Le jaa mujhe saath tere,pt 10 on pg 70,teaser on 74,27/1 - Page 4

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Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Author's note-based on original yhm with a bit of twist as per -RKB-'s suggestion.

LE JAA MUJHE SAATH TERE

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Raman-bahut achcha khel khela tumne,miss iyer.main toh tumhe bholi samjhta tha but tum itni shatir niklogi ,umeed nahi thi mujhe. Thoda saa bhi bura nahi lagaa naa tumhe khud ko iss tarah bhejte hue.he said in sheer anger clapping his hand .

Ishita-shut up Mr bhalla,don't u dare to say this,main muh tod dungi tumhara.

Raman clutched her hair and said-just shup up,warna jaan le lunga .abhi bhi tum mein itni himmat hai ,ki tum mujhse nazarein mila kar baat kar rahin ho.kitni ghatiya ho.paison ke liye koi itna kaise gir sakta hai.mujhe toh lagta tha,ki shagun duniya mein sabse ghatiya hai,but tumne toh uska record bhi tod diya aur phir se saabit kar diya,ki saari ladkiyan bikau hoti hai,bas keemat lagane ki zarurat hoti hai.

Ishita wiped her tears and said pushing him-pata nahi main tumse baat bhi kyun kar rahi hoon.mujhe tumhe koi safai dene ki zarurat nahi,mera sach main jaanti hoon aur mere parent ko mujh par bharosha hai ,I don't owe u an explanation,Mr bhalla.

Raman-tumne joh mere saath,meri ruhi ke saath kiya hai,usse maaf nahi karunga main aur bhoolunga toh kabhi nahi .tumhari zindagi maut se badtar naa bana di,toh tum bhi kya yaad rakhogi,ki koi mila tha tumhe ,Raman Kumar bhalla naam ka,main tumhe barbaad kar dunga,Dr ishita iyer,aur yeh vada hai mera tumse. He was saying when they heard ruhi crying bitterly.

Both turned and saw ashgun taking ruhi to the car while she was crying bitterly to let her go.

She opened her arms and cried-papa,mujhe apne saath le chalo,mujhe shagun mumma ke saath nahi jaana .she was crying making ishra cry with her,but shagun put her in the car and drive away.

Ishra look at each other and Raman said-i hate u ,Ishita iyer .

Ishita-it goes without saying,the feeling is mutual Mr Raman Kumar bhalla.she said and both walked in opposite direction.

That's all,enjoy.

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