Short Story:MY STOLEN HEART (Part 21Concluding Part updated page 102 )

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surbharati

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Posted: 7 years ago

#91

Very Cute and adorable...loved ti as always..very different and nice story...oh I am waiting when Naina's love at first sight will be revealed...They are so cute...

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#92

It was so cute update..
Loved it
Thanks for pm..

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surbharati

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Posted: 7 years ago

#93

Loved this Rohan also to core along with Sameer

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ujwal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#94

hey loved this concept..👍🏼

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MSK04

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Posted: 7 years ago

#95

Haaye mera dil... ❤️

Ashu I cannot tell you how happy I was to read this update... found it as soon as I woke up... and there cannot be a better start to my day. 🤗

I want to cherish the beautiful moments... the phone conversation one feeling insecure and the other addressing exactly those insecurities and nipping them from the roots. The picture of Naina standing in light pink anarkali with slightly damp hair and Sameer's desire to hug her... haaye! Such subtle romantic thoughts... and the immediate next moment the smell of her perfume increases the intensity and Sameer's thoughts wander to lips and other fantasies... ☺️

The family bonding is well done... still a little bit difficult to imagine Sameer calling Mr. Somani as Dad... but I guess that's what he would have been if he had accepted Sameer when he was a kid, which he has done in your story.

Loved Rohan so much... He refused to marry Kamya.. and has the utmost respect for his Naina bhabhi... and also understands his Bhai's feelings so well... 👏 Studious Rohan is teaching romance to big bro... 😆

I am wondering if you are going to bring Kamya face to face with this new couple... maybe first with Naina, and then Sameer comes in... would love to see that... and imagine the reaction on Kamya's face... 😉

I am never greedy to keep asking for more... but this story has made me greedy... for the first time ever I have felt the update is not enough, I want more.. and I want it now...! I am surprised at myself... 😲

I hope you have the next update almost ready and are not going to make us wait too long... Pretty Please... 😳

Edited by moumita04 - 7 years ago

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Phoenix

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Posted: 7 years ago

#96

The part was amazing

Sameer's growing feelings and realization is so beautifully written... Sam was like a dhoodh ka jala type... Though deep inside he knows naina isn't like kamya, bt still he feels insecure somewhere... That phone convo was so adorable... It was much needed to clear his mind.

Sameer bechaini and his need to spend more and more time with her😳... Rohan clearly understands his bhai... I loved how sameer didn't shy away this time... Instead he accepted that he always had his heart for naina... Kamya was neverhis love.. It was always naina.

The way he was mesmerized seeing her in pink salwar... His desire to take her into his arms... He hasstarted seeing her physical beauty as well... Her hesitation to sit with him on the bike... Him understanding that he never felt the same way with any other girl... Not even kamya... The bike ride part was the best.

The chocolate part was so adorable... Such a cute boyfriend he is... Vishakha teasing him... Naina is already behaving like a wife and covering up for him😳.. Such a cute gesture... Loving rohan the cute bhai... Making sure his bhai and bhabhi gets some alone time together.

Thanks for this story ashu... A much needed relief from the heavy episodes... Pls update soon dear.

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: shelly_nair
Loved it. Can't wait for the next update. Pls update soon.

Thank you so much !! Glad you liked it !!

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: suhaaniladki
Only thing i found not good was it ended way to quickly such a nice beautiful concept jitna pado utna km hai but i can understand reading is easy but being a writer it must be difficult for u. ... Am in love with this avtaar of sameer maheshwari ... His ansankari thoughts are driving him crazy😆ab fault uska bhi nhi ... Itni sundar naina ko dekh k naina toh fislenge hi na ... Liked sameer rohan's bonding too... Kya kya expect kiya tha show mei is bonding se but was not up to the mark ... U fulfilled my wish😃
Pls update soon and thanks for the pm dear

Thank you so much !! Glad you liked it.

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Hitanshivyas
Amazing update that was really cute and now can't wait more for the next update please update soon and thanks for the pm 😊

Thank you so much !! Will try to update soon.

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 7 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Azraa01
This was soo cute. Loved the bond Sameer shares with his siblings. And this Rohan is going to bring them Sameer and Naina closer. The relationship between Samaina is also strengthening day by day. Thank you for the pm and eagerly awaiting the next update.

Thank you so much !! Rohan is very studious but he is equally naughty...wait and watch... 😉