SamAina OS: The Oath - Page 7

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-Dhwani

Detailing m little weak but i just love reading stuff alot

Totally awestruck

This update was literally an emotional ride for me

Every aspect starting from Sameer's fear to Naina loosing hope and herself also was described beautifully

I could feel every emotion you mentioned

Sameer's rigid decision on not getting close to Naina made my heart ache ..that's the impact of your stories

When Sameer realised what he did was completely wrong and asked Preeti for help and in return received the " expression "

That was bang on ..I imitated Preeti while reading

The way you described Naina going completely emotion less

And specially that " thank you " it made me feel terrible for the poor girl ..she was behaving like a stranger with him

The turning point was literally a turning point ..and my favorite part of the story also

The hall scene has my heart ..my words will be able to do justice with your writing

I could only say that it was breathtaking

Specially Sameer saying " break the oath " and that kiss

I was holding my breath and waiting for Naina yo respond and she did and let it all out

Throwing things at him and then finally Sameer pacifying his girl was beautiful

Naina saying " how could you " she didn't need to give him a lecture just a small question would explain her situation

Loved the way you subtly handled the situation

And the last kiss on demand by Naina was purely bilss

The last dialogue has my heart about how and form when he started believing in superstition ..it was lovely

How do you come up with such ideas and words

I'm in aww of it

Extremely sorry for the late update ..don't be mad at me ..I might be the last one to comment but what to do this exam monster ..

Waiting for your updates as always

Love

Laalchi reader

The pain that sameer goes seeing naina is something which wrenched my heart. This was something which I had lined for on our show too. I so wanted sameer to feel something on similar lines where he could see naina go in a downward spiral, ache in her pain yet feel helpless. It was all so superbly portrayed. Especially the part where he tries to mend ways, after he realises his fault, how foolish he had been to lap up all of his step grandmother's unlucky nonsense. He was letting naina go from his life for it. He was actually not only torturing her but also putting himself through immense pain for no solid rhyme or reason. I loved the way he asks her to break the oath. Those blank states and hollowness tormented his soul and even the mist of superstition was lifted.the way he tries to coddle her and seeks her forgiveness touched my heart. The kiss was not only to bring her out of her sorry reverie but also to express the anguish and pain that he was going through..it was also the unquenchable thirst that he felt for her love. Naina's reaction and her demand at the end was completely justified. After all the hell that she was made to experience, it was like life had been breather in a jiffy. She was overwhelmed by it all but the trauma was undeniable for her and she wanted a compensation for all her torment.

Loved it!

If your sleepless nights make you come up with such wonderful creations then I must say bless those sleepless nights. But on a serious note since you have just tecuperayed from flu, I want you take as much rest as possible. Health comes first. Wish you a very happy a d restful weekend.

Thank you so much Manisha!! 🤗

Thanks a lot Meenakshi...!! 😃

Hahhaa.. Iss story ke liye ek kiss hi perfect ending tha... the kiss and the promise to never leave her again... As for more romance uske liye meri dusri stories hai na... 😳

Thank you so much Swaram..! 😃

I am glad you liked the story...

Thank you so much dear..! 😃