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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Asmaara

Sameer is slowly realizing that he had an affection for his behanji since school...

and naina is also starting to get comfortable around him
would be amazing to see how their story progresses
Thanks for the update dear,,, it was much needed after such a nonsensical episode

try to update soon, this week is going to be hard for us!!

Thank you so much !! Slow realization is always enticing and for a reader the path to realization is the most enjoyable part 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
This story is slowly growing on me😳
This is a story with such simplicity and very good plotline that hasn't been used before..
Thank you for this update...I was so upset after watching the episode and this made my mood better
Naina understanding Sameer like a true partner...👏
The mutual attraction between them, they need to explore it more and more...
The teasing, haha, I am loving this Vishaka Visual and Rohan little too much😃
Eagerly waiting for the next part!
Love,
Shreya
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Posted: 7 years ago
Aww Ashu Di
It was so adorable n lovely
That chocolate n then Rohan's idea at the end was❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the pm
I m in love with this story
Jitna padho mann nhi bharta
Sameer comparing naina with kamya is so beautifully described
Rohan character is lovely
Vishakha is like a true mother here khair aajkal toh show me bhi acchi hogayi hai but here i love her charcater
Can i know ur name pls?

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Posted: 7 years ago
Its amezing !!
I'm seriously in love with your story ..this update was just so cute..
Loving Sameer and rohan bond its really cute
The plotline of the story is very interesting and the way you've out everything together is beautiful ..
Characterisation is simply perfect ..I'm totally loving this " I'm in love Sameer " and a guarded Naina
You have presented their complicated equation with such perfection
Rohan listening Sameer and Naina's phone conversation and then suggesting to beeter go on a bike was the highlight of the update ..and my favorite part from the entire update is Sameer's thoughts ...he is having such a tough time now ..omg what will happen after marriage ..now he knows what cold shower means ..this line ..dil le lo
Sameer can't help but compare Naina to kamya ..well its good as then only he will understand what a gem of a person she is and how lucky he is to have her
Rohan had announced about Sameer's plan in the entire house.. Poor Sameer was being teased so much much he was enjoying it as well
And then rohan's last dialogue that he will drop you home and Sameer's yup ..Sameer ka bas chake toh vo office ke andar tak chod jar aay

I'm loving your story and now I'm really eager to read the next part ..can't wait
Please Mujh bholi bacchi pe Rehem karna
Come soon

Love
Laalchi reader
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Posted: 7 years ago

It was an amazing update.. Loved it!! 👏

Can't wait for the next update.. Please update soon 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayashika

This story is slowly growing on me😳

This is a story with such simplicity and very good plotline that hasn't been used before..
Thank you for this update...I was so upset after watching the episode and this made my mood better
Naina understanding Sameer like a true partner...👏
The mutual attraction between them, they need to explore it more and more...
The teasing, haha, I am loving this Vishaka Visual and Rohan little too much😃
Eagerly waiting for the next part!
Love,
Shreya

Thank you so much !!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: NikiAries

Awww!!!!😳 This part is so adorable, a smile was plastered to my face during the second part. Slow and steady wins the race indeed, they both make such a perfect couple.

One thing I realized while reading today is the impact of this story deepens due Naina's and Sam's narration besides the normal progression. Both of them are dealing with their insecurities in a beautiful way, by talking it out and leaving no room for misunderstandings. I am looking forward to Naina opening up more to Sam, discussing her unrequited (at least in the past) love for him!

Thank you for the PM and the quickest update. Now the heart desires more, please write soon!😛

Wonderful job!

Thank you so much !!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: msdfan

It was an amazing update.. Loved
it!!👏


Can't wait for the next update..
Please update soon😊



Thank you so much !!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

Its amezing !!

I'm seriously in love with your story ..this update was just so cute..
Loving Sameer and rohan bond its really cute
The plotline of the story is very interesting and the way you've out everything together is beautiful ..
Characterisation is simply perfect ..I'm totally loving this " I'm in love Sameer " and a guarded Naina
You have presented their complicated equation with such perfection
Rohan listening Sameer and Naina's phone conversation and then suggesting to beeter go on a bike was the highlight of the update ..and my favorite part from the entire update is Sameer's thoughts ...he is having such a tough time now ..omg what will happen after marriage ..now he knows what cold shower means ..this line ..dil le lo
Sameer can't help but compare Naina to kamya ..well its good as then only he will understand what a gem of a person she is and how lucky he is to have her
Rohan had announced about Sameer's plan in the entire house.. Poor Sameer was being teased so much much he was enjoying it as well
And then rohan's last dialogue that he will drop you home and Sameer's yup ..Sameer ka bas chake toh vo office ke andar tak chod jar aay

I'm loving your story and now I'm really eager to read the next part ..can't wait
Please Mujh bholi bacchi pe Rehem karna
Come soon

Love
Laalchi reader

Thank you so much !! glad you liked it !!

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