Naina- Sameer : FF Vishakha and Agrawals -Part 37 (Page 25)updated - Page 4

Loved th updates.

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Loved th updates.

Am liking the bind between Sameer and Vishaka.

But now this argument is worrying me.

Part 4: the night time phone call...and confrontation

Puri sham Naina( N ) aur Sameer (S) aapne apne ghar mein gusse mein ghoom rahe the... aur dono hi ek dusare pe gussa bhi the aur kahin na kahin apne aap se bhi naraz the.. ki jo baat aaram se baith ke ki jaa sakti thi .. us baat pe dono hi lad pade..

N ka ghar:

Preety(P) senses something is not right as N has been sulking all day after returning from college and have not even shared anything with her. She calls Swati and relates all to her. Swati (ST) says she will come over after dinner and we can talk to her together..P asks ST- should I call jijaji and ask if all is ok between them? Swati says first let us talk to N and see what the issue is.. if we call S and he doesn't know about it .. he will simply get worried for N. wait till I come over.

Swati comes over after dinner and here N and P are also wrapping up and cleaning kitchen after dinner and getting ready for bed.?

N: arey ST tum is waqt yahan? Kya hua sab thik hain? Koi pareshani hain? Munna ne kutch kahan tumse?

ST: arey nahin vo to maine socha aaj raat mein tumhare yahan tum dono ke saat hi rahoon.. saari raat baat kareinge.. waise bhi kafi dino se hum tino ne saath mein waqt nahin bitaya hain..

P comes and thumbs up to ST and N realizes this is all her plan..

N: Preety ki bacchi tumne kahan ST ko ghar pe aane ke liye?

P: to aur kya karti.. jab se college se tum wapis aayi ho... kutch to hua hain jo tum chipa rahi ho..Chalo hum tino bahar balcony mein baith ke baate karte hain.. ice crme khate hue.. tum do no jao mein leke aati hoon ice crme.

N and ST head over to the balcon..P comes with ice crme bowls.. and N is just stabbing at the ice crme and not eating it.. P and ST see that..

P: aarz kiya hain...mar rahi hoon tere pyar mein ..zinda na samaj na... naina.. haath mein ice creme hain..use tinde na samjna... wah wah... N stares at P.. P:arey tum jis tarah se usko maar rahi ho...aisa lag raha jaise tum tinde ki sabji kaat rahi ho... isiliye keh diya... and pouts...

ST: accha N bata kya baat hain.. S se jhagda hua hain? Munna bhi bata raha tha.. jb vo shaam ko S ke ghar pe gaya to S bhi thoda ukhada ukhada sa tha.

N: vo hamari ladai ho gayi aaj college mein..

P and ST excahange looks like is that new and smiles: kyun kya baat ho gayi...Jijaji ne Sunaina ki taraf dekh liya ya kisi aur ki taraf...and they laugh...

N: glares at them... nahin aisa kutch bhi nahi hua.. vo hum papa ko leke lad pade...

P and ST together: kya??? P:Rakesha tauji??ST: Rakesh sir??? Ab tum dono akele mein unki baatein karte ho?? Bhai wah...abhi jumma chumma kutch hi din hue hain tumhare Hone wali Mrs Maheshwari bane aur tum dono to real ke Mr and Mrs Maheshwari ki tarah lad rahe ho...

N remembers that talk about when she had told S about pujadidi coming over when she was expecting ( vo shaadi ke baad hota hain.. S: kya ladai jhagda )...and gives a faint smile.. but suddenly remembers the fight and goes back to sulking.. aisa kutch bhi nahin hain... and tells P and ST the whole talk that happened in college...

Ab samaj mein aaya mein kyun naraz hoon S se.. P and ST compose themselves and get serious... P : behen mein samaj sakti hoon tum kya soch rahi ho aur manti bhi hoon shayad jijaji ko us tarah se nahin bolna chaiye tha.. par mujhe lagta hain... tumne kisi ka gussa kisi pe nikala hain..

ST: haan mein bhi maanti hoon S ki mami ne bahut bhala bura kaha tha us din jab hum gaye the unke wahan.. aur haan kahin na kahin S ko kutch to bolna tha ya baat ko mod sakta tha... par N tum bhi samjo S kis haalat se gujar raha tha us waqt.. vo sirf 18 saal ka tha.. dadi se dara hua tha.. delhi se tabhi aaya tha.. aur mama mami ke saath usne rehna chalu hi kiya tha.. ho sakta hain vo unko thik tarike se jaanta nahin ke vo unko kutch keh pata...

P: waise itni purani baat aaj kaise nikali aur tum us pe 2 saal ke baad kyun lad pade?

