SamAina FS: Whisky is the Answer (Part 4 updated on Page 19) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Alle Waah!! Kya asar dikhaya h weekky nešŸ˜†
MunDit ka plan..superbšŸ‘ shaitan log hi sahi tigdam bhidate h

Sameer must be so hurt on knowing how his ignorance affects NainašŸ˜’

Dialogues were very good.. Brilliant OS
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Posted: 7 years ago
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nice OS mou... i really liked how u penned down the slurry tone of sameer...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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I am loving MunDit more and more thanks to all the talented writers on this forum.
If the meaning of friends were to be put into pictures, I would put a pic of those two.
The limits and barriers that they cross to keep their friend happy and to help him is amazing..
As for Sameer here, I would do anything to see this on the show. Can only imagine the cute face as he slurs and speaks his heart out. The actions would be a sight for sore eyes..
As for the love confession, will be a memory Naina can cherish for life.
Is there no way you can convert this to a TS, FS or SS?

Thank you for the pm...
Lotsa Love
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: JaySee

Superb story.
I loved the drunken sameer. Was actually imagining randeep talking like this. It will be really cute to see. Pls continue. Quite curious to know how naina will drill some sense into Sameer's brain.


Thank you so much dear...!! 😃

Hahhaa... Yes, while writing I too let my imagination flow... Randeep would surely look cute talking like this... I will try and add another part dear...! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you so much for this moumita!!

Perfect remedy for the frustration i'm going through seeing sameer's antics, i really want to throw something over his head now, so really thanks for this yaar.

I can't explain how i felt after reading this, it brought the shows essence with munna and pandit trying to find out what really happened in whatever way they know, and supporting their bhabhi who is going through so much heartbreak because of sameer. But still being there for theor yaaron ki yaar.

It reminded me the days after the bet when munna and pandit were trying to explain to sameer why he was so upset on vishaka after returning from mt. Abu trip. How he was upset on himself and not her. Getting him out of his japp by stating him the facts on his face.

What should i say? It was perfect literally!! You gave us everything in one OS, i would be really happy if u made it into a TS and give us all some much needed relief with naina dealing sam after this.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

Whisky is the answer !!

10/ 10 for this answer
It was lovely ..you brilliantly portrayed Sameer's helplessness
And munna Pandit plan to make him confess his worries
Pandit and his bang on idea ..mundit joining hands in front of nanu's photo was so sweet ..loved it
And munna is such a nautanki ... Frock vala Pandit se jhagda
Both of them very cleverly build the situation
" nai ladkiyon ko dekhne se fursat milegi .." This line really did something to Sameer and me
Their small small taunts made Sameer feel miserable
Resulting in Sameer getting extremely drunk
His " meli Naina " was my favorite ..he was sounding like a kid
And my favorite part was Sameer scolding mundit as they called his Naina " maniben " it was awesome
Sameer is such a perfect husband material ...he was scared of Naina and his demand of listening to 3 magical words was sooo cute ..
Thank you so much for the update ..enjoyed it
Your updates always leave me craving for more and more
I don't think I need to say that I love you writings
Are we getting part 2 of this ?
And please update " always and forever "
I'm dying to read the next part..

Love
Laalchi reader


Thank you so much Manisha...!! 😃

Yes, MunDit cleverly formulated their plan... keeping on delaying telling him the reason, making him curious, then concerned, and finally miserable with their taunts... He knew he was hurting Naina, but on hearing the confirmation about the pain he had caused her he felt disgusted with himself... Plus their rudeness made his realize how his rude behavior must be hurting everyone else.

I will try and add another part to this dear...! Thanks for loving my stories so much...
I am working on the update for Always and Forever, actually I was out this weekend, will update that one soon!

Love,
Mou
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Kya likha hai Mou di
Aapke charan kaha hai
Superb!!!
And dil le lo for that dialogue of Sameer "sala sasur "😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Lovely OS Mou! Mundit ka idea ekdum mast tha! I was half expecting them to call Naina there to witness his confession in person and then pull his ears! Koi nahi phone pe Baat hi sahi :) important is Naina understands/knows now the reason behind this stupid behaviour. The SaMunDit bond is so adorable.. it's a pleasure to watch/read their scenes.


Thank you so much dear...!! 😃

Hahaha... Sameer was drunk, but even in that state he was muttering not to tell Naina about it... Only when he had finally confessed everything, did he feel light enough to pay attention to the fact that he needed to apologize to Naina... So, I wasn't sure if Naina being there would have worked... I just wanted to get the facts out of Sameer, so that his friends would know what's going on in that brain of his... 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

Alle Waah!! Kya asar dikhaya h weekky nešŸ˜†

MunDit ka plan..superbšŸ‘ shaitan log hi sahi tigdam bhidate h

Sameer must be so hurt on knowing how his ignorance affects NainašŸ˜’

Dialogues were very good.. Brilliant OS


Hahahaa... Sach me weeky kamaal kar gai... šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Yes, MunDit to shaitaan hai hi... šŸ˜‰ Ab socho mera dimag kitna khurafaati hoga to come up with ideas like this... šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

Yes, Sameer knew already that he was hurting Naina... but MunDit's taunts and descriptions gave him a clear picture of what she was going through... in fact all of his friends... That's why he was disgusted with himself...

Thanks for the appreciation Anjali... 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -vandy-

nice OS mou... i really liked how u penned down the slurry tone of sameer...


Thank you so much Vandy...!! 😃
Glad you liked it...

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