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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wonderful sur
As always, penned down so beautifully... A story on sameer rohan bonding... I wish rohan to be just like this in the show as well... I so want rohan and Deepika to become sam's support in somani house..
Rohan sam bonding was such a treat to read... Deepu-sam friendship was too cute... Rohan understanding sam and taking steps towards him was so good... Rohan even ready to skip studies for sam😛.. Wow... Rohan getting excited about his brother's love life and asking whether his bhabhi has a sister was lovely😉... Just too good like your 'love in mt. Abu'... Proud to be a big fan of ur stories.
Pls do continue and pm me.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Surbhiii!!!!! I'M JUMPING!!!!!! This was Epic!!!!!!

Rohan following Sameer... atleast thank god Sameer was able to talk to Naina!!!

Taijiii😡 umeed hi yahi thi Aapse to...


Bichaara Sam... but Deepika🥳meri jaan!!!

The way Rohan handled Naina's pic!!! And deepika-Sam scene was just❤️ they're Dost!!!!!

Rohan called her Bhabi and the "Naina ki Kasam"... please kuch khilao usko... uski maa se to kuch ho nhi raha hai...😡

Sameer meri jaan sibling are the best family!!!! Trust me..!!

Rohan, sweety, thoda intazaar kar.. aa rahi hai Preeti😉

I hope we get this bonding in the show soon tooo❤️

I could literally imagine Randeep portraying the's scene you know... and my heart literally burst with happiness!


Kudos Madam... keep writing!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelic567

Wonderful sur

As always, penned down so beautifully... A story on sameer rohan bonding... I wish rohan to be just like this in the show as well... I so want rohan and Deepika to become sam's support in somani house..
Rohan sam bonding was such a treat to read... Deepu-sam friendship was too cute... Rohan understanding sam and taking steps towards him was so good... Rohan even ready to skip studies for sam😛.. Wow... Rohan getting excited about his brother's love life and asking whether his bhabhi has a sister was lovely😉... Just too good like your 'love in mt. Abu'... Proud to be a big fan of ur stories.
Pls do continue and pm me.


Hey dear (btw what do I call you? 😆 Did I ever ask?)
Thank you so so so much for the beautiful review!! I'm elated that you enjoyed this piece as much as you enjoyed my other work...truly humbled yaar!! I hope I can keep you engrossed with my new stories like this too!!
Love,
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: MissRight

Surbhiii!!!!! I'M JUMPING!!!!!! This was Epic!!!!!!

Rohan following Sameer... atleast thank god Sameer was able to talk to Naina!!!

Taijiii😡 umeed hi yahi thi Aapse to...


Bichaara Sam... but Deepika🥳meri jaan!!!

The way Rohan handled Naina's pic!!! And deepika-Sam scene was just❤️ they're Dost!!!!!

Rohan called her Bhabi and the "Naina ki Kasam"... please kuch khilao usko... uski maa se to kuch ho nhi raha hai...😡

Sameer meri jaan sibling are the best family!!!! Trust me..!!

Rohan, sweety, thoda intazaar kar.. aa rahi hai Preeti😉

I hope we get this bonding in the show soon tooo❤️

I could literally imagine Randeep portraying the's scene you know... and my heart literally burst with happiness!


Kudos Madam... keep writing!!!


Hey Mrs. Rai...so you could imagine Mr. Rai in the story I wrote...that I would say is my biggest feat 😳 thank you very much dear for loving this story and my others as well...you guys, my awesome readers are the ones who motivate me to keep writing!!
Btw...Prem ko jaldi jaldi satao...aur mere Sameer aur Naina ke prem ka (pyaar wale prem ka) milan karwa do...varna Sameer jalan ke maare jal hi jayega 😆😆
Edited by Samaina_1990 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990


Hey dear (btw what do I call you? 😆 Did I ever ask?)
Thank you so so so much for the beautiful review!! I'm elated that you enjoyed this piece as much as you enjoyed my other work...truly humbled yaar!! I hope I can keep you engrossed with my new stories like this too!!
Love,
Sur

call me simi dear.. Btw u asked before too😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Beautiful sur i want this kind of bonding in the show also here deepika is so cute and lovely show me dekho madam ko
I want rohan to be lyk this only so that sam can share his pain grief to him
U truly expressed the feelings of sam towards vishkha
Loved the line koi behen hai uski ...setting kra de hayee dil le lo
I love ur writings dear i m waiting for ur love in mt abu k baad wali story
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: angelic567

call me simi dear.. Btw u asked before too😛

Sorry yaar Simi! I guess I'm suffering from short-term memory loss these days!! 😆😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990


Thanks so much dear...such detailed comments! Seriously...Keshav to bada hi potential villain hai...upar se uski wo kajrari type aankhein...baap re!! I'm happy to see you liked the bonding between the brothers. I would try my best to update another part for this...😊😊

kajrari aankhe cracked me up🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Komalp1391

Beautiful sur i want this kind of bonding in the show also here deepika is so cute and lovely show me dekho madam ko

I want rohan to be lyk this only so that sam can share his pain grief to him
U truly expressed the feelings of sam towards vishkha
Loved the line koi behen hai uski ...setting kra de hayee dil le lo
I love ur writings dear i m waiting for ur love in mt abu k baad wali story


Hey Komal...thanks so much yaar!! Yeah me too want something positive for Sam there in Dilli! I do hope Rohan and Deepu turn the anchors for Sameer's love story till the time he's in Delhi...perfect coordination between Rohan, Deepu, Munna, Pandit, Swati and Preeti would enable Sameer and Naina pass this phase of judaai a tad bit easily perhaps.

Thank you for liking "Love in Mt. Abu" yaar...frankly speaking yaar...I've been having a hard time writing and organizing it...much more than I had during Love in Mt. Abu...I guess Sameer and Naina need to be more mature and the storyline is more vague to write now. I spent the whole day since morning, trying to finish off this part, putting the sequel to Love in Mt. Abu in shape as well as polishing a new story that I had been writing. I've posted that too just sometime back, if you would like to read it. It's titled "Expectedly Unexpected" 😊 Would love to hear your take on that too!

Love,
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990


Hey Komal...thanks so much yaar!! Yeah me too want something positive for Sam there in Dilli! I do hope Rohan and Deepu turn the anchors for Sameer's love story till the time he's in Delhi...perfect coordination between Rohan, Deepu, Munna, Pandit, Swati and Preeti would enable Sameer and Naina pass this phase of judaai a tad bit easily perhaps.

Thank you for liking "Love in Mt. Abu" yaar...frankly speaking yaar...I've been having a hard time writing and organizing it...much more than I had during Love in Mt. Abu...I guess Sameer and Naina need to be more mature and the storyline is more vague to write now. I spent the whole day since morning, trying to finish off this part, putting the sequel to Love in Mt. Abu in shape as well as polishing a new story that I had been writing. I've posted that too just sometime back, if you would like to read it. It's titled "Expectedly Unexpected" 😊 Would love to hear your take on that too!

Love,
Sur

Aww thanku so much for giving these beautiful pieces to us readers and putting a lot of hard work in it but ur hard work pays off i must say u r a fabulous writer and yes rushing to read ur another story and will comment soon on that too

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