SamAina FS: Whisky is the Answer (Part 4 updated on Page 19) - Page 16

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Posted: 7 years ago

Whisky is the answer! Well to me Mou is the answer, especially when am trudging along a mundane day and my little one is being difficult with all her wails, I look to your updates to sail me through. Motherhood though comes naturally to you being a woman, but can be difficult. And in these difficult times you need something that would keep you up and about and your updates do the same for me.


Coming to the part

Whenever naina makes extra efforts to get sameer's attention I guess it makes me feel happy. The bowled over expression of same when he sees her all dolled up for their first dance was pleasurable to read about, and that brush off that sunaina received by sam, hahahaha! Cracked me up imagining her stricken and irate expression. It was all so beautiful, the prelude to the revelation.


Kartik approaching naina for dance and sameer coming over with unleashing his claws of possession and claiming his rights over her, this I loved reading about. The way sameer comes forward taking naina by the waist proclaiming her as his own. He is not scared or doesn't shy away from letting the world know that she is his and his only and he would not let any foreign entity breach the sanctity of his protection and get to her. He is her shield and knight in the shining armour. Though naina was abit wary with his reaction and thought he might blame her for all the attention that she was getting from kartik but the way he reassured her was superb. The face off between kartik and sameer was hot to read about especially when the vivid scenes of our hero staring down his adversary with fire spitting from his eyes, made her fan myself before I returned to my senses to comment here.



The efforts made by sameer to win over his friends, made me go aww. Those gestures were not only sweet but the cute childlike innocence of sameer reflected in the part and it was depicted with perfection.

And the moment of reckoning, I was biting my nails in suspense while reading as to how sameer would react to all when he comes to know how he had been outplayed by his friends. The weeky truth finally was out and when the truth finally dawned on him that he had called naina that night and blabbered to his heart's content, the stricken expression made me laugh. The banter that flowed especially munna pundit pulling his leg over, and Swati and preeti lunging in with their bits was refreshing to read about. But while everyone was busy revealing the truth to him and enjoying the effect it had on his face. Naina was busy assessing and reading in between the lines. Hence when he tried to act stern and even screamed at his friends to make it seem believable, his love called his bluff. Poor sameer forgot to let go of naina's hand.

Their dance together, gliding to the music while they brushed into each other's arms making promises of eternity, I do t need to tell you you are a master at depicting the romantic scenes. It was plain perfect and while they danced I could feel goosebumps on my skin. The effect of all the electricity that these two exude Every time they are together .


I hope I did justice reviewing such a wonderful update.
I'll come back for more in due time since am already reading it all over again
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Posted: 7 years ago

Finally I got some time to read and comment for this amazing story.

Part 1:

Munna and Pandit are examples of true friends. How much they care about their Bhabhi. Your descriptions about the scene are so realistic. I could clearly imagine Munna's sad face because of Swati not speaking to him. And drunken Sameer is tooo cute. He immediately got up to leave for Naina's house to say sorry to her opps.. sowwy... This part was hilarious and cute. Especially way Sameer says Weeky so cute... and also how he demands to hear I love you from Naina.

Part 2 :

Sameer thought that Naina told I love you in his dreams. One dreams of something which will not happen and the other thinks what actually happened to be a dream.

Sameer getting jealous of Karthik. Even though he doesn't want to come close to Naina he cant bear any other boy close to her. Time and again Mundit prove that they are indeed the best Devars. They cant see their bhabhi hurt. These two are so stubborn..

Part 3:

Uff.. Sameer is so possessive over his Naina and the rain romance...The way Naina makes Sameer realize was so beautiful. Something like this would have made more sense then the bell scene in the show.

The terrace romance has my heart. Sameer sleeping on Naina's lap, if this happens in show for real then I would die of happiness.

How I wish all this could have happened in the show or atleast half of it. But we fans are not that lucky. But we are lucky to have such amazing writer like you who can make us blush just by reading your stories.

Part 4:

I loved how Sameer just ignored sunaina and drooled over his girl. He doesn't waste a moment before claiming his right over her. They way he puts a possessive arm over her waist.

The confrontation with the gang was amazing. Samundit are love... the handhold, sameer doesn't want to let go of her hands even while acting to be angry...

Sameer locked the door.. This boy's actions doesn't seem to be masoom or nirdosh at all. The kiss on the forehead and the dance was amazing.

Naina already started to behave like Mrs. Maheshwari saying that she will hit him.. but the both are sooo cute...

I totally LOVEEEDDD this FS ❤️. Thank you soo much for the pm and do continue writing stories. I love your writing...

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Posted: 7 years ago
wow amazing ending
waiting for new saga'

thanks for PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
Another amazing story , I wonder how you manage to do this with every creation of yours. So realistic, heart warming yet sensuous. Truly blessed with talent for weaving magic with words. Waiting for more. ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
UNRESD FOR PART-1 AND 2 ON PG-15.😳

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