SamAina FS: Whisky is the Answer (Part 4 updated on Page 19)

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Aley what a cute os ... 😳... Aise cute se ldke par kisko pyar nai aayega ... That phone call was so cute he was dying to listen those three magical words from her ... And all that what mundit did to make him blurt out the truth was aswesome ... ...whisky did the job ... But Mou this cant be just an os ... Pls add 1 or 2 parts more ... I want naina and his confrontation and chotu sa sa romantic part bhi chalega ... U r so good in writing romantic parts so i would love to read it

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AMereWanderer

@AMereWanderer

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: moumita04

Hi Muskan... 😳 Well, even I am not sure about Di, hahaa... just call me Mou... that's what everyone calls me on this forum... Let's not talk about age... 😉

@Bold: Oh Bai...!! I am not that dangerous yaar... In fact I am very patient and cheerful person... Don't be so scared of talking to me... 😆
Glad that you decided to break your silence... Would love to read your comments on my other stories as well... 😳

Thanks a lot dear... 😃
I was actually so fed up of his manhoos jaap, that I thought getting him drunk might be a good idea to know what's going on in his mind... Especially since he is so hell-bent on not talking... Even though he lives in Ahmedabad, he did mention during Mt. Abu sequence that Nanu had his personal stock... so I used that... Happy to know you loved the story...!!

Love,
Mou

Hey Mou! (You're right...one should never question a girl's age 😆)

Bhagwaan jhoot na bulaye there wasn't anything dangerous about you, par main thodi sharmili type ki hoon 😆 isiliye bohot sochti hoon before taking a decision 😕

I was currently reading your SS - 'Lights of Eternity' and I must say, you write beautifully! Will definitely comment on them. I too have started writing on SamAina - 'A Broken Future of Togetherness..' Do check that one out and let me know how it is. Ab bhagwaan jhoot na bulaye thodi toh advertising banti hai na 😆

Frankly speaking, I am fed up too. I mean, I get why Sameer's doing this (thanks to dadi) he doesn't want to hurt Naina, but ab kuch zyaada hi bhau kha raha hai...tho loved Naina's boldness in the maha episode! That kiss...haye!! ❤️

I loved the way you picked key details from the Mt. Abu trip and revolved the OS around it. Can we hope for a conversion to an SS? 😃

Muskan😃

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Naina

@KhwabonKiRani

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Awesome os dear

Well written...

Thanks for the pm

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: moumita04

Hahahaa... Sach me weeky kamaal kar gai... 😆😆
Yes, MunDit to shaitaan hai hi... 😉 Ab socho mera dimag kitna khurafaati hoga to come up with ideas like this... 😆😆

Yes, Sameer knew already that he was hurting Naina... but MunDit's taunts and descriptions gave him a clear picture of what she was going through... in fact all of his friends... That's why he was disgusted with himself...

Thanks for the appreciation Anjali... 😃

Arey, you are katilana.. No doubt in that😳

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gugul

@gugul

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

It's just superb... Can imagine everything like a movie playing... You write so well... Really nice

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Radkam

@Radkam

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Padh liya!!! Finally Sameer got to confess the dumb reasons...I loved how u made that drunken slurry speech, now whiskey vl b weekkyyy... 😛

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Priya

@Prickly_164.

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Awesome os. Really want to know what is Naina planning..Next part plzz

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mehraan

@mehraan

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Cute Os Mou!!

i always had the fascination to c Sam drunk😆..Even in Mt abu episodes..i wanted these 3 to hve a taste of that brandy...😆 n then the effects to it!!..But hamare show me hoga ya nahi..pata nahi but then again u fulfilled one of my wishes...i luv the slurry slipping speech of him n how he made Naina confess the 3 magical words... luv the words tat spell out both from them..it sounds heavenly as usual!!

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aman.bindra

@aman.bindra

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Mou!! sorry for being late! I am out of vacation this week but I got super excited to get your PM!! You know how i feel about your stories so I had to read it!! 😆

Story is amazinggg!! mujhe sach mein lagta hai aab toh shayad yehi rasta reh gaya hai iss ladke se kuch uglwane ka ya kuch bulwane ka! Drunk Sameer is soo cuteee! but munna and pandit have my heart with this one!!

Munna and Pandit are true friends and devars!!! Hats off to their friendship!! Show mein aisa dekhne se raha so thank you as always to come up with story that has such cute and positive feel to it!! 👏👏

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Uv78

@Uv78

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Hey mou, first of all sorry for a late reply...

It was a treat to see a drunked sameer...bholuram ko pata nahi chala ki uske dost kya trick kar rahe hai uske sath...dosto ke liye jaan b de sakta hai...i like this quality of his a lot...naina handled him nicely...just loved your penning and its speed too...keep writing mou...

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