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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved the way the siblings are bonding!! You have created the understanding between Sameer and Rohan in a very realistic way.

Do keep writing more!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Komalp1391

Aww thanku so much for giving these beautiful pieces to us readers and putting a lot of hard work in it but ur hard work pays off i must say u r a fabulous writer and yes rushing to read ur another story and will comment soon on that too


Thank you so much dear...I'm truly humbled...😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Loved the way the siblings are bonding!! You have created the understanding between Sameer and Rohan in a very realistic way.

Do keep writing more!

Thanks dear!! Glad you liked it! 😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kkadss

Good one

Pls continue


Thanks dear...sure!! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Would love to see this in the show also .. especially the way you show rohan's concern about him and his and deepika's friendship then ofcourse the brotherly bond .. perfect .. do PM me if your planinpl to write more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AlishaSyed

Would love to see this in the show also .. especially the way you show rohan's concern about him and his and deepika's friendship then ofcourse the brotherly bond .. perfect .. do PM me if your planinpl to write more

Thank you so much dear...pakka would PM!😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prizi

beautifully written

Thank you Prizi! 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow!!! Beautifully written.👏
wish aisa hi kuch show mei bhi hi jaye 😉😉

abi tak to Rohan dadi ka time-table wala robot hi bana hua h 😭😭

i sooo want the 3 siblings to share a sweet bond n tht leaving Vishakha surprised 😲😲 n evil somani ma-beta duo shocked 😡😡

it ll be gud to see Rohan helping Sameer in return Sameer making Rohan more a teenager thn just a study-Robot 😊😊


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully written dear!!!

Sibbling goals ...u showed it so sweetly...whd actually love to see Rohan bonding this way in the show as well!!!

Would love to see how the topper brains whould work to get the love birds together!!!

The best thing that cracked me was...Rohan dailouge...aaj ka study schedule cancel...bas dadi ko mat batana!!

Lovely one dear!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Surbhi it was beautifully written😃👏
would love to see something like this in the show... aisa bond ho jaye to Dadi ka kya hoga😆
Loved the cute Deepu here...unlike the one shown till now😛

Please continue soon😃

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