SamAina OS: The Oath

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: -vandy-
Loved the os mou...
You wrote the whole thing so beautifully... Hats off to u.

Thanks a lot Vandy...!! 😳

After all the 18+ OS and Always and Forever, it feels strange to read one line comments from you.. hahaa... 😆😆

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Niakhush

@Niakhush

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: moumita04

Nia... Good to see you back dear...!!!🤗

I will read and comment on your story too... I was away from the forum for 2 weeks, so have a back log of pending updates to read...

I am glad you loved this story... Preeti would never tolerate if Sameer broke her sister's heart.. and she knew he was the reason behind her condition... The thing was if something did happen to Naina, Sameer wouldn't have survived himself...😊

Hahaa... I am not expecting kiss on the show, but at least we should get a bone crushing hug...😳

sure dear no problem u cn take ur time...even m reading all d pending stories one by one only!!!!

Yes I luv that abt Preeti!!!!

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

Alumni

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Amazing OS Mou😃👏

Naina's state described beautifully...loved the OS dear🤗

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MeenAkshi Kalra

@dreamyp

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Loved the pain the anger of naina..Sahi bat hai bndi waise hi nh jee paegi sameer ke bina.. written beautifully yrr.. har bar fan ho jati hu tumahri..

Ek complaint hai..Kiss pe kyu end kra..Zara sa or romance de deti hihihi u knw na hum taras rhe h samaina ke liye..

Shukr h serial me sameer ne naina ko kasam nh di warna m scared pta nh kya hota..

Love u..And your words..

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swaram

@swaram

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

That was awesome, v passionate, bringing out the depth of their love. Loved it 👏

Edited by swaram - 7 years ago

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Naina

@KhwabonKiRani

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Lovely os

Thanks for the pm

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

You have the gift of writing! To come up with this while being sleepy is an art. A wonderful narration of such intense emotions. You have portrayed the emotions and intensity of love and pain so magically!
Well done on another excellent OS

Lotsa Love

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shravya rao

@shravyarao

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#58

This was beautiful, you captured the pain and the solid indifference in naina. It was alot emotional yaar.
Sameer gradually coming aware of how it was affecting her and what he did to her by keeping an oath on him, wow yaar it was a diff thought and can totally relate to as it was something sameer would do.

Nice one mou, sleep deprived but still giving us such amazing one. Hatts off to you.

Keep coming with more dear, can't wait to read.

Edited by shravyarao - 7 years ago

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Beautiful detailing of the manifestation of pain and hurt.👏 Though its not one of your masterpieces but certainly a good one to be in bucket

Loved the handkerchief scene.Brilliantly thought and worded that scene was.👏

And the confrontation that started with kiss and ended with kiss perfectly elucidates how it is an oath taken a little closer, a promise more exact. 😳

Sorry for the shortest reply I think.

Keep coming with your best and thanks for the PM.

With love-

Minu

Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago

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Radhika

@Radhika03

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#60

I'm speechless...what a wonderful OS...From the Title to the end of story everything was extra-ordinary ...Loved Naina's outraged ...it was penned down so so beautifully...I literally felt actual scene getting enacted in front of me...Loved it to the core ⭐️ Keep writing 😳

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