SamAina OS: The Oath

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aman.bindra

@aman.bindra

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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Mou, another Fab piece of writing!

Withering effect of sameer's kasam and Naina's lifeless state was truely heart wrenching. Totally loved whne he realized the magnitude of his stupidity and decided to make amends.

Best was retaliation by Naina...every bit of her anger was justified. Totally felt for Naina here.

Your writing brings emotions to life!! 😊

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Priyanka

@Prizi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#32

u penned down it beautifully

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UnknownJhalli

@UnknownJhalli

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

O bai!!

Bhagwaan jhoot na bulaaye Mou di kya likha hai

My favourite part was when Sam said break it Naina break the oath and that kiss from Sameer which again gives life to Naina

That was amazing

You sleep deprived brain is wonderful I must say

And I also loved that scene when Naina hit Sameer with the duster

Loved it Mou di loved it

Tussi toh Great ho👏

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990
Mou...saaf kehna sukhi rehna...matlab maja aa gaya hai ni...mera favorite part tha Naina hitting him with duster...so like Sam to giver her a kasam...beta she can't live without u...Sam kabhi itna mature lagta h, kabhi ekdum baccha...he wants her safe...despite the fact being away from her kills him too...he thinks he can't live with her...yet he doesn't realize that she can't live without him either...but somewhere I have deep respect for the man...matlab itna pyaar...u portrayed Naina ki lifelessness really well...I was reminded of the daze she was in post bet revelation. Aakhir sleeping beauty tab jaagi jab uske prince ne use kiss kiya...wooowww...the way he held tight onto her, held her, comforted her...showed how much they both need each other to be complete. How I wish that Dimple had walked on them kissing...hehe...n Sam use bolta...abey kareli ja yahan se...mujhe apni bhindi khani hai...lol...emotional yet lovable...as usual your writing is flawless...sorry yaar read ur story FF too yesterday but not finding time to comment...reaching home pretty late these days...n mobile pe mushkil ho raha hai to type...it's become really slow...isliye smileys avoid kiye...but ya agar nind na aaye aage se to aisi stories likhti raha karo...
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Sur

Hey Sur.. Thank you yaar... 😃

Ab kya bolu... I really don't have any clue why I even thought along these lines... and that too like at 3am... But I couldn't get it out of my head and had to get up and write... FF pe comment baad me karna chalega, whenever you get time... 😳 Even I have to comment on ur update, aaj pakka...

Yes, Sameer truly believed that she would be better off without him.. safe and happy... and he took desperate measure for that... but after doing this he realized that he had ended up taking away everything she was living for...

Hahaa... Tumne isme bhi comedy dhund liya... kareli and bhindi... 😆😆 Hadd hai yaar... maybe I will write something different for them.. .😛

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: surbharati
Moumita... this is excellent... I was literally crying while reading this... beautifully penned as always and touched our hearts... keep writing

Thank you so much dear...! 😃

Honestly, I didn't think at first that it would turn out good, but now reading all your comments it seems it wasn't bad...

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Ankita.jaiswal
My God mou...I loved this tearjerker ...it stirred something in my heart ...I am in awe of you
Your creative juices are flowing exceedingly well...
I shudder to think of lifeless naina...they are not going that way in the serial...but if they had shown something like this then God knows what would hv happened
The plot is amazing...and so is sameer's determination to bring her back from brink
A big round of applause to you 👏
P.s ...I don't frequent IF so much now...your stories are the only magnet which pulls me to it...keep churning more

Thank you so much Ankita... 😃

This OS is literally spur of the moment... The idea popped up in my mind out of nowhere and I just had to write it down... Couldn't even sleep... Glad that it turned out well.

Yes, that vision of Naina is scary... she is so bubbly and cheerful, that seeing her emotionless would wrench anyone's heart... and Sameer not only had to bear to see her that way, he also had to bear the burden that he had done it to her.

I am happy to know that my stories motivate you to come to the forum... Don't worry I will keep giving you things to read... 😳

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: bmk28
My my.. What a lovely story.. So wish that it could happen on screen too ;)
Reading your another writing piece too.. On part 4 and I am so glued... You are an amazing writer..

Thank you so much dear...!! 😃

Please do let me know your name...

Honestly speaking, I don't want this one to be incorporated on-screen at all.. I cannot see Naina emotionless... I barely managed to write about it... and it still felt painful to me...

Oh, that's great to know that you love my other story as well... do leave a comment on it... 😊

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Niakhush

@Niakhush

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Omg...this was so beautiful and heart touching!!! The whole part was as if written directly from heart!!! Wonderful dear!!! The sweet part which really touched me was...when Preeti says I will kill u if anything happens to naina...and same thinks...she will have to take no efforts for this...that was may b a small part...bt very cutely written!!!

Superb one...I just loved it!!!! I whd love to see them hugging and kissing when in serial also this manhusiyat ends!!!

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: meinfrau14
even if sleep deprived...u have a gift of words ! wonderful narration of such intense emotions...im reeling from the play of emotions in this os. U have portrayed the raw emotions and intensity so very beautifully ! well done and hope to read many more creations from you...of course you also must take care of your health ! rest well :)

Thank you so much dear...!! 😃

Hahaa... Truly speaking when I wrote it sitting up like an own at 3am, I didn't think it would turn out good.. But I just had to write it... After reading all the notes, I am feeling better about losing my sleep... I am glad it could connect a chort with you...

Yes, I will rest well for sure... 😳

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: souhasini
Awesome os . Naina😭. It literally pierced to see naina in such a state. N d realization. Sameer deserves dat slap for being dis asshole

Hey dear, thank for the appreciation... 😳

I understand completely... It pierced my heart to write about it too...

And indeed, Sameer completely deserves the slaps...