SamAina OS: The Oath - Page 2

He made her take an oath to not love him.. Could he kill her any more brutally!! Not loving him means not living for Naina

Loved it. From start to end. Will read it again and again!

Mou...saaf kehna sukhi rehna...matlab maja aa gaya hai ni...mera favorite part tha Naina hitting him with duster...so like Sam to giver her a kasam...beta she can't live without u...Sam kabhi itna mature lagta h, kabhi ekdum baccha...he wants her safe...despite the fact being away from her kills him too...he thinks he can't live with her...yet he doesn't realize that she can't live without him either...but somewhere I have deep respect for the man...matlab itna pyaar...u portrayed Naina ki lifelessness really well...I was reminded of the daze she was in post bet revelation. Aakhir sleeping beauty tab jaagi jab uske prince ne use kiss kiya...wooowww...the way he held tight onto her, held her, comforted her...showed how much they both need each other to be complete. How I wish that Dimple had walked on them kissing...hehe...n Sam use bolta...abey kareli ja yahan se...mujhe apni bhindi khani hai...lol...emotional yet lovable...as usual your writing is flawless...sorry yaar read ur story FF too yesterday but not finding time to comment...reaching home pretty late these days...n mobile pe mushkil ho raha hai to type...it's become really slow...isliye smileys avoid kiye...but ya agar nind na aaye aage se to aisi stories likhti raha karo...

Moumita... this is excellent... I was literally crying while reading this... beautifully penned as always and touched our hearts... keep writing

My God mou...I loved this tearjerker ...it stirred something in my heart ...I am in awe of you

My my.. What a lovely story.. So wish that it could happen on screen too ;)

Originally posted by: JaySee

Superb story. Pain, anger frustration all are there in both of them. Loved it very much.

Originally posted by: toshibelekar

Only u can pen it down like this. Excellent love ur writings. Take care of yourself. God bless you.

Originally posted by: pinalkpatel

This is so awesome! You have described Naina's state so well! I can see her go through this... and hen the kiss was awesome! Like I said in your other story... kill me now!!!! I can't believe that now I am thinking about your stories all day long... let me point out that I am not that young to do this! I am supposed to act all mature... lol

even if sleep deprived...u have a gift of words ! wonderful narration of such intense emotions...im reeling from the play of emotions in this os. U have portrayed the raw emotions and intensity so very beautifully ! well done and hope to read many more creations from you...of course you also must take care of your health ! rest well :)