Short Story:MY STOLEN HEART (Part 21Concluding Part updated page 102 )

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Cute and adorable

After a heavy weight emotional roller coaster of an episode, this was the much awaited breather. Thanks for the thoughtfulness. Like I had earlier mentioned in my comment the very simplicity of the plotline and the very way that you are progressing with the story is making me hooked to this one. Sameer and Visakha's bond in this is endearing to read about. The banter and the easy camaraderie that Rohan and sameer share is beautiful. Sameer and Naina's love and mutual attraction is showcased amazingly!!!!! Am loving this story and with every part am looking forward to more. Do update soon.

Because given the correct track we'll be needing more and more and more as parched souls!

Edited by doublecross - 7 years ago

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shelly_nair

@shelly_nair

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Loved it. Can't wait for the next update. Pls update soon.

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Only thing i found not good was it ended way to quickly such a nice beautiful concept jitna pado utna km hai but i can understand reading is easy but being a writer it must be difficult for u. ... Am in love with this avtaar of sameer maheshwari ... His ansankari thoughts are driving him crazy 😆 ab fault uska bhi nhi ... Itni sundar naina ko dekh k naina toh fislenge hi na ... Liked sameer rohan's bonding too... Kya kya expect kiya tha show mei is bonding se but was not up to the mark ... U fulfilled my wish 😃

Pls update soon and thanks for the pm dear

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Hitanshivyas

@Hitanshivyas

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Amazing update that was really cute and now can't wait more for the next update please update soon and thanks for the pm 😊

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Azraa

@Azraa01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#85

This was soo cute. Loved the bond Sameer shares with his siblings. And this Rohan is going to bring them Sameer and Naina closer. The relationship between Samaina is also strengthening day by day. Thank you for the pm and eagerly awaiting the next update.

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: doublecross
Cute and adorable
After a heavy weight emotional roller coaster of an episode, this was the much awaited breather. Thanks for the thoughtfulness. Like I had earlier mentioned in my comment the very simplicity of the plotline and the very way that you are progressing with the story is making me hooked to this one. Sameer and Visakha's bond in this is endearing to read about. The banter and the easy camaraderie that Rohan and sameer share is beautiful. Sameer and Naina's love and mutual attraction is showcased amazingly!!!!! Am loving this story and with every part am looking forward to more. Do update soon.
Because given the correct track we'll be needineeding more and more and more as parched souls!

Thank you so much !! I wanted to see such scenes in our show...especially bonding between Sameer and Rohan...sadly CVs had a different plan...so I decided to write down my imagination... 😆 😉 Am glad you liked it

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Romanoff

@Asmaara

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Sameer is slowly realizing that he had an affection for his behanji since school...

and naina is also starting to get comfortable around him

would be amazing to see how their story progresses

Thanks for the update dear,,, it was much needed after such a nonsensical episode

try to update soon, this week is going to be hard for us!!

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Anmol333
Do add your story to forum index thread...

Sure will do Anmol.

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_shweta98

@_shweta98

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#89

Niceee! Sameer always wanting to be with Naina! Continue ASAP.

Eager to read more..❤️

Edited by 9211 - 7 years ago

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ScarletNiki

@ScarletNiki

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#90

Awww!!!!😳 This part is so adorable, a smile was plastered to my face during the second part. Slow and steady wins the race indeed, they both make such a perfect couple.

One thing I realized while reading today is the impact of this story deepens due Naina's and Sam's narration besides the normal progression. Both of them are dealing with their insecurities in a beautiful way, by talking it out and leaving no room for misunderstandings. I am looking forward to Naina opening up more to Sam, discussing her unrequited (at least in the past) love for him!

Thank you for the PM and the quickest update. Now the heart desires more, please write soon!😛

Wonderful job!