New FF: tum meri ho part 16 (pg 53) April 30 updated; no pms for this - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: paagalbandar



Thank you 😆 Bold and aashiq mijaj Sameer lol. I don't know if anyone noticed on the forum but, I feel that even Sameer in the show is aashiq mijaz and a bit bold for his time lol...if you see the romeo juliet scene, he was avoiding kissing Swathi...however he was quite fast at jamao haq on Naina...even when she pulled her hand back, he grabbed it so hard and was very close to kissing her...in that time, this was very bold step 😆 even without realizing if he can do that, i am only imagining him after he realizes his feelings for her hahahha😆 i think show ka sameer, naina ke maanne ke baad, if not this much, aisa kooch na kooch toh zaroor karega😉 because boys will be boys😉



Yes. I remember that hand kiss attempt 😆
And that was the time when he thought that Naina actually wanted him to kiss her hands. But once he saw Naina getting furious about it and she made clear that she is doesn't like all that at all; everything like that is shadi ke bad 😆 .. he is been very cautious around her. Galti se gaal touch karne par bhi pani pani ho gaya tha LoL

Well. As you said that was way before he had any feelings for Naina.. now that he loves her and moreover is self aware about it... we will see his passionate side too 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

wow thats so intense and passionate ...Sameer in his full form and Naina just couldn't escape this time☺️

Beautiful writing by you and the swing part was really very well written...keep up the good work👏😃



thank you dear😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: oneandone

Very nice. Keep writing.



thank you😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Oh God ye Sameer jaan le lega Naina ki..he's so passionate about her☺️

I want to see what happens next..I want d next update nowww..jaldi update kro pleej😆



thank you...jaan nahin le sakta, fir woh khood mar jayega😆
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Amazing part. Loved naughty Sameer! Hoping to see some.of these scenes in the show after Naina forgives Sameer.
Looking forward to the next part.
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What a beautiful story pls update soon waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Buddy We r Eagerly waiting for u r Update...

Please make it as soon as possible...
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Hey guys, i am back with another update...Please like as much as you can and leave in your commments...lot of people are reading it, but as just mere spectators, not participating...not fair, please like or comment...thank you.

Part 4

After what happened at the park, Naina was feeling so nervous, scared, shy all at the same to. She couldn't decide how to go into the class. She didn't know how was she going to face him without blushing in front of all. But there was no choice because as studious as she was, she had to be in the class.

At the class:
Swathi had already arrived at the class. She looked at Sameer and smiled. He also smiled back at her. For both of them it was a victory smile as their plan to get Naina alone with Sameer worked. Sameer, M & P, all were sitting in their seats. M & P were chatting away, and Sameer was absent mindedly listening to their conversation but, his eyes were at the door waiting for his Naina.

Finally, Naina entered the classroom. Naina was so nervous, she had butterflies in her stomach from all the new things that were happening with Sameer. She did not even have the gutts to look in the direction of Sameer. She just entered the classroom without even looking in his direction, her eyes looking at the floor, she slowly walked to her desk next to Swathi and just sat on her seat. Sameer kept starring at her passionately as if his eyes were romancing her in their own way. Naina on the other hand, was just pretending to look at her book. Swathi noticed that Sameer kept looking at Naina, while Naina was avoiding him totally.

Swathi coughed to get attention of Naina, and smirked towards Sameer.
Swathi (spoke softly): accha Naina, aisa kya hua ki tu nazar utha ke bhi nahin dekh rahi hai?
Naina: choop kar Swathi, mein tujhse koi baat nahin karna chahti
Swathi: are par meine kya kiya?
Naina: tumne kya kiya, yeh tum pooch rahi ho?
Swathi: accha theek hai, par kamse kam meri taraf dekh ke toh baat kar.
Swathi was trying to get Naina to look up by initiating conversation, so that when she looks up she can see Sameer looking at her. Sameer was sitting in the next bench to Swathi on the boy's side so he was pleading Swathi with his eyes to get Naina to look up.

Naina: Nahin dekhna mujhe, mujhe padhne de
Though Naina was not looking in Sameer's direction, she knew from side glances that, he was doing isharas to swathi.

