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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hmmm😳...




Those eyes had seen me 😳...engulfed me in those deep stares of passion...i smouldered under the brunt of that heat..ā˜ŗļø!!..i quivered with my racing heart that the sensations he aroused in me was unnerving , his flirtious gaze adorned me, touched me deeply that my own legs couldnt bear the impact of his sweet assault...😳..i trembled...i fluttered at my own likely desires that trumped me towards him.ā˜ŗļø..i was flowing, melting in the warmth of his heavenly smile that was adoring me...that i was helpless for the blaze he ignited in me..😳...i blushed profusely with that painful pleasure invading my body n senses😳...i felt his closeness enveloping me,stroking me with sheer madness that i tried to hide myself by lowering ...breaking that brush of contact...those fleeting glances that held me HIS CAPTIVE..ā¤ļø.but i couldnt resist my tempting heart that willingly wanted to be HIS ..!!i glowed in his overwhelming exhibit of LOVE that i felt satiated ...that my whole being...my soul was just only crafted for him...!Yes i belong to Him...n only Him!😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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OK I am litleraly blushing ā˜ŗļø
And officially dead

How do you write such beautiful nd passionate things ..

Aise na mujhe tum dekho siney se lagalunga palko me chipalunga tumhe dil me basa lungaa!!!

šŸ‘



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Posted: 7 years ago
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you are too talented mehran.More than the scene your writing makes the day.No doubt scene was good but you made it more passionate & romantic.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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OMG!! too good Meher!! No words to describe how beautifully you articulated Naina's feelings.. Loved it!! Loved it !!Loved it!!

I hope we get something where we can see Sameer completely smitten by her...not sure when we will get to see that ...or will we ever get to see that ... 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Ohh god !sich a beautiful analysis.i m new here and reply first timr on yr post but everyday i m waiting fr yr post u make the episode more special fr us
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kavila

OK I am litleraly blushing ā˜ŗļø

And officially dead

How do you write such beautiful nd passionate things ..

Aise na mujhe tum dekho siney se lagalunga palko me chipalunga tumhe dil me basa lungaa!!!

šŸ‘




Thanx Kavila...😃
I hope u dnt fire Sam ...šŸ˜† ok he is swooning on Naina literallyšŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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They stood there looking into eyes of each other.There was nothing to say and that nothing meant everything.
His review about her tying hair and keeping it open and her coy glances...Both the soul catch on fire there.
Fire in his eyes and Ice on her lips...And the world blushes.😳

Di! I felt like reading a page from Naina's trip diary.That was too good and effects of words are going to linger for a bit long.ā˜ŗļø
Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ruchi3179

you are too talented mehran.More than the scene your writing makes the day.No doubt scene was good but you made it more passionate & romantic.


Thanks Ruchi for ur kind words😃...the words easily flow when the scene has that spark n magic ...!!
Call me meher..We r old formuties naa...No formality!😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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i am cross with you why such an awesome post .but why such a small post😔 yeh saraasar nainsaafi hai milordšŸ˜†
sameer ki feelings bhi likho .plsss😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Meheraan.. tune kya kiyaaašŸ˜†
Dat scene was already making us blush..us par se tum..uff!! Kya ghazab likhti ho😳

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