N: kyun ki hum dono ne kabhi us baarein mein baat hi nahi ki.. us baat ka mujh pe kya asar hua tha.. vo sirf mein jaanti hoon...mujhe laga tha S usko samaj payega.. par in 2 saalon mein usne kabhi vo baat nahin chedi ya mujhe pucha us din ke baarein mein...taiji ki galiyan aur tane sun sun ke to mein badi hui hoon to kahin na kahin mujhe bhi lagne laga tha mere saath kabhi accha ho hi nahi sakta.. mujhe koi pasand kyun karega bhala.. kya hain mere pass sivay mere dimag ke... par tab S aaya meri zindagi mein.. aur uski wajah se khud se pyar karne lagi thi mein.. aur jab usne mujhe kaha tha.. ke mera dil saaf aur pavitra hain aur auron ke liye dhadakta hain ..to mujhe laga tha vo mujhe auro ki tarah nahin samajta..( flashback to N saving S after he had accidentally broke headlight of the scooter and their heart to heart convo in classroom) ...par mein galat thi Preety... vo shaayad mujhe auro ki tarah nahin samjta par mujh par kya bitati hain jab koi mujhse ye kahe ki main uske layak nahin hoon yaa mein uske saath apna naam tak kaise jod sakti hoon.. to bahut dard hota hain... and N starts sobbing... she didn't realize she had closed this in her heart for far too long to take it any more..today it was all going to come out...

P and ST are shocked to see N sobbing and start to console her...

N: nahin aaj mujhe bolna hain.. kyun P kyun ST kyun sab hamensha mujhe hi aisa bolte hain..maine to ye kabhi nahin kaha ke S padhai mein bura hain sirf apne paise aur apne naam ka usey bahut ghamand hain.. N is crying her heart out.. Jab maine aisa kutch nahin kaha to sab mujhe uske saath kyun nahin dekh sakte kyun mujhe hi hamensha sunana padta hain... ke mein S ke layak nahin hoon kyun ...ab mein bhi thak gayi hoon yeh sunte sunte.. aur agar aisi hi baat hain to fir ye rishta aage kaise badh payega... jab hum ek dusre ke man mein kya chal raha hain vo samaj hi nahin paa rahe to hum kaise zindagi ka safar saath tay kar sakte hain??

They both realize in between the phone rings 2 times and cuts...

N realizes S is calling...the third time it rings P picks up the phone...

S: hello naina... P: nahin jijaji mein hoon, S: ohhh naina so gayi kya...P: vo ..ummm vo.. nahin soyi to nahin hain..

S: to abhi bhi vo gussa hain, baat nahin karna chahti mujhse... P: voo... N comes and snatches the phone and says hello.. with her voice cracking after crying and sobbing...

S: as soon as he hears Ns hello he is stunned and worried to death... He felt as if he is hit with a lightneining.. he felt so much pain in her voice that he felt a tear escapes his eyes too... and he puts the phone down..

N : again says hello and realizes S had kept the phone down.. and starts crying ...and puts the phone down..

P: arey kya hua..phone cut gaya hoga.. mein wapis lagati hoon...

N: nahin koi jaroorat nahin hain.. tum dono mujhe thodi der ke liya akela chod do... mujhe abhi kisi se baat nahin karni..

P and ST goes in unwillingly...

N sobs remembering the whole conversation in the college and her own breakdown in front of P and ST and crys her heart out..and talks to herself.. kyun hamesha mujhe sab milta to hain par ...aant mein kutch nahin bachta mere paas.. kyun bhagwanji kyun...and looks up to the moon and remembers S poem( in mt abu trip of being alone ) and says aaj mein bhi akeli hoon tumhari tarah...

In all this she never realizes she is being closely watched by S.. who had left immediately to see her as soon as he heard her Hello.. as that had torn his heart out.. and the yearn to talk to her to hold her close was soo strong that he couldn't stop himself.. and here he was standing down in her galli looking up at her..and she is crying her heart out...he felt his own tears flowing from down as he is looking at the love of his life crying and sobbing... and feels a pang in his heart that may be.. may be.. I am not good enough for her...and that realization hits him with all its power...and he is just shocked standing there..

As if she had sensed something.. N looks down and sees S standing there...crying... for a moment she thinks its her dream..as y woud S come here.. he doesn't even know what I am going through..and we never said anything further then hello.. so how would he know what I am going through... so she looks away... As if its her dream...

S: as soon as he sees N looking down at him.. he feels solace.. but the very next moment she looks away as if he is not there at all ... he feels lonely.. as if someone has carved his heart out... as if he is loosing his being and himself.. as if his life is going away from him...and he suddenly feels weak and goes on his knees on the side of the road...and sobs...for his naina to come back to him... to hold him one last time ...

N: at the very moment turns towards S and still sees him there but now on his knees and crying...like a jolt.. she realizes this is not a dream and S is really here... and he is very much hurt about something becoz he is on his knees and crying...without wasting another moment she runs down to meet him.. it didn't matter whether anyone would see them ... At that moment nothing mattered to her other than S...not even her own pain that she had felt.. as if all that was nothing compared to that sight of seeing S broken down on his knees...

