AshDeep OS:- Unwanted Feelings - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Muskan! I already told you I adored this piece...and I already told you I want more (sharma nahi rahi Naina ki tarah :P)...your writing always gives me happy wali nostalgic feels...helps me connect to the characters so much better. Tbh, I'm not really a shipper but inke recent posts n discussions dekh ke ban gayi to pta nai hehe...on a serious note, pls continue this. I can't stand suspense...yaar mila do dono ko...n you put in a rain dance wala romance...mere mind me Kuch Kuch hota hai ka baarish dance music baj raha tha...I'm a total goner when it comes to rain n romance...perfect recipe for people like me!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: bmk28

Wow.. Awesome.. I thought it will go towards "happy" direction like how I would like to see them.. But story cant end so easily.. Some twists and turns have to be there.. Please do update the next part and hence I could kind of feel in mind how they actually may be in real life :-P


Thank you so much! I don't know what had happened to me when I was writing this, I agree I was slightly pessimistic here. But not all love stories have a happy ending, right? 😆

Each SamAina work makes me visualize AshDeep, and thus this OS. I'm so sorry but this will only remain as an OS. Sometimes, we come across stories that have an open ending and lots of room for imagination. I thought the same should be done for this too as I don't want it to either be a sad or happy ending...hope you understand...

I will, although, continue writing on SamAina and hopefully AshDeep until IF objects. 😆

Thank you so much once again!

Muskan😃

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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
This was so so beautiful! But please don't leave us hanging and continue the story if possible. I'm really eager to know what happens next.
Edited by Miiaaa07 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: 9211

You will update right!

Please update real soon! It's perfect. Hayyee mere jaise shippers ki toh nikal padegi aaj !! ❤️


Thank you so much! Sachhi...ab hum achhe se AshDeep ko imagine kar payenge 😆 Unfortunately, I won't be continuing this and this will remain as an OS. All open to imagination... 😃

Muskan 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Muski..please update this soon.. I can't sleep until I know what happened next n who was the 'she'
Your writing style is just fabulous n I love it
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Oh God I was Soo deep in reading that when the cliffhanger came I was like what why do d you stop!!!!!!!
Really loved your work and it was different from what I usually really all about samaina no ashdeep so I loved it very much.
Will you please continue this work I would really love to read what happens next please update soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Just wow. 😊 I am not a regular shipper but this has come out so beautifully that I couldn't resist reading it. You do have a brilliant way of expressing. It was as if Ashi herself was narrating her experience. Plus I am so disappounted that the story ends at a cliffhanger moment. Please we as readers need to know who the 'she' is and Randeep's response. Please update asap.😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Hey don't end it abruptly and please don't let ashi in pain I love her too much and yes please let me know ff name you are talking out.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Nice story. But i have one suggestion dear plz change the names of character. It would be better if they are Samaina. Your characters are real life ppl. It's better to avoid those names.
Plz don't make it an OS. continue the updates. This is really a nice story. Waiting for the update.
Edited by shelly_nair - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Anzum505

Omg!! That's freaking awesome.. 👏You will continue it, right?? Olz update soon...


Thank you so much!
Alas, this will remain an OS as I want to leave an open end to the story... 😃

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