SamAina OS: The Oath - Page 5

Originally posted by: mehraan

Ahh i shouldnt read ur stories wen im at such a state😆...but i did it...Kya yaar Mou..how do u cme wit such gud writings Man...Honestly the depth of emotions of both these ccaptured so beautifully in all ur stories...I jus cant stop drooling on the fictional characters !

Excellent Os...Loved how Sam beta cme out of his own realizing his faults ...As his mom said in the show...he is allergic to love...n runs away from relationship that showers affection...Good to c u that u incorporated on those lines...!!..n the way he made up to her with patience n determination was hearttouching...The last bit was emotional man...can really relate to her pain n hurt!She was a living dead n he breathes life into her ...Gosh its beautiful !!

Originally posted by: Rucha21

Hey Mou...

Slightly different style of writing than usual, but I loved it...

I would have loved to see this type of confrontation in serial ...

Naina ne duster phek ke mara..😆😆😆...

kya sukoon mila dil ko..sadistic pleasure..he deserves that for what he has been doing with Naina..😃😃😃

Mast tha..👏👏

Tumhe neend kyu nahi a rahi..😉😉

Originally posted by: msdfan

In my whole life, I've cried for the first time after reading something.. 😭

It was total emotional update for me.. As I am emotional person and I was totally connected with this OS.. Loved it!! This is my most favourite OS till now 😳

Naina's life drastically changed due to a one oath.. She was completely in the trauma, she was not showing interest in anything

Because of her depression and changed behaviour, he got a little sense.. And finally he corrected his mistakes

I loved how Naina was cursing him with her words.. As she was coming out of his anger, frustration, depression, I just loved that scene.. Whatever she got in her hand, she threw at him

Aur 4-5 thappad dilane chahiye the na Sameer ko.. aur jyaada sukun milta dil ko, phir bhi smile karta wo.. That last kiss was so awesome.. ☺️

You have shown 85% Naina like me here 😊.. If anything happens to me, I do the same thing.. Like she kept silent, she hasn't spoken to anyone, not shared with anyone, whatever she got in her hand she threw at him, cursed with the words.. Exactly same things has happened to me..

Mou dear love you for this OS ❤️.. and thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: aman.bindra

Mou, another Fab piece of writing!

Withering effect of sameer's kasam and Naina's lifeless state was truely heart wrenching. Totally loved whne he realized the magnitude of his stupidity and decided to make amends.

Best was retaliation by Naina...every bit of her anger was justified. Totally felt for Naina here.

Your writing brings emotions to life!! 😊

Originally posted by: Prizi

u penned down it beautifully

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani

O bai!!

Bhagwaan jhoot na bulaaye Mou di kya likha hai

My favourite part was when Sam said break it Naina break the oath and that kiss from Sameer which again gives life to Naina

That was amazing

You sleep deprived brain is wonderful I must say

And I also loved that scene when Naina hit Sameer with the duster

Loved it Mou di loved it

Tussi toh Great ho👏

Originally posted by: moumita04

Wow Sona... I honestly didn't expect this story would strike a chord like this... But now I am happy that I was forced to give up on my sleep... I am so glad to read your comment...! 😳

Thank you so much...!! 😃

Yes, Sameer in his belief that Naina would be happier if she is away from him, forced her to take that oath... and ended up taking away everything from her... Her very reason for living was stolen... And this made his witness firsthand the result of his foolishness...

I wanted him to realize on his own as to how ridiculous he was behaving... and what as disaster he was hell bent on doing...

Naina withdrew everything within herself.. and that pent up emotions needed to come out... Her anger was completely justified, and Sameer knew it... so he stood there letting her hit him with things... and he felt happy when she slapped him... because he succeeded in provoking a reaction from her...

Haha... You reminded me of Randeep's comment.. 80% like Sameer... 😆

Ah dear... I cannot even imagine how this might feel... I can hold my hurt within me, not let anyone see it... But I don't withdraw in a shell... In fact I make sure that the person who hurt me is suffering just as much... I make them squirm.. and yes, I am all for harmless petty revenge... 😆😆

Originally posted by: Niakhush

Omg...this was so beautiful and heart touching!!! The whole part was as if written directly from heart!!! Wonderful dear!!! The sweet part which really touched me was...when Preeti says I will kill u if anything happens to naina...and same thinks...she will have to take no efforts for this...that was may b a small part...bt very cutely written!!!

Superb one...I just loved it!!!! I whd love to see them hugging and kissing when in serial also this manhusiyat ends!!!