Naina was scribbling something on her book so, Swathi took away her pen. And Naina started reaching to get the pen from Swathi's hands. In this tussle, Pen fell near Sameer's feet.
Naina saw where the Pen fell, and saw how Sameer was starring at her. Naina quickly looked away from him in nervousness.
Naina: dekha meri pen giradi, jaah ab leke aa...
Swathi: mein kyon leke aaun, tussel tune ki thi meine nai...
Naina: Swathi bakwaas mat kar, meri pen lake de mujhe...mein notes kaise likhungi...
Swathi: nahin leke aaungi jaa (in fake angry tone, and just looked away from her)

Sameer saw all the happened, he saw the pen at his feet. He saw this as an opportunity to go near her again.

He slowly grabbed the pen from near his feet. Slowly got up from his seat and started walking to where Naina was seated. While he was walking, he kept starring at her while she just kept looking down without realizing he was approaching her.

Sameer reached where Naina was seated. He stood there, and starred down at her while fiddling with her pen in his hands. She felt his presence but, she didn't have the gutts to face him and look up at him. He realized her nervousness but, he couldn't resist the chance of teasing her.

He bent down trying to look at her eyes, slowly bringing the pen towards where her hands were on the desk. His other hand went to the back of her chair, holding her chair in place so she didn't have a place to escape. He was preety much towering her from the side. He put the pen on the desk, and whispered in her ear.

Sameer (whispered): Naina, Yelo tumhari pen
Naina felt his breath on her face from the side, and she knew that if she even turned slightly, her face might hit his face or her lips might collide with his cheek. Naina shivered a little but, she just kept looking down to where he put her pen on the desk, and started rubbing her hands together on the desk.

Sameer (whispered): meri taraf dekhogi bhi nahin
Naina nodded in a no while still looking down...
Sameer noticed that she was nervous, and understood her shyness.
Sameer (whispered): Don't worry, mein aisa kooch nahin karunga joh tum soch ke dar rahi ho...relax

Naina felt so shy realizing what he said. But she still did not look up at him. If she was not in class, she would have covered her blushing face.
Sameer (whispered with so much passion in his voice): Nainaaa
Naina (whispered while looking down fiddling with her pen): Sameer please go

He turned his face to look at her face from the side, smiled looking at her blushed up face.
He stood straight, looked at her nervous face one more time, and walked back to his seat smirking. He knew she was a very shy girl, he knew he was affecting her.

But he also knew that she was different, she would not be able to handle if he did what he had running in his mind. Things he did so far was not even a trailer of what he wanted to do with her. But he had contained himself for her sake.

Finally the class began and all started paying attention to the class. While Sameer kept starring at Naina throughout.

Bell rang and all started to leave for the next period. It was the free/games period. All boys and girls went to the ground. Boys as usual were interested in playing cricket, while the girls were playing their own games. While playing games, Sameer kept looking towards Naina, and Naina kept looking away from him.

He kept smirking seeing his effect on the girl while she kept avoiding his gaze. Sometimes he looked at her and she was looking away, sometimes she looked at him and he was looking away. Both knew they loved each other but, it was not that easy to confess for a girl because it was "yeh un dino ki baat hai".

Both of them were walking side by side in the playground. Naina with her bunch of friends, while Sameer with his boys. Sameer was looking at her and she was every now and than peaking at him. Sameer's eyes were conveying his love, and were begging for her to confess...while her eyes were showing love but, her shyness was preventing her from confessing.

Song in the background (song depicting Naina's state):
Both of them were looking at each other walking parallel in their own groups.

Mera dil bhi kitna paagal hai,
yeh pyaar toh tum se karta hai,

Mera dil bhi kitna paagal hai
yeh pyaar toh tum se karta hai,
par saamne jab tum aate ho,
kooch bhi kehne se darta hai...

ae mere saajah, oh mere saajan
sajan sajan mere sajan...


That's it for today guys...dream about Sameer and Naina hahaha :) Leave your comments and likes...even silent members please participate to encourage writers :)

Ridz



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Posted: 7 years ago
#60
Breathtaking!!! But itta chotu sa??

Yeh dil mange more 😳 Much more 😉

Please update next part soon 😊

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