TS: Kaun Apna, Kaun Paraya (Part3- Page17) - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: -Villete-

Hey! It was a great read! I liked how you kept the story simple and the dialogues true to their characters without much taam-jhaam. If only, Rohan could have been this understanding in real life too 😆

Deepika, for a change, was nice to Sameer since day 1! I absolutely loved the fact that you gave Sameer a chance to tell his (about his childhood) and give Rohan an idea about where he's coming from. In return, Rohan's empathy for Sameer and his topper mind brainstorming and trying to come up with ideas to reunite the two lovers were indeed sibling goals. Oh, and Rohan hinting at Preeti 😉

I could completely visualize Sameer's desperation, melancholy as well as the talk between the brothers! Oh and did I tell you that my favorite part was that Dadi and Keshav were missing from the scene, albeit a few references here and there!😆
Now, that would be an ideal world!
Sameer's finally found a confidante in Delhi and I'm definitely looking forward to how their camaraderie extends beyond the Naina issue as well. I enjoyed reading every last bit of it! Continue real soon, Samaina_1990! Looking forward to it. And could you please pm me whenever you update next?


Hi Villete! Thanks dear!! Yeah...I wanted the story to focus more on Rohan-Sameer and how he actually helps in Samaina reunion and their secret conversations...
Sach me yaar- wahan Dadi n Keshav (Komolika part 2 hain dono)...aur yahan Taiji ki teekhi nazar...dono ki life me toofan aaye pade hain...would definitely PM you on the update! 😃😃
Again thanks for the motivation dear!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

this was awesome
I would love to watch this kind of bonding of Rohan n sameer soon On show
if possible write the nxt part too
loved it


Thanks dear...me too...Rohan ke kuch to dialogues aayein...mumma's boy ko zara Sameer se milwao...ladai-vadai hi ho chahe😃😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: .Khamosh.

This was amazing Surbhi 👏
Every emotions beautifully portrayed
Loved the conversation b/w Sameer and Rohan
I wish something like this could happen in the show too
Totally worth reading 😊
Please update the next part soon
Thanks for the PM


Thanks a ton yaar!! Glad you enjoyed the story n could relate with it so well! Would update soon!! 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
Wow what an imagination dear ... I really like how you developed preeti rohan story ... Am very much excited for their story to kick start soon on serial as well. .. i like both of them as a couple
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yaar Sur... Pehla question... usime kyun continue kiya? why not another page? I really wanted to hit "Like" but 2 baar possible nai...

Dil me ghanti, muh se seeti sab baj gai...!! Woohoo!! 😳😳
Kya update diya hai... Meri to smile ruk hi nai rahi...!! 😃

Arjun ko sab blackmail karne pe tule hue hai... Khsithi ne Sameer se karvaya, Maine Naina se aur ab tumne Shefali se... Hahaahaa... 😆😆😆 Aur koi potential bacha hai?

Sameer being happy on seeing sasurji was so damn cute.. .and then the confusion ke dream me bhi villains... haha... Aur finally when he sees Naina, and realizes its not dream but the most beautiful reality... God... My heartbeat stopped and then jumped with joy... It was AMAZING...!!

And that hug... Oh my... Aisa laga jaise I can feel all their feelings... ☺️

Preeti's enquiry about Rohan... hehe... Preeti blushing would be a sight to see... no wonder Sameer was surpised... And Mr. Timetable to bahot pahoncha hua nikla... pehli mulakaat me hi "Dil le lo"... 😉

LOVED IT... Totally... Completely.. Absolutely... ❤️

First update padhke dil me tamanna thi ke Samaina mil jaaye... aur kya dhamaakedar tarike se milvaya hai tumne Sur... 👏

Ek aur update milega kya...?? TS to three shot bhi ho sakta hai na... Third update on "Dilwalo ki Dilli me Romance" 😳
Edited by moumita04 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
Its Aweeesooomeee...
How I wish something like this happened in the shooowww😳

nailed it gall!!!!!!

now jaldi se update ur new storyyy
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
How did I miss Part 2 - just read it now 😃 -- it is so visually appealing that I cannot but wish for such scenes
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
loved the second part too..
the way how u brought them to delhi was too good idea..
nice update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
Hi Surbhi, very nice part 2. The temple scene was so sweet and the Naina in Delhi was such a big surprise! Rohan definitely used his topper brain to organise all this. And you gave us the beginning of Preehan too.. so many lovely bits all coming together!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
awwwsuch a cute update it was
finally gang met
how cute was Sam n preeti ka convo also Rohan n Sam ka bhi
aah dono tarah barabr khi hain.. lol..
loved it

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