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Posted: 5 years ago

Lovely update .

Loved jallu puttar .

Update next soon .

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Posted: 5 years ago

Part 14


Fabulous Update


Raman hears Ishita's voice and ask Romi where he is

when he arrives he admires Ishita but then suddenly he hears two men

talking about her and he gets angry

beats the two men

Mani on the other hand is not there and Raman tells Ishita

that these men were talking ill about her

in the car Ishita defends Raman

while he is lost in his love's thoughts

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Posted: 5 years ago

Amazing update

Mani shani yaha b a gyq

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Posted: 5 years ago

Hello buddies!..... I hope you all remember me. First of all i m really really sorry for coming this late. Actually i was caught up with work. But today I got new update of my story. I promise now onwards i will update it regularly.


Recap:

This story is about ishra. In this story raman and ishita both are business rivals and hate each other from the bottom of their Heart. But destiny played its game, due to aomw circumstances both bound to each other by business deal. Slowly they started to meet regularly for business meeting. Ishra developed feelings for each other but ishita is still in denial mode about her feelings for raman. On the other hand raman realised his feelings for her and decided to make her fall in love with him. He loves her but also very possessive about her when mani came in the scene. So stay tuned to know more about their love story...


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Posted: 5 years ago

Hello buddies!..... I hope you all remember me. First of all i m really really sorry for coming this late. Actually i was caught up with work. But today I got new update of my story. I promise now onwards i will update it regularly.


Recap:

This story is about ishra. In this story raman and ishita both are business rivals and hate each other from the bottom of their Heart. But destiny played its game, due to aomw circumstances both bound to each other by business deal. Slowly they started to meet regularly for business meeting. Ishra developed feelings for each other but ishita is still in denial mode about her feelings for raman. On the other hand raman realised his feelings for her and decided to make her fall in love with him. He loves her but also very possessive about her when mani came in the scene. So stay tuned to know more about their love story...

Part 15...

At night raman was working on his laptop when romi simmi and rinki came in his room and sits beside him. Raman glanced at them at was looking surprised seeing them together in his room cause he knows this trio always be together when they have some hidden motive. Simmi and rinki were staring at him while romi was smiling sheepishly while trying hard to stop his laughter. Raman looked at them one by one and raised his one eyebrows asking them their reason for their behavior


Raman : kya.... Ghur kya rhe ho mujhe... Isse pehle mujhe dekha nhi kya...


Simmi: kya bhai..... Hume kyu ni btaya apne


Rinki(dramatically): haan haan.... Hum toh kuch lgte hi nhi hai bhai ke....


Raman was still confused what they were asking about .


Raman: what are you saying....kya nhi btaya mene tumhe......


Simmi: about our bhabhi..... You told romi about bhabhi but not us....


Rinki: bhai this is not fair .....we also have right to know about bhabhi.....


Raman: who bhabhi.... There is nothing simmi.... And who told you all this...


Rinki: romi bhabi told us and we know who is our bhabhi....


Raman looked at her and asked them giving suspicious look: kon...


Simmi: the one and only ishita iyer..... I must say bhai your choice is superb..... She is so beautiful..... Mamma would definitely accept her as her daughter in law.


Rinki: bhai we want to meet her please... Please bhai....


Raman glared romi and spoke shooting daggers at him: you told them about ishita.....


Romi got scared and was about to run away but Raman caught hold on him and clutched his neck.


Romi : bhai please bhai.... Sorry bhai.....


Raman: jhut kyu bola unko.....


Romi: bhai please isme jhut kya hai.... You yourself self know that i m not lying. I now please leave me, its hurting.


Raman left him pushing him away. And sat in between simmi and rinki and spoke with little disappointment


Raman: its not full truth.... Its just i have feelings for her....


Simmi exclaimed in happiness and spoke hugging him from side : i mso happy bhai... Finally you have feelings for a girl..... M sure noone girl will reject you cause you are one the eligible bachelor of the delhi. Or should i say country....


Rinki: bhai i want to meet my ishita bhabhi....


Raman under his breath: pehele mai khud toh mill lu madrasan kya pta vo mani meri madrasan ko pta le.......


Simmi: bhai did you tell her that you love her....

Before raman could speak romi answerd her saying


Romi: what! ...propose vo bhi The ishita iyer ko....bhai don't have that much courage...


Rinki hit him lightly on his forearm and spoke encouraging raman....


Rinki: so what if she is the great ishita iyer...

My bhai is also the mighty Raman bhalla. The great RKB....

She said feeling proud of raman. Raman spoke getting up from his seat .


Raman: hold on your horses..... I will handle everything on my own.... You all now go from here.....


Simmi: kyu bhai.... Apko bhabhi se baat krni hai....


Raman : nahi.... I have office work to do....


