Arjun and Sameer bonding . After the school days and now when they are mature enough to handle such situations...Also the part where sameer is feeling Jealous was something you have described so well...It's easy to ignore that someone is jealous for you..But hard when u feel jealousy ...Sameer now understands what Naina has felt for so long. ..And this makes him realize Nina's value more ...It's good that arjun understands their Love and is on same page with sameer and Naina now..This chapter was a treat to read ...Something the CV's ignore to deal with ..Hope to see some of the bondings in the Cv's as well... Amazing and beautifully written...Waiting eagerly for more..Keep writing..Good luck..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Azraa01

Am so glad Arjun is on Samaina's side now.

Atleast now they will hopefully be able to convince Nainas family.
Please tell me Vicky is out now. Cant stand him.

Thank you for the pm.


Vicky will be there for the after party but am hoping he would not create any more troubles.. hopefully
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Vicki will be a reason for a small tiff for sure because as of now Naina is not aware of any of this and definitely would see cold war between Vicki and Sameer so will definitely be interesting how they play out in the party and after the party.
Thank you all for your comments and appreciations definitely helps me to write something soon 😊

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