N crosses the road and comes and stands next to S and looks down at him and seeing him sobbing.. starts crying herself and kneels down next to him.. S looks up and sees N crying and without thinking just cups her face .. they both just stay there what feels like eternity... just holding each other and crying.. and looking into each other..

S realizing where they are gets up and pulls N up.. and takes her to the near by park bench... that is away from the street light and makes her sit there...and holds her hands..

N: kya hua Sameer tum aisai kyun ro rahe the.. mujhe batao kya hua..

S: looks up in shock as if realizing... how much N loves him.. bcoz he was crying for her bcoz she was sobbing.. and she is worried about me..

S: vo .. Vo.. and he just leans ahead and hugs her... as if nothing matters at this moment.. other than them..

N: also realizing that she also wanted the same gives in and hugs him back... and they just stay there holding each other and crying...

S: suddenly going through the events of the day he realizes what is troubling N and what she had been trying to tell him... through that gussa..and the outburst and why she was that lucid about mami's words...and closes his eyes in pain..bcoz he knows exactly where he could have made this whole thing right but he didn't and he failed...

N: is just crying bcoz she saw S crying.. she had forgotten all of her pain.. and just seeing S crying had pained her so much.. and she felt if she could go back in time.. she would have never made S hurt so much that his tears start to flow.. and gives in to the hug more closely..

Few moments pass and they both calm down and suddenly realizing the proximity , starts to un-hug but S just holds her hands and sits there on the bench...looking at N

S: Naina shayad isi ko pyaar kehte hain.. ki na to tumhe maloom hain mein kyun ro raha hoon aur na hi mujhe maloom hain ki tum kyun ro rahi ho.. par hum dono hi ro rahe hain kyunki dusara ro raha hain...

Shayad mein jaanta hoon ki tum kyun ro rahi thi... aur dukh to is baat ka hain ke maine is sey pehle kyun nahin samjha jo tum mujhe na jaane kabse samjhane ki koshish kar rahi thi... kabhi sunanina ka taana maar ke to kabhi kamya ka..main samaj raha tha ki tum bhi dusari ladkiyon ki tarah jal rahi ho... par mein galat tha.. tum jal to rahi thi.. par dusri ladkiyon ki wajah se nahin.. par meri wajah se...kyunki main hi ye samaj nahin paya ki auron ki baatoon ka tum pe kya asar hota hoga.. maine hi yeh janane ki koshish nahi ki.. Vo Naina.. jo har mushkil sawal ko chutki mein hal kar sakti hain... vo Naina.. agar khud pe aa jaye to aag se bhi guzar sakti hain...Meri Naina.. jisne har musibat ka samna dat ke kiya hain..

Us naina ko bhi kabhi kisi ke saath aur honsle ki zaroorat ho sakti hain.. usey bhi uske sameer ke vishwaas ki zaroorat ho sakti hain.. Vo bhi chahti hogi ki uska Sameer kabhi to yeh kahe.. Naina...chahe duniya tumhare bare mein kutch bhi kahe.. tum bahout khubsurat ho.. kyunki tumhare pass jo khubsurati hain.. vo na to sirf dikhai deti hain par mehsoos bhi hoti hain.. aur isi liye main bhi us khubsurati kay agey kutch nahin... aur tumhe paake kahin na kahin mujhe mein aur bhi ghamand aa gaya tha.. ki kaash Naina ke saath rehte rehte shayad mujh mein bhi vo mehsoos hone wali khubsurati aa jayegi... aur mein bhi tumhari tarah pura ho jaoonga...

Listening to S confession and crying.. N just stands there speechless.. at that moment.. all the storms that were brewing for a long time.. had calmed down.. jo sailab utha tha jis mein ... mein behti chali gayi.. vo tham gaya tha.. aur rah gaya tha.. to sirf pyar.. vo pyar jo hamari takat bhi tha aur kamjori bhi...mein jaise kahin kho gayi thi aur bas abhi abhi shayad khud ko mili thi.. kyunki Sameer mere saath hain .. mere pass hain.. aur vo mera hain...

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Part 5...meeting Vishakha in the morning before her flight...

This was wonderful! I could imagine them like this, totally

Beautiful...

This was lovely.. kaash CVs bhi kuch inspiration le inn stories se.. ye sach mein hona chaiye.. they need this.. you portrayed it so beautifully..

Wow loved this update.. I have sent u buddy request please pm me for next update

Hahaha...loved this confusion...and ur story too...read all the parts in one go...like the way the story is progressing...sameer naina already fighting like couples...the topic of nainas insecurities was so well written... waiting for the next one

Wow!! Thiz was superb! That conversation between Naina, Preeti and Swati and Naina sharing what she has always felt was just so touching... Had me in tears.

Heart to heart convo is so imp! God knows show mein lab dikhaenge...but thanx for giving it here!