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MSK04

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Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ratnarao12
Wowww...I had tears in my eyes which shows what a good narrator you are ...
Awesome

PL take care of ur health and come bk with a bang

Thank you so much for the appreciation dear...!! 😳

I am well now... it's just that I couldn't sleep for some reason.. .and then had to sit up and write... just couldn't forget the idea... 😊

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souhasini

@souhasini

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Awesome os . Naina😭. It literally pierced to see naina in such a state. N d realization. Sameer deserves dat slap for being dis asshole

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Radkam
Mast tha!!! Thappad bhi padwa diya...bechara Sam...screws up everytime or not, thappad tou khane padenge!

Thanks Radhika... 😃

Iss manhoos jaap ke liye he deserves slap... and also everything else that Naina hit him with... 😛

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: GiniRejith
Wow lovely. seeing them in pain hurts my heart but for them to come in the right track it was needed right Soo it's alright you have great skill in writing so keep writing and love the os very much

Thank you so much dear...!! 😳

Yes, seeing them in pain hurts... writing this hurt me... but I just had this idea and could not erase it.. so gave up and wrote this down... like I said, it's not my usual style of writing... I am glad I could connect a chord with you. 😊

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MSK04

@MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed
This was superb Mou .. I swear you protrayed their emotions so well .. ..I loved the.way you made them confront eachother and their push n pull .. I want to explain what I'm feeling after reading it but I'm at loss of words .. I swear ..

Thank you so much Alisha... 😳

The way Sameer behave with her, his desperate attempt to keep her away from him... It took everything away from her... and after this that confrontation was needed... the emotions she had locked away had to come out...

I am glad you loved the story dear... 😳

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mehraan

@mehraan

Trailblazer

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Ahh i shouldnt read ur stories wen im at such a state😆...but i did it...Kya yaar Mou..how do u cme wit such gud writings Man...Honestly the depth of emotions of both these ccaptured so beautifully in all ur stories...I jus cant stop drooling on the fictional characters !

Excellent Os...Loved how Sam beta cme out of his own realizing his faults ...As his mom said in the show...he is allergic to love...n runs away from relationship that showers affection...Good to c u that u incorporated on those lines...!!..n the way he made up to her with patience n determination was hearttouching...The last bit was emotional man...can really relate to her pain n hurt!She was a living dead n he breathes life into her ...Gosh its beautiful !!

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Rucha21

@Rucha21

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Hey Mou...

Slightly different style of writing than usual, but I loved it...

I would have loved to see this type of confrontation in serial ...

Naina ne duster phek ke mara..😆😆😆...

kya sukoon mila dil ko..sadistic pleasure..he deserves that for what he has been doing with Naina..😃😃😃

Mast tha..👏👏

Tumhe neend kyu nahi a rahi..😉😉

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Anjali33
He made her take an oath to not love him.. Could he kill her any more brutally!! Not loving him means not living for Naina
I loved how you expressed her lifeless state.. He made her like that and now he'll hv to bear that!!

Finally he had to give up on his manhusiyat crap n free her of that stupid oath.. And nothing can be more soothing than love

Naina hit him with duster😆 it was that smiling within tears moment for me

I love you yaar Moumita😳 (Naina ne ILU bhi bola tha Sameer se)

Sameer behaved like a jerk... Desperately tried to keep her away from him... At that spur of moment he didn't realize the consequences... He took away everything she was living for...

I wanted him to come to terms with the mahoos jaap on his own... He is stubborn... no one can make him understand... He had to realize on his own... and that happened when he saw that by pushing Naina away, he didn't ensure her safety and happiness... instead gave her pain and sadness, so intense that even he couldn't bear to look at her like that...

Ah yes... for the way he was behaving he deserved those slaps, that duster and every other thing Naina hit him with... 😆

I love you too yaar... !! And thank you for the note...!! 🤗

Chalo neend nai aai mereko, lekin ab lag raha hai story itna bhi kharab nai likha maine... 😛

Edited by moumita04 - 7 years ago

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MSK04

@MSK04

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: 9211
Loved it. From start to end. Will read it again and again!
Very emotional one. Thank you. I'm really speechless here!
Keep writing!❤️

Thank you Shweta...! 😳

I am glad you loved it... yes, this one was intensely emotional.. .and that's why I said its not my usual style...

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Sona../PJ

@Sona07

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

In my whole life, I've cried for the first time after reading something.. 😭

It was total emotional update for me.. As I am emotional person and I was totally connected with this OS.. Loved it!! This is my most favourite OS till now 😳

Naina's life drastically changed due to a one oath.. She was completely in the trauma, she was not showing interest in anything

Because of her depression and changed behaviour, he got a little sense.. And finally he corrected his mistakes

I loved how Naina was cursing him with her words.. As she was coming out of his anger, frustration, depression, I just loved that scene.. Whatever she got in her hand, she threw at him

Aur 4-5 thappad dilane chahiye the na Sameer ko.. aur jyaada sukun milta dil ko, phir bhi smile karta wo.. That last kiss was so awesome.. ☺️

You have shown 85% Naina like me here 😊.. If anything happens to me, I do the same thing.. Like she kept silent, she hasn't spoken to anyone, not shared with anyone, whatever she got in her hand she threw at him, cursed with the words.. Exactly same things has happened to me..

Mou dear love you for this OS ❤️.. and thanks for the PM

Edited by msdfan - 7 years ago

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