Rinki: vese bhai apne bhabhi ko call kyu ni krte.... Agar aap unko call ni kroge unse baat nhi kroge roh unko pta kese lgega ki apke dil mein kya hai.... Aur vese bhi aap directly jakr unko propose to nhi kr skte apko pehele unse baat krna shuru krna pdega.....


Romi: vese bhai rinki shi bol rhi hai aap call kro bhabhi ko.... Hum apke sath hai....

He said making Raman look at him and Raman hold his ear said making him wincing in pain


Raman: i told you i will handle..... Toh tum log jao.... Yeh mai decide kruga ki usko call krni hai ya nhi aur mai tum logo k samne kyu call kru usko.....


Romi: ahhh.....bhai please leave me... Its paining.... Aap krlo call akele main hum jaa rhe hain.... Please leave me...

Raman left him and trio went out from his room making raman think of making call to ishita...


Raman( st) : should i call ishita.... What if she is think otherwise. Moreover she doesn't like me much.... So what if she doesn't like me i like her and will tell her that i want to talk to her..... Nhi nhi i can't ask directly but what i will talk.... Should i ask her for date tomorrow... Yes! I will ask her for date....


Thinking so raman called her. Ishita was in her room doing some random work when her phone buzzed. She glanced at her phone and saw raman's name flashing on screen. She thought why did he called her so late. She picked it


Ishita: hello!


Raman: hello! ishita...


Ishita: yes boliye raman.....koi jruri kaam tha


Raman: vo ishita.... Mujhe tumse baat krni thi kuch


Ishita: boliye kya bolna hai


Raman: mujhe actually kuch puchna tha.... Kya tum kal free ho....


Ishita frowned listening to him and said : why are you asking so....


Raman: just ese hi..... Tum btao toh.....


Ishita: nhi mai mani k sath ja rhi hu bahar....


Raman: aur aaj bhi tum uss mani shani k sath thi.... Kyu ja rhi ho tum.... Kya jruri kaam hai uske sath.....


Raman asked in irritated tone without realizing what is he saying.


Ishita( angrily ) : do you have any problems with it.... And why should I tell you. I don't need your permission raman.... And yes you are no-one to question me.... And am not answerable to you.....


Raman: acha toh i m noone to you.....just wait and watch i m coming, will tell you who i am....


Ishita( confused): where are you coming..


Before she could spoke more he disconnect the call without listening her.


Ishita (angrily): what the hell he thinks of himself. Phone cut kr diya...


After good half an hour Raman was standing a little far from iyer mansion. He First thought to go inside directly but then thought what he will answer to ishita's parents thinking so he decided to sneakily inside ishita's room.


Raman(st): just wait and watch ishita iyer... Am coming....


He climbed up pipe to reach inside ishita's room and was struggling to get hold on railing of her room's balcony .


On the other side ishita was unaware of the fact that raman's act was taking shower leisurely. She came out wrapping her voluptuous body in puffy white towel. Her hairs was wet and opened. Water droplets were dripping through her hair wetting her towel from waist. She went mirror and started to apply moisturiser on her body. Unmindful of the fact that a pair of eyes were watching her every move. Raman was watching her without blinking his eyes. His mouth was flung open seeing her epitome of pure natural beauty. And was pat his back inwardly at his choice. But soon his trance broke by his phone sounds which was heard by ishita also. Raman immediately hid behind the curtain. She instantly looked around and found some movement in curtain. She got scared and asked in shivering voice.


Ishita: who's there..... Kon hai vha....

She picked nearby vase to hit the person whith shaking hands. Raman eyes popped up seeing her coming towards him holding vase in her hand. She was about to hit him when he caught her in mid and turned her aroundin swift moment and pinned her to the wall. Vase fell down on floor making cracked sound. Ishita's eyes were shut and mouth was shut by raman as he clamped his right hand on her mouth.


Ishita ws struggling to get out of his hold when he whispered in her ears.


Raman: madrasan! its me...raman.... Don't make noise......


Ishita opened her eyes wide hearing him and glared him angrily. Then she realised their position and her state that she had towel wrapped around her body. She immediately pushed him back with all her might and covered her front with her hands. He fall down on her bed and was about to speak further when she spoke spoke shooting daggers at him like she will kill him then and there with mere glares


Ishita( angrily): what the hell is this raman...

What are u doing here That.. That too in my room.... Don't you have manners you bloody moron.... Just go from here otherwise i will shout....


Raman smirked seeing her and spoke adjusting on her bed more comfortably.


Raman: shout.....i don't care....


Ishita looked at him all shocked seeing his audacity and spoke gritting her teeth : you... Just get out from my room....


Raman gets down from tge bed and spoke coming closer to her: agr nhi gya toh.... Toh kya krogi....


