AshDeep OS:- Unwanted Feelings

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Mayashika

I understand dear. As a writer myself, I often keep my writings especially OS to the reader's imagination.
Well, now you have given the liberty, I am gonna imagine whatever I want😉

Thank you so much for understanding! Truly appreciated!

Dekhenge aaj sapnon mein AshDeep aa gaye

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
This is so fluid Muskan..👏👏 I loved the interplay of words and beautiful,scenic descriptions that you have incorporated in.
I loved the scene where you described what all they did in the vanity.That was so like novel's detailings.
Keep up the good work dear and keep coming with your best.

Thanks for the PM.

With love-
Minu.

Thank you so much Minu! I'm really elated to hear you liked it!

Will definitely post something new very soon.. 😃

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: _Dimples_

That broke my heart
Sent you buddy request
Waise koi baat nahii..i will be waiting for another ashdeep os😆😉

Thank you so much!

Buddy request accepted! 😃

I'd be more than happy to write another AshDeep OS 😆😃

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: mishkatfanfrevr
O god too wow.update nahi karogi toh hum sab chein se kaise soyenge..omg n tht stp me else dialogue in the rain😳aagey ki story main likoon ? 😆

Thank you so much!! Chain se neend ka toh pata nahi lekin aaj raat we all know kiske sapne aane wale hai 😉😆

You are more than welcome to continue the story...btw kya ideas hai? 😉😆

Muskan 😃

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Asmaara
Always loved ashdeep fictions...and ur work was amazing, it made me to imagine and ship them more
Please continue it soon, will be waiting for it patiently!!

Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you liked it!

I'll definitely update more soon.. 😃

Muskan 😃

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mistii.rum

@mistii.rum

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Ab kya!!!! Plz update soonish... Jaan atki padi h!

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Muskan2001

Thank you so much, my Madwadi buddy, Aarti!
I'm so sorry for this will only remain as an OS with an open ending...pakka sapnon mein aapko pata chalega kaun hai 'she' and Randeep ke reactions 😆

Thank you so much once again!
Btw, 'Roommates' kab update kar rahe ho? 😃

Muskan 😃

Kal ya parso.. Is baar pakka

I was busy with some TS competition so couldn't type it plus I wasn't keeping well

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Heyy! Loved reading this OS. Although just like everyone else, even I'll want it to be continued but I read how you want it to have an open ending!😳

I appreciate the fact that people still believe that not everything should have an end, alas I've never been one of those people but I appreciate the strength it takes to do that! 😆

Also, if you're not continuing this, at least tell us the 'she' , I think it's that stupid Sunaina😉😛

But anyways loved it! Write more on them.