Ishita got scared seeing him coming closer she started to go backward still covering her front with her hands and raman was coming forward to her. She was about to get disbalanced due to water which was dripping from her hair when Raman caught her hand in mean time and pulled her towards himself with jerk. She landed on his hard chest . He hold her from waist and looked at her with a smile on his face.


Ishita had closed her eyes with the sudden move. Her breathing became uneven smelling tge masculine smell of his scent. She opened her eyes slowly and looked at him and found him smiling at her lovingly. Yes she saw love in his eyes but she doesn't want to trust him so easily moreover she doesn't even know that what she saw on his eyes for her or not. His smile has something ofr which anyone can die happily. They werw staring at each other when they heard the knock on the door which brings back them from their trance. She widened her eyes in fear of someone from her family is out of her room and raman is also present here what if someone sees them like that that too in her room. She looked at Raman glaring him and spoke in low tone of voice while wriggling to come out from his hold


Ishita: leave me raman ko in hai bahr.....


But Raman was enjoying her plight and was smiling at her not leaving her for once but pulled her more closer saying


Raman: mai nhi chhoduga.... Jo krna hai krlo


Ishita tried to push him away bit he again pulled her strongly and tightened his hold on her waist.


Ishita: koi hai raman bahr aap jao yahaan se agr kisi ne dekh liya toh problem ho jayegi.... Aur chhodo mujhe......


Raman: dekhta hai to hmm dekhne de..... Agr dekh bhi liya toh usme hmara hi fyada hai.... Vo sochega ki hum ek dusre se pyaar krte hain....


Ishita: are you mad or what... Leave me raman....vrna mai chilaugi..

Raman smirked hearing her and spoke while bringing his face closer to her: chilao... Mene kb roka hai....


Ishita: dekho mai sach mein chilaugi.....


Raman touched her lips with his thumb and looked in her eyes and spoke caressing her lips sensuously: tum chilao.....udhr tumhari awaj bahr jayegi aur idhr mai tumhara muh bnd kruga with my very own personal way.


the knock on the door was growing with each passing second and then they listened mihika's voice she came there listening to the sound of something breaking down.


Mihika: akka... What happened..... Kya hua tha... Kuch tutne ki awaj ayi thi....


Inside the room ishita had left with no option she couldn't create any scene here .


Ishita(glaring raman) : haan mihiku.... Kuch nhi hua hai... Vo vase gir gya tha mujhse when i was coming out of the washroom.....

You don't worry am fine.... I m changing...... Tum jao


Raman smirked victoriously and spoke : good girl.... You know what ishita.... You are very beautiful and i love this attitude of yours....


Ishita( angrily): now get out of my place....


Raman : itni jldi kya hai......aur vese bhi mai tumhe yeh btane aya tha ki tum kl uss mani shani k sath khin nhi ja rhi ho...


Ishita: aur yeh kehne wale aap kon hote ho.....


Raman: tumhara husband.....


Ishita looked at him all shocked listening to him she was about to speak something when he cut her off


Raman: future husband....


Ishita: kya bakwass kr rhe ho aap.... Aur chodo mujhe ab....


Raman: bakwas nhi hai jaan.... Sach hai... I madly in love with you......


Ishita opened her mouth in o shape and was shocked beyond limits. She was unable to understand his words. She was unable to comprehend the meaning of his words. She was shocked as couldn't believe that the man who misbehaved with herin past that too harshly and was finding the way to let her down is declaring that he is in love with her. Was it his next trap for her or something else. She was still in her thinking mode when raman kissed on her forehead lovingly that made her close her eyes involuntarily . She was still in his arms forgetting the World and her state.


When raman caressed her arm length with his hand slowly and cupped her face and spoke lovingly looking into her eyes


Raman: you must be thinking that why suddenly i m here that too in your room in dark mid night. Actually when you said that you are going out with abhimanyu i couldn't stop myself from coming to your place and confessing my love for you. What if that mani shani would have proposed you tomorrow... no no... I can't take that risk. So i came before him. Now come now be a good girl say yes to me. Please jaan.... I can't live without you......you know what i can't describe in words what you have become for me.... I accept that i was not good with you before but now i m changed for you i am changed for your love..... Please ishita naa mat kehna......


Ps: thats it for today. I hope you all like it and please leave your response as comment. Your comments really encourage me for writing more

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Posted: 5 years ago

A very beautiful update Raman is so jealous and afraid that he may lose Ishita that he came to her house in midnight itself to confess please update next part soon to know will Ishita accept Raman proposal or not

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Posted: 5 years ago

Awesome update

Eagerly waiting for next part

Plz continue soon

Nd thanks for pm

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Posted: 5 years ago

Super awesome update

Update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Superb update loving this Raman a lot

Please update soonish please

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Posted: 5 years ago

Lovely update

Romi informed abt Ishita to simmi and Rinki..

Raman got jealous bcoz of mani and proposed Ishita..

Waiting for Ishitas answer